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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)
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     One day I always remember1 X# B  b; f0 G, I! e

. C5 r# j. W- e. s! B6 _, c% {& |! S  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to1 \/ L8 T/ X+ q) Z1 H; Z
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put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my) X% @# g9 l. {
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little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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/ r- z& m6 ?6 B: h( Q( H1 g+ T every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid
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was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely 9 K# A) I1 P6 Z* Q2 ?

& s$ D" h; t1 qtrusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since ( w" e. e" v3 m0 D. Y. z9 Y

! F8 d  Y3 e1 C- D  S. j" [. Ithat date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing% s" D' ]% D' ]! m- |7 X4 h
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on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard
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for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my $ G; r! g- S6 v$ r# C, E
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deaest daughter.* J1 [9 \: r& Q- q2 n6 t

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; ]/ j$ j7 W# RAfter so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will) m0 H# e3 c4 w7 W5 N" P2 ~9 b

1 i8 {" ^, Y8 I* E! S never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.
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[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!6 U7 W: u; ^& Q) P) u; i; X
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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