埃德蒙顿华人社区-Edmonton China

 找回密码
 注册
查看: 2648|回复: 18

翁美女写给老杨的情书,翻译惊人 ZT

[复制链接]
鲜花(1) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2007-5-7 10:25 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
你是老杨的话,你会怎么回?翁不愧为才女,英文情书写的如此煽情,就是钟馗看了也能变小生了.不知道是哪位大仙翻译的,把英文翻译成如此水平也是不容易了。赞
( s2 f" i" |" c. I. l0 X
: T8 E  a4 a. BCold here, icy cold there. You belong to neither, leaves have  g' _8 p+ j" t# \  Q7 _8 q5 x' r
withered.Your face is pale and blue, a tearful smile. Something in your2 t1 j9 k  [" s7 k( }9 [
eyes,whispers words of last good-bye. My heart sinks down, tears surge, A( M+ @9 J) D/ u* ?4 }
out.5 r- W! d2 E, p; @- i

+ l" O, \7 J$ V. O2 V, d8 K此处冷,彼处更冷。枯叶凋零,君属何人。君面惨淡忧郁,含泪而笑。君热泪盈5 x& i  y4 G: z( t" R0 g3 v/ M
眶,喃喃自语,难言再见。妾心沉落,泪涌似涛。( O; O4 b- @5 g  K/ ^! S

, J/ ]) G2 l6 K! U; D/ R, ~! [Hot summer. Cheerful Cocktail. You took my hand. We fled into another6 n0 s! d% F" e8 b$ c* p& Q% D4 F
world. You sat by my side, long hair tied behind, cool and killing.) e( L1 b' b7 m; X
Smile floating on the lemonade, soft and smooth. How I was? amazed. Your  ?5 p5 n9 N% d# B
face looked like the cover of the magazine. My head spin. Youled my
- f8 b5 ^" ]2 b4 W1 P* E, Khand, danced along the crazy theme.
; `7 }& e- N0 f& M$ }+ \! t! z+ P2 n8 m- p; ]2 d: d" v
酷夏。仍忆鸡尾酒会。君执妾手,共享二人世界。君坐妾之侧,长发束于脑后,英% {. Z5 _3 A6 x* r+ K7 k$ \* |
姿勃发。笑容荡漾。妾讶君面尤类杂志封面。旋转,君执妾手,疯狂舞曲。
0 k1 U: v7 D' x4 k  r2 c, W- t1 Q+ o$ d! J7 `3 }
Light vied with wine, elegance mixed with fragrance, laughing covered by+ {6 A) K& O. F& f8 G, C+ [2 A
greetings, the crowed was busy at handshaking. You stood there, eyes on8 V' K0 a- j; G4 A; v1 ~
me. I trembled at the sparkles, brighter than the light. A masterpiece" ^& y5 Z* o) o' c* [
from God, I felt dizzy. We were not near, yet we were together.
+ |& D4 U7 D# j/ h
# e/ \* u( z$ r, v& I" f0 H灯酒相辉,芳雅相应,祝辞笑声此起彼伏,芸芸皆劳碌于握手。君站立一旁,美目
% B6 c. }5 K, D0 Q8 n4 w探妾。妾莹灯下颤颤而立。此必上帝之杰作,使晕眩。虽妾与君相隔甚远,然心相! ^0 S  I. H, x; V( g5 f  S' X
近。3 I/ l, F  f1 }1 p7 g3 t- ]

( C( N' j9 o7 r  b, l$ d. ]+ h/ xDays ended. You said, you would wait for me at th e Alps side. We would* X6 @) A, _; _! R& \+ v1 B2 t
ski against snowflakes dancing in the sky. I gave no answer but a4 t% v( Q: `9 |
good-bye to accompany your flight. Gone was the plane, I suddenly tasted, r4 r# J2 d; Q9 s& s
my pain. I knew I had been silly and stupid, you were in my heart, I
1 Q$ `$ O* n4 b6 w$ o% M7 ~0 dshouldn’t have hidden in the dark. I tried to forget your- t3 W1 C) \3 {0 p+ g. C
disappointment. I made believe sometime someday, I would tell you, I# D4 D& r& i9 @, A" D$ I# c8 c
feel all the same.
- S& ~* p3 M6 h8 ?$ M( ?0 j0 p3 S$ P; o  d0 k: @2 T7 P0 Q
往日已去。君云君将于阿尔卑斯山畔待妾,滑雪于雪花飞舞之天空下。妾欲说还3 M- R: k$ X1 \1 R- ^
休,但嘱祝福。飞机渐逝,妾心将苦。妾深知妾之愚蠹,君已窃妾心,妾当不可漠
% _0 g, Y4 e5 O, f" j  d+ R1 d
6 e0 d7 K9 Y" ]" O: h于暗中彷徨。妾尝试忘君之失,然无可善终。妾信某日某时,妾将告君妾心永驻。
, L# Y5 _& p2 f  M# u, S2 D
2 \4 f) C# c  ^' h9 o$ O8 L$ dMy thought struggled at confessing, somehow hesitation ended in
4 t6 \, p# G6 o  ~# J1 H" |flinching. I continued my role of a fool, clinched to my maiden pride,; T  f+ u- w: X
yet secretly indulged in your promise of the white land -- snow! M4 J- H( e/ H0 q7 e6 R2 Q4 ^2 }
measuring down to us, in your arms I am lifted up. The chiming of
7 R: H! y8 ^* T. f6 q+ R. lChristmas bell!
8 c" q' e& _  o; V+ {
- ^4 w3 j! P5 |$ m- S  y: K妾于忏悔中挣扎,不时退缩,犹豫。妾愚于处子之婚,然潜纵于君之诺。白雪皑
( M6 `* D0 r8 ]7 z% ^) Z3 b皑,君挽妾身,妾意甚欢,共听圣诞钟声。; y& N( S( n% W, C& x5 S

! \" g0 z5 t) ^, z9 e0 L) UThe bell died in the patter of rain, from hell came the laughing of
$ l! e" [+ Z3 }% y* M) m5 iSatan at my brain. Tearful smile, swallowed by the darkness. How could I# t" y! V) f0 O% I  c! q- B" `! C$ f
trace your hair to wipe your tears? My hands reached out, catching
, y9 o; i+ v  b$ w6 h" Pnothing but a raindrop, on a leaf that had withered.9 c# }% W+ p6 p" {' f

6 a* w- ?. p7 p; t0 G% u% e& Y钟声忽止于急雨,乃听撒旦之笑声。含泪微笑,黑暗相伴。妾欲寻君之发擦君之泪, k6 b  v+ u& f. \
而不可。妾伸手欲触,无他,但枯叶一雨滴耳。, E6 O8 H2 d5 ~, n; o3 m0 g7 G

5 f5 j% l2 c5 G/ b8 RSnowflakes have melted into water, we are no more together.
$ a0 n4 R: S) `) V; [+ w0 b- \" }雪花渐融,妾与君仍天各一方
鲜花(634) 鸡蛋(5)
发表于 2007-5-7 10:32 | 显示全部楼层
有人问过洋人吗?这段英文咋样?
鲜花(1535) 鸡蛋(28)
发表于 2007-5-7 10:46 | 显示全部楼层
刚问过俺同事,说翻译得甚好。long hair tied behind, cool and killing,但老外惟一不理解这句,他问俺80多岁的中国人都有那么长的头发吗?俺无言以对~
鲜花(634) 鸡蛋(5)
发表于 2007-5-7 10:49 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
原帖由 猪刀小试 于 2007-5-7 11:46 发表 ! b9 j) e2 x2 L/ g' Q# M; Y
刚问过俺同事,说翻译得甚好。long hair tied behind, cool and killing,但老外惟一不理解这句,他问俺80多岁的中国人都有那么长的头发吗?俺无言以对~

0 `$ Q: d5 {" f! z( K你们同事怎么能看出翻译好坏来?
鲜花(7) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2007-5-7 11:02 | 显示全部楼层
翁氏果然不凡。译者更是大材小用,即使胡适再生也不过如此。建议老杨娶(请)来当版主正合适。
理袁律师事务所
鲜花(1535) 鸡蛋(28)
发表于 2007-5-7 12:02 | 显示全部楼层
原帖由 三思 于 2007-5-7 11:49 发表 & @3 \; Y2 Y. X8 x' r- I6 x

* a  X) {6 G; W4 L$ D你们同事怎么能看出翻译好坏来?
: P0 o% B' u1 F3 J

' a0 g' K$ F) Q& h: n! o" K0 a! u俺直接把英文提炼,打印出来给老外,她们一见就挑大拇指~
鲜花(10) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2007-5-7 14:26 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
你又知道是人家的情书!
鲜花(28) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2007-5-8 20:13 | 显示全部楼层
为什么要翻译成妾啊,那么别扭。
- R& S8 h& [9 t3 X不过比奴强点。
鲜花(129) 鸡蛋(1)
发表于 2007-5-8 20:27 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
看了这篇情书,偶忍不住的想到了老杨脸上的老年斑。
鲜花(0) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2007-5-8 20:37 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
此老杨非彼老杨也!
鲜花(1) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2007-5-8 21:33 | 显示全部楼层
原帖由 bigwood 于 2007-5-8 21:37 发表 2 |7 r* G4 _- s6 B* w' c4 P/ A, w
此老杨非彼老杨也!
4 V  U5 M* G0 S7 S( Z0 }1 d

# B1 E/ f7 L* C0 J相信地球人都知道吧~~1 O' ^/ K# [5 {: p
9 e' {% N* `$ ]) H- M6 i$ x* m
其实原文标题里写的是“杨振宁”,俺故意改滴~~
鲜花(634) 鸡蛋(5)
发表于 2007-5-8 22:07 | 显示全部楼层
原帖由 猪刀小试 于 2007-5-7 13:02 发表 9 Y) R/ ]/ {" s! Z9 @. a- ^
2 [3 m  O' n5 f' v* O/ ?/ H
* ^6 P7 M* e: T! u, C
俺直接把英文提炼,打印出来给老外,她们一见就挑大拇指~
- A6 F, x( h' n3 b7 E4 S
是不是她们以为你写的情书呢,就算文字晦涩也不在意,挑大拇指,意思是:今天晚上没问题!
鲜花(1535) 鸡蛋(28)
发表于 2007-5-8 22:23 | 显示全部楼层
同言同羽 置业良晨
原帖由 三思 于 2007-5-8 23:07 发表
7 A/ ?8 \+ I& Q" h, ~$ g  Z9 g
/ ^- L% Q; |8 ?是不是她们以为你写的情书呢,就算文字晦涩也不在意,挑大拇指,意思是:今天晚上没问题!

1 Z6 K. R8 a+ C& q3 j# k- ?% q7 z' _  k' W4 Z. c5 s* _! c* a
我们公司有俩女的,那叫一个胖,一个人能占一条机动车道,如果俩人并排走路出门,门口的50st就该塞车了。
鲜花(1) 鸡蛋(0)
 楼主| 发表于 2007-5-8 22:32 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
原帖由 猪刀小试 于 2007-5-8 23:23 发表 $ n7 _  C" Q. B5 Y- V1 \' K

. t# E; O) e+ G& _" C& K. @
. y% Y( T6 r: ~0 w) G8 g5 g: ]1 J; G我们公司有俩女的,那叫一个胖,一个人能占一条机动车道,如果俩人并排走路出门,门口的50st就该塞车了。
7 J3 C' M& T1 ?/ M
) y) F7 m! v0 _, r! c
猪兄可怜,严重慰问ing~~
鲜花(21) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2007-5-9 19:08 | 显示全部楼层
偶就不明白,不过就那么一个糟老头子,这女人怎么会搞得这么煽情.
鲜花(21) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2007-5-9 19:09 | 显示全部楼层
翻译得也让人起鸡皮疙瘩,什么君啊妾的,奴性十足.
鲜花(21) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2007-5-9 19:10 | 显示全部楼层
同言同羽 置业良晨
怎么着也得男的给女的写情书吧,合着芳龄女子给糟老头子写情书?
$ I/ ~; e9 P6 a; m# N# _晕.
鲜花(1535) 鸡蛋(28)
发表于 2007-5-9 21:00 | 显示全部楼层
原帖由 听雪安妮 于 2007-5-9 20:10 发表
! ?, v  f5 s7 x- p" v: r- H; t怎么着也得男的给女的写情书吧,合着芳龄女子给糟老头子写情书?
6 v( T: B4 s+ b+ W1 F晕.

- K# f) {+ D# N% H  {! q, o5 ?9 A% O2 a( E9 O' H, `1 t: v) i: A
不看年纪,看地位~
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2007-5-9 21:01 | 显示全部楼层
初看标题,我还以为翁美女是嗡嗡呢
您需要登录后才可以回帖 登录 | 注册

本版积分规则

联系我们|小黑屋|手机版|Archiver|埃德蒙顿中文网

GMT-7, 2026-8-28 19:35 , Processed in 0.227441 second(s), 28 queries , Gzip On, APC On.

Powered by Discuz! X3.4

Copyright © 2001-2021, Tencent Cloud.

快速回复 返回顶部 返回列表