我是第一次写英语故事，由于我来还没到一年，英语不是很好，请大家别小看我！ 3 j& @4 P- U8 k6 o, f 8 N8 M& m2 l, W+ a T H E S E V E N H O L Y B I R D A N D T H E H U N T E R. ~5 j k/ K" f* m7 [" X+ w' C
; n' t" ~; i2 Z% ` # y8 v6 v$ ~% \A long time ago,the world had seven birds.They lived in a big forest.This big forest had a small og cain.# H' H! ?6 J$ n5 M4 ^/ Y- @
The hunter lived in the log cabin.Every day,birds needed to the forest's lake bath.But one day,the hunter * T8 k& x- ~: ~ tsaw the birds.4 Z+ w5 d# F! d2 i: B4 x1 F
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) o$ B8 P8 s( r) C T H E S E V E N H O L Y B I R D S A N D T H E H U N T E R ! w& V0 i7 e8 T . z; E2 w' s! s3 X 4 Q+ T* v; n( d9 a) e$ `( x0 LA long time ago,the world had seven birds.They lived in a big forest.In the big forest, there was a small log cabin.6 `! Y( R- Q% c9 G' f
A hunter lived in the log cabin. Every day,birds needed to go to the lake in the forest to bathe themselves.But one day,the hunter ! A0 r: I7 y5 }$ H% N: I! ]saw the birds.
原帖由 紫色辣椒 于 2007-2-8 21:39 发表 4 R& A( O! z) `- `2 QA long time ago,the world had seven birds.They lived in a big forest.In the big forest。 there was a small log cabin.( I( O R3 q/ A {3 y" L
A hunter lived in the log cabin. Every day,birds needed to go to the lake in the forest to bathe themselves.But one day,the hunter 7 P9 C8 s! V: p1 \; d
saw the birds.
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9 |! \5 P1 _% C$ c* G2 X: I4 KThere was a small log cabin, and a hunter was living n there1 O7 f7 \4 O5 v1 [+ T
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会不会更好呀？我不知道。。可以54的我说 2 p4 v! \; P5 O 5 L/ H, H: t* y. r9 c+ ]* B还有。。用 needs 在那个地方才对吧？8 v* W6 V9 \: u- J/ v. s
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