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茉莉花开

抛砖之作！（我英语测试时的作文之一）
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　　　　　One day I always remember
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　　July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to

put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my

little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid

was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely

trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since
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) ^' Z4 W5 k. K( [! e9 q& @that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing
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( r0 }: A- z* b) f# V/ m" k6 o on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard
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for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my

, B# R- g" R7 J: \6 B$ Udeaest daughter.

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" {% E/ z- s" t* QAfter so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will

never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.

+ s7 [% y( {9 _* T: Z. a& j[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]

mercurybird

good better best!!!!!!
, Y. ]" F2 E3 Owe should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!

OliveOil

It is great!

connie

GREAT！