SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!

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  k+ S. {( ]# qAutomatic transmission
Silver
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Two sets of keys and remote keyless entry
% ]$ H) H9 z3 fFour additional tires with rims
Air Conditioning
  I! F6 l7 H8 c& N/ S5 iABS Operation
Tire pressure monitor system
. W' [/ Y/ t9 j+ Y* IInformation system
/ A9 l* L  Y& LCentral control locks,doors,windows
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$ X6 Y+ e3 R4 H- l8 x9 [Power doors
$ G* a8 K7 w& KPower windows
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Bluetooth hands-free operation
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2 i$ I2 k" J( M$ H; KAirbag: driver
9 f6 \- a, E3 h5 VAirbag: passenger
Airbag: side
Alarm
Fog lights
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4 G4 S+ o3 {0 \6 x**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
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Please call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
Pick up on March 18-22.
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兰君子

SALE A CAR

* b7 m) N" V' `. iDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .
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If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

2 f  R1 m# ~- [# h1 WIF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
+ e7 U  F1 g+ I IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING

layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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; q% p/ q& t% I2 x9 M+ l, MDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."
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% O& B- K9 B2 d/ }0 V/ x6 sBy the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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" L" o& r9 i+ s, H8 A3 q; EDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

Fcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

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zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

' \$ @  h' C9 y  e: WSorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
4 u/ V( Z( M! H8 p  ?. Z, LYou may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
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Last, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:

"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".

There are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.
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. D* S* j8 |6 O. P. {Sorry to give you "HARSH" again.
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