SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!
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VEICHLE OPTIONS:
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Remote starter and heat blocker
% F$ z6 ^3 l- o6 n0 iTwo sets of keys and remote keyless entry
3 Q) e& F3 P0 z$ o" BFour additional tires with rims
Air Conditioning
7 W$ G  R( E1 i' F2 a  MABS Operation
Tire pressure monitor system
0 a# a, ]1 w& q9 |6 oInformation system
Central control locks,doors,windows
Power locks
0 D# p; G1 q3 u3 M9 M" rPower mirrors
0 f9 h: H6 t! l3 f" s1 l; O+ GPower doors
Power windows
7 {. o/ t# Z3 h$ v4 m$ L7 e* @Child safety locks
Rear window defroster
Bluetooth hands-free operation
Radio
% l. x) r4 I/ FAirbag: driver
Airbag: passenger
9 U" U! a2 W! NAirbag: side
Alarm
Fog lights

+ H3 D( |8 [8 b**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
1 B& A# F. k& u) D- l+ rIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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) [2 l! ]' G6 Q: R+ Y" k9 r* lPlease call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
# T! `! @) N4 V" b: Q6 e$ [; jPick up on March 18-22.
# k( N; M# l7 E* _9 p% eCash only please :)
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兰君子

SALE A CAR
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& x) F/ j! v0 W& aDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .
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If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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IF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING

layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR
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4 W# S+ m  s2 i# [* d0 UDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."

By the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
, D' p' H$ V( X这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

- m) Y: i  w7 c: i0 X哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

: x7 @3 ]7 ]# f- j! OFcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
$ h& j7 j2 T6 ?- E& t/ D4 u& RThanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

Sorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
8 i8 Q. \0 k6 \* P  Y6 ?You may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
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Last, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:

"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".
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9 k+ b, f5 i$ r9 nThere are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.

Sorry to give you "HARSH" again.

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