作文竞赛第一贴！！

茉莉花开

抛砖之作！（我英语测试时的作文之一）
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) s" A, `! a) N　　　　　One day I always remember
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　　July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to

put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my

2 V1 _- f9 y6 n% U; L little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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: n  N: g2 m; ~4 {5 `3 \* Z; z6 m every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid

was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely

" P# r8 U) w# U4 A% K: Dtrusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since

; I7 S. x% L( x( y" [& lthat date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing
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on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard
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) d9 P9 E( U$ w* C/ Zfor me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my

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After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.
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[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]

mercurybird

good better best!!!!!!
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!

OliveOil

It is great!

connie

GREAT！