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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)
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; c! {, p) j8 V' c     One day I always remember
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& D% |# u9 w2 _/ K' W% n& R) U  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was: F! b1 I/ |, [9 m3 G# x9 C

- m% P% S8 B" R! S' y. Aexactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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2 b" P. l; _. [ little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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( K3 K7 v  p+ z5 q6 A1 J" f! b every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid
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was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely
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2 W/ l# V2 d# W2 p0 G( `trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since 0 G8 A* i4 L& y+ A* R4 _6 D% I  M8 P
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that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing
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on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard
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for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my
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deaest daughter.3 O* ?7 {6 W- k& E6 p

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1 P8 q! m8 y: E% b, oAfter so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.+ R. G3 d+ _1 ~. o; S
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[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!( A. D7 U4 X7 u6 P0 N& M' q# [3 d
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
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