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发表于 2015-2-28 15:35 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!
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8 b2 X' b$ `9 y0 dVEICHLE OPTIONS:
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Remote starter and heat blocker
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3 j0 z& O" [; f, H3 b! o- }7 lFour additional tires with rims$ c8 B& k  ]# [' Z: h; R
Air Conditioning 9 S7 W. \" g! t% V* B$ a
ABS Operation' ]. S6 `  S& z( l; z2 I5 N0 d3 ^( `
Tire pressure monitor system3 n/ \" {: x, ^" d
Information system/ o3 x8 V! i4 E2 b5 w
Central control locks,doors,windows1 a' P: Y* [, y1 K0 O3 P. x
Power locks
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Rear window defroster " F) j; N4 a" s; t
Bluetooth hands-free operation
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Airbag: driver
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Alarm
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**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**/ Q' ~! N1 R; B' ?- u/ ~# `
If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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Please call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca* P, H4 c! V; C
Pick up on March 18-22.
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发表于 2015-3-1 02:11 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 兰君子 于 2015-3-1 02:16 编辑
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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! . : F  ]& F% Y4 C: ?; x

( O. i) ^: ]$ A# KIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600., q. c3 S) ^6 _+ P: M8 @) \
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IF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR+ U8 [/ F" T, y
IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING 9 e/ N; z5 G! Y) [$ v. p% h. o
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发表于 2015-3-1 11:59 | 显示全部楼层
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发表于 2015-3-1 23:30 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
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发表于 2015-3-2 09:30 | 显示全部楼层
兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

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 楼主| 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50 | 显示全部楼层
Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."
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By the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)
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发表于 2015-3-2 11:26 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
* x: i3 |( {. B# u这就叫骚摊子的,可以跟摊主干一场
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哈哈,真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了
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发表于 2015-3-2 12:15 | 显示全部楼层
那么问题来了,现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了
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发表于 2015-3-3 11:02 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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: _1 Y7 }5 {' l+ Y+ ADue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

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发表于 2015-3-15 09:40 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
本帖最后由 兰君子 于 2015-3-15 10:05 编辑 0 Y8 l7 L0 Y+ }% e
zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
# O! h- u% s$ V) \( [+ SThanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...
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Sorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you. 1 T/ C8 z' V: ^* s
You may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
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Last, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:$ N1 g2 a+ Y' b1 F. m  o

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There are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.8 Y$ {3 v, I$ T

7 B7 G; I& P, W; FSorry to give you "HARSH" again.
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