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译文欣赏——沁园春·雪

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发表于 2004-10-8 01:25 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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译文欣赏——沁园春·雪$ x' x7 A, u: I# R
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5 i& X) L  \  ]  sSNOW
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                                           --to the tune of Chin Yuan Chun
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4 z% Q; Y8 {; {2 |4 G                                       February 1936
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6 i% o$ i1 G% P6 [  North country scene:
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/ c5 j$ W* s0 M9 I6 l8 T  A hundred leagues locked in ice,
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  A thousand leagues of whirling snow.
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+ i6 S8 o( t/ k6 l1 z+ p  F) v8 M( Q  Both sides of the Great Wall
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+ W( C! [$ k! p4 W: q  One single white immensity.
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  The Yellow River"s swift current. ~, a+ O5 n1 V6 F

+ P; y0 _* r% E' n/ L  Is stilled from end to end.
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) C& i5 x. X/ {. n  The mountains dance like silver snakes8 w3 b) s9 d% f8 d

+ a3 ?2 j/ h& K. u1 }  And the highlands* charge like wax-hued elephants,
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  Vying with heaven in stature.
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  On a fine day, the land,9 C& C  y. P* E& M

1 B) S' P4 r+ L8 V6 }  Clad in white, adorned in red,8 L8 ^% @# l/ p$ S7 \
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  Grows more enchanting.
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8 \' t0 u9 M: }+ h0 K: R1 J  This land so rich in beauty
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, n* q, f" q; M1 E' d5 }$ A  z5 W  Has made countless heroes bow in homage.* p* J4 ~$ j0 T' s0 [0 m* H

+ q, N, k; h) B3 M5 ~2 w; y' R$ C: k& P  But alas! Chin Shih-huang and Han Wu-ti/ r* C/ G; Y; p6 ?
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  Were lacking in literary grace,
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  And Tang Tai-tsung and Sung Tai-tsu6 o- o. m, y& @

% P6 b7 b0 S( s' O1 Z  Had little poetry in their souls;1 T: T. d. M& o, D5 P' [
  And Genghis Khan,
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5 \7 a" W( l0 `6 R  ]( q  Proud Son of Heaven for a day,
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- i/ z+ c% W; S; ^! I% }  b5 B+ Q* [  Knew only shooting eagles, bow outstretched
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5 B2 S! `5 v8 K! G# \" j# K( P3 k3 D  All are past and gone!
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3 `  ?# c9 A( z" g  For truly great men
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; t$ \- A! z2 ^& e" m0 M2 p  Look to this age alone.
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, [2 G5 Y# N; r$ q  *AUTHOR"S NOTE:
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& v& N$ t, Q! Y! k  The highlands are those of Shensi and Shansi.8 q1 N4 z: e; f& U0 T4 q) v) A, C- R

2 r! ?6 F5 J2 S+ X. S  沁园春 雪
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% l. Y$ q7 p4 S+ w' r5 D, N   北国风光千里冰封 万里雪飘 望长城内外 惟余莽莽$ N& q' _+ z7 Q& c" Y
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  大河上下 顿失滔滔 山舞银蛇 原驰蜡象 欲与天公试比高
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  江山如此多妖 引无数英雄竞折腰 惜秦皇汉武 略输文采9 N( d0 o0 [: S( d/ L' q
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  唐宗宋祖 稍逊风骚 一代天骄 成吉思汗 只识弯弓射大雕% T9 R3 ~* T# w- P( @' n
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  俱往矣 数风流人物 还看今朝
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[ Last edited by connie on 2004-10-8 at 02:30 AM ]
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发表于 2004-10-8 09:47 | 显示全部楼层
The Chinese is better than English!
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 楼主| 发表于 2004-10-8 21:39 | 显示全部楼层
Yes, absolutely!!!
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发表于 2004-10-10 12:48 | 显示全部楼层

YES, I LIKE CHINESE VERSION MORE

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发表于 2004-10-10 23:49 | 显示全部楼层
the English version like a shit.
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