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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)
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     One day I always remember4 G0 {8 |/ P7 E: }% i: X2 m

6 K- Z: Q/ E5 f( w/ }/ Y" n  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was: j, e% S, F1 X8 `  q
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exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my' _+ z  B5 x; A! F/ `# i

/ n$ S8 x) v% O, _& n% Y# U- [ little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,) u/ a0 f$ {% \9 d9 l

+ H- p, l5 M3 ^9 B' J* L every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid0 T2 o6 C5 b6 M0 E: ]+ {. w$ b

' |( J' ?9 ]+ s! f% q, c3 D was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely
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trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since
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1 Y" c3 i, u; }9 `* _' h) Dthat date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing
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on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard . L( f( s* D4 I2 t6 e1 r7 \; e" I; e5 t
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for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my
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deaest daughter.# W5 v! a- p. I: h" @; C& u7 x3 ?. d: d4 e; q
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% v# u3 k" G' O% kAfter so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.
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[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!
' k' |1 s: F' d3 _. J3 h4 r. T  cwe should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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