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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)! A0 P( D/ J# p1 n7 G
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     One day I always remember
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  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was: ]; T5 r- G3 [0 W5 I1 J: c& A- i9 r

! u  Q" g( A7 Cexactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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* Q; j5 e7 P6 \& rput up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,; o; a9 G2 ?9 \) w% m, o( Q

' V( x$ u. e! a8 P every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid, \% R' T: Z/ c. ~: A3 ]
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was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely 1 h# y. D2 b4 l
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trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since * c+ }) b, q; k8 }' L( |- M

. p. S* u' ]; Mthat date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing+ u0 d/ K5 P2 h+ ]
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on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard   o$ r7 ]( P# f' G. B

, T! y" I2 D7 N4 s" k) `; Z( ^for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my
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+ A1 U" w0 s- n; e/ udeaest daughter.
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After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will" d' Y9 T: }/ S2 y2 Q" Z. N- C
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never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.% D+ P/ r# c$ N4 X( a8 x

  g" w! }( F7 E- g8 }5 y[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!
5 {+ Z$ Z+ A. S; Q! ?" N& K! ~we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
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