SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!
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Automatic transmission
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Two sets of keys and remote keyless entry
% L* [8 ]" @' w2 IFour additional tires with rims
/ |" _% o: C4 T$ q8 EAir Conditioning
5 T1 j% U6 T% Q, ]6 JABS Operation
Tire pressure monitor system
Information system
0 N& z! j, o5 |5 [$ ]4 a2 u/ g/ UCentral control locks,doors,windows
$ `! t8 {% D- pPower locks
: w/ P5 ~) R; g% l( D. m0 I* n, oPower mirrors
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Power windows
Child safety locks
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Bluetooth hands-free operation
; Y0 V$ T( y( V# RRadio
; D4 o) ^7 G  V$ g3 B! R/ ]* z4 aAirbag: driver
Airbag: passenger
Airbag: side
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" \( h5 v, z4 I0 e& kFog lights

**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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0 [. z; t' C! IPlease call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
( Y+ j; ^& V7 a0 U2 jPick up on March 18-22.
Cash only please :)
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兰君子

SALE A CAR
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8 m7 Q" I. E( aDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .
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If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

4 o! ^/ |, |- Z1 u7 u9 GIF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
( O5 N3 m: Z( G: ~ IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING

layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR
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- T7 Y0 I. i4 R- f# w, M5 KDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."
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By the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
. @$ |' }% i# R8 w# }/ M  O2 }- }这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

5 m& f* r/ V  L哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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6 o  f( [; r4 l# _Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

Fcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

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zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
4 h9 D. a2 V* P" V9 y4 e/ ]. `& t$ aThanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

Sorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
You may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
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$ Y$ ~. ?$ Y7 z& D% f$ {' x- eLast, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:

! ~# ]2 e) A+ x7 C& Y6 O"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".

There are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.
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Sorry to give you "HARSH" again.

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