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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一), d( z9 ^, a! Z* Q# [
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     One day I always remember6 R* x/ L3 I! z$ x; {
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  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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8 Z1 Q4 [0 Y8 J: W1 Aexactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to9 e6 ^$ ?' u* o# ~

" Z* y4 ]: t( B. a+ Fput up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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$ Q& o' _" v2 Q+ x, U) Y* n little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,, D; P) y8 A: A3 o# W" d' R
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every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid
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was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely 8 ]9 r# l, M! v& v+ F% h$ @! N
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trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since & ^" m+ W% u3 |3 C3 m
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that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing, q! v/ W  Z" p' K  D, J4 O7 J
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on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard ; ?4 R# X1 ?7 c) G% E. [, l

; F2 G* H0 {  R5 m4 b# mfor me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my , ?0 L. k2 c9 L

7 a$ H+ ^8 A4 P5 s' G8 xdeaest daughter.3 F7 n) v* U) w5 P/ P

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After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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" @# D: y$ l% @* C! u1 x; B. U[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!0 Y0 K; M% i1 V1 k% ~2 Z0 _
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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