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茉莉花开

抛砖之作！（我英语测试时的作文之一）
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* R& k$ P$ M5 _& [) e　　　　　One day I always remember

　　July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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6 }4 t7 H/ |0 P- H+ P little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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2 T2 ^, i1 Z4 X- S" s every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid
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( p1 [' s2 e1 t: ?4 i" l# D# a was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely

0 y9 S* r; b4 Q4 D8 @trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since

that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing
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9 @1 S$ }; \- V on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard

' e# E1 g) \1 V% f4 ?5 M" Zfor me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my

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After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will

: h/ G& q' @% b7 ?' _$ C, l never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.
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/ c8 k3 W9 V0 B3 U! F6 z[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]

mercurybird

good better best!!!!!!
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!

OliveOil

It is great!

connie

GREAT！