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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)
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6 z$ e5 `) ]9 r; }8 W     One day I always remember6 L8 ], O0 I# {
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  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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2 {* r1 r& g# n( ?8 {( u, texactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my! c; A0 w  X6 u8 |( E! \
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little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely
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2 I" \7 s; x% q3 L1 M. j; v) Ctrusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since " ?8 W6 v4 n( f

* Z8 }9 s: b/ s. E$ e5 I0 ~# f- y1 P, Dthat date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing
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on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard
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deaest daughter.
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, T+ N6 ?+ y6 Q$ k) S: }After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.% m) X, Z9 O1 c5 _$ i. O( c4 m

& w- S+ r6 v3 f% ?[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!% }# O1 R1 E+ G( _# n: o: E3 Y
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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