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翁美女写给老杨的情书,翻译惊人 ZT

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发表于 2007-5-7 10:25 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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你是老杨的话,你会怎么回?翁不愧为才女,英文情书写的如此煽情,就是钟馗看了也能变小生了.不知道是哪位大仙翻译的,把英文翻译成如此水平也是不容易了。赞1 ]' X' `: B" [

9 L" V+ `( e- @8 ECold here, icy cold there. You belong to neither, leaves have
; L3 P; w, u0 `0 ]9 P/ d- Zwithered.Your face is pale and blue, a tearful smile. Something in your
5 a- @+ v  m% N+ Y, C8 Oeyes,whispers words of last good-bye. My heart sinks down, tears surge
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3 Y5 e: v* J! `8 P& D+ z此处冷,彼处更冷。枯叶凋零,君属何人。君面惨淡忧郁,含泪而笑。君热泪盈
. H5 \' a) q( N7 P眶,喃喃自语,难言再见。妾心沉落,泪涌似涛。1 F1 R0 m, J% i6 Q, j
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Hot summer. Cheerful Cocktail. You took my hand. We fled into another/ {. t- x/ v4 R7 }. a
world. You sat by my side, long hair tied behind, cool and killing.
- A1 b6 Y2 \+ t( E" ]  t+ gSmile floating on the lemonade, soft and smooth. How I was? amazed. Your- H- `. n- [" X* p! [! ?* J
face looked like the cover of the magazine. My head spin. Youled my. [9 G, I/ E- \0 r8 d3 D
hand, danced along the crazy theme.
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" R/ r% S: D& t+ F5 a4 y' h酷夏。仍忆鸡尾酒会。君执妾手,共享二人世界。君坐妾之侧,长发束于脑后,英
2 M. H  G! {! I5 ~7 a$ T/ l姿勃发。笑容荡漾。妾讶君面尤类杂志封面。旋转,君执妾手,疯狂舞曲。3 K! D7 j9 x+ i6 |* ~8 n8 D
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Light vied with wine, elegance mixed with fragrance, laughing covered by
( c2 E  ]) t! T: H+ Lgreetings, the crowed was busy at handshaking. You stood there, eyes on
) ]! `/ A; n0 T, |me. I trembled at the sparkles, brighter than the light. A masterpiece
  u& G- R6 F  E# e' X) Lfrom God, I felt dizzy. We were not near, yet we were together.+ a# @+ x( O4 b1 S5 t1 f* Z

: q6 y8 j) g! f4 \, `- E. y灯酒相辉,芳雅相应,祝辞笑声此起彼伏,芸芸皆劳碌于握手。君站立一旁,美目9 ?+ M3 i. F5 r/ b( m) B& A
探妾。妾莹灯下颤颤而立。此必上帝之杰作,使晕眩。虽妾与君相隔甚远,然心相* w6 R* s9 V0 b2 l9 l
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Days ended. You said, you would wait for me at th e Alps side. We would/ H, Y+ ?) A4 T3 w" q( o$ o4 p- z
ski against snowflakes dancing in the sky. I gave no answer but a2 v( _0 V4 Z3 o- Q
good-bye to accompany your flight. Gone was the plane, I suddenly tasted! T+ c- q8 l7 u7 W0 B( p* f
my pain. I knew I had been silly and stupid, you were in my heart, I
( b& X1 p: l/ [" y- x" xshouldn’t have hidden in the dark. I tried to forget your
& z1 I3 p. f3 A' E+ {+ Cdisappointment. I made believe sometime someday, I would tell you, I
2 G$ ]2 A5 y( r6 O& W  Ufeel all the same.: v' ^( F7 [; q

! |( W/ S# f9 d8 {往日已去。君云君将于阿尔卑斯山畔待妾,滑雪于雪花飞舞之天空下。妾欲说还
) o* E6 ]8 N. `! q: D休,但嘱祝福。飞机渐逝,妾心将苦。妾深知妾之愚蠹,君已窃妾心,妾当不可漠
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/ d7 d( }! B+ U于暗中彷徨。妾尝试忘君之失,然无可善终。妾信某日某时,妾将告君妾心永驻。
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9 }9 z6 d0 B6 }; V8 P+ ZMy thought struggled at confessing, somehow hesitation ended in. ]% v3 j& R9 z1 S
flinching. I continued my role of a fool, clinched to my maiden pride," J5 u. Z. |( {* Q. f
yet secretly indulged in your promise of the white land -- snow: D3 O) g( n! _% x, ?" Q
measuring down to us, in your arms I am lifted up. The chiming of0 l# R0 g' S! F) e" R
Christmas bell!/ v' n( \# F( S/ y

0 p2 l; k1 R* ~1 O+ C$ k. H3 M妾于忏悔中挣扎,不时退缩,犹豫。妾愚于处子之婚,然潜纵于君之诺。白雪皑
6 ^5 t% v8 [* ]皑,君挽妾身,妾意甚欢,共听圣诞钟声。( s4 R; ]5 H- I+ P1 B
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The bell died in the patter of rain, from hell came the laughing of2 n# U, V, ~4 ~. H$ q
Satan at my brain. Tearful smile, swallowed by the darkness. How could I% x2 R/ |7 Z/ G1 S  x3 J; o
trace your hair to wipe your tears? My hands reached out, catching; Z! p6 o7 Q, i% J/ i' E& B/ b
nothing but a raindrop, on a leaf that had withered.
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钟声忽止于急雨,乃听撒旦之笑声。含泪微笑,黑暗相伴。妾欲寻君之发擦君之泪/ Y% y: w4 @+ V8 R! P6 U) e
而不可。妾伸手欲触,无他,但枯叶一雨滴耳。
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( m% h" j& e" `" u; x- x3 Z! nSnowflakes have melted into water, we are no more together.  K& I' z( b& b/ G" @8 U
雪花渐融,妾与君仍天各一方
鲜花(634) 鸡蛋(5)
发表于 2007-5-7 10:32 | 显示全部楼层
有人问过洋人吗?这段英文咋样?
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鲜花(1535) 鸡蛋(28)
发表于 2007-5-7 10:46 | 显示全部楼层
刚问过俺同事,说翻译得甚好。long hair tied behind, cool and killing,但老外惟一不理解这句,他问俺80多岁的中国人都有那么长的头发吗?俺无言以对~
大型搬家
鲜花(634) 鸡蛋(5)
发表于 2007-5-7 10:49 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
原帖由 猪刀小试 于 2007-5-7 11:46 发表
* Q( S) m% f& e1 M3 c$ U6 w& h刚问过俺同事,说翻译得甚好。long hair tied behind, cool and killing,但老外惟一不理解这句,他问俺80多岁的中国人都有那么长的头发吗?俺无言以对~

6 f$ v% [" e3 x8 h2 n' s你们同事怎么能看出翻译好坏来?
理袁律师事务所
鲜花(7) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2007-5-7 11:02 | 显示全部楼层
翁氏果然不凡。译者更是大材小用,即使胡适再生也不过如此。建议老杨娶(请)来当版主正合适。
鲜花(1535) 鸡蛋(28)
发表于 2007-5-7 12:02 | 显示全部楼层
原帖由 三思 于 2007-5-7 11:49 发表 7 I; x$ E/ Q+ @

) }9 Z  b  ^/ \! _" y5 U3 }你们同事怎么能看出翻译好坏来?

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5 s) p; b$ A# Q$ u* O5 l俺直接把英文提炼,打印出来给老外,她们一见就挑大拇指~
鲜花(10) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2007-5-7 14:26 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
你又知道是人家的情书!
鲜花(28) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2007-5-8 20:13 | 显示全部楼层
为什么要翻译成妾啊,那么别扭。) B% b; |! f3 m2 y
不过比奴强点。
鲜花(129) 鸡蛋(1)
发表于 2007-5-8 20:27 | 显示全部楼层
看了这篇情书,偶忍不住的想到了老杨脸上的老年斑。
鲜花(0) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2007-5-8 20:37 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
此老杨非彼老杨也!
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 楼主| 发表于 2007-5-8 21:33 | 显示全部楼层
原帖由 bigwood 于 2007-5-8 21:37 发表 1 m: m1 a( x* H. n, m4 u
此老杨非彼老杨也!

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: e# e0 ?' S. P/ E( N6 r相信地球人都知道吧~~: `; N' J* K" S* g( ?0 c
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其实原文标题里写的是“杨振宁”,俺故意改滴~~
鲜花(634) 鸡蛋(5)
发表于 2007-5-8 22:07 | 显示全部楼层
原帖由 猪刀小试 于 2007-5-7 13:02 发表 ! N; ~% p' s3 C5 v
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- D% J5 o8 r- a' `/ c; v俺直接把英文提炼,打印出来给老外,她们一见就挑大拇指~

! f) v* S; ^1 k3 l) ]/ ?是不是她们以为你写的情书呢,就算文字晦涩也不在意,挑大拇指,意思是:今天晚上没问题!
鲜花(1535) 鸡蛋(28)
发表于 2007-5-8 22:23 | 显示全部楼层
同言同羽 置业良晨
原帖由 三思 于 2007-5-8 23:07 发表
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% _2 p: v& c6 s0 n/ ]1 @/ ~: K. k是不是她们以为你写的情书呢,就算文字晦涩也不在意,挑大拇指,意思是:今天晚上没问题!

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  |& N0 b+ I1 k' E) i! Q我们公司有俩女的,那叫一个胖,一个人能占一条机动车道,如果俩人并排走路出门,门口的50st就该塞车了。
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 楼主| 发表于 2007-5-8 22:32 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
原帖由 猪刀小试 于 2007-5-8 23:23 发表 5 i2 [! h& T$ T( L, C2 T+ ~
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我们公司有俩女的,那叫一个胖,一个人能占一条机动车道,如果俩人并排走路出门,门口的50st就该塞车了。
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猪兄可怜,严重慰问ing~~
鲜花(21) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2007-5-9 19:08 | 显示全部楼层
偶就不明白,不过就那么一个糟老头子,这女人怎么会搞得这么煽情.
大型搬家
鲜花(21) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2007-5-9 19:09 | 显示全部楼层
翻译得也让人起鸡皮疙瘩,什么君啊妾的,奴性十足.
理袁律师事务所
鲜花(21) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2007-5-9 19:10 | 显示全部楼层
同言同羽 置业良晨
怎么着也得男的给女的写情书吧,合着芳龄女子给糟老头子写情书?
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鲜花(1535) 鸡蛋(28)
发表于 2007-5-9 21:00 | 显示全部楼层
原帖由 听雪安妮 于 2007-5-9 20:10 发表 ) F" D# G- k: ~5 ^, M
怎么着也得男的给女的写情书吧,合着芳龄女子给糟老头子写情书?
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不看年纪,看地位~
鲜花(170) 鸡蛋(0)
发表于 2007-5-9 21:01 | 显示全部楼层
初看标题,我还以为翁美女是嗡嗡呢
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