SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!

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Automatic transmission
Silver
) j9 \0 d! J6 {, CRemote starter and heat blocker
Two sets of keys and remote keyless entry
Four additional tires with rims
3 Q7 Q4 W! G3 }! d( ~! V$ V1 Z8 MAir Conditioning
' M+ G0 N7 |8 s; e0 \! x; u3 BABS Operation
. w+ @; m% |5 k, b' ^( P) ATire pressure monitor system
% i+ J) X( v! yInformation system
" k  n8 P! T& T: l& eCentral control locks,doors,windows
Power locks
Power mirrors
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Child safety locks
# a4 ]! I4 d; F' P! f* ERear window defroster
Bluetooth hands-free operation
Radio
Airbag: driver
Airbag: passenger
" R4 t! m; G, d  T" U! k7 SAirbag: side
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Fog lights
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, \5 X  F: I0 A( w1 f7 x/ r**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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# Y7 s  C$ w0 N4 E, e/ ?Please call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
9 j: l+ p2 }; q+ gPick up on March 18-22.
Cash only please :)

兰君子

SALE A CAR
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8 d) R. S' g8 v' P5 `Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .

9 U0 K% W/ O7 G4 yIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

- {( s! K* N, u3 _% ?% b3 |7 g4 l: s* KIF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
, N, S5 y. `" n* @& p! C IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING

layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."
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By the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
# r1 C( k  D5 u3 nSALE A CAR

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( @. g: L  A: e) L7 oFcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

) Y/ E9 |% P: Z6 `' VSorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
$ Y$ {0 s4 U1 p0 B/ W) z; }You may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
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Last, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:
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"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".

There are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.
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Sorry to give you "HARSH" again.

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