SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!
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. O* G; f+ F' z7 @7 z9 ~; CAutomatic transmission
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+ w5 R6 U7 [' B8 O# `9 n3 ORemote starter and heat blocker
Two sets of keys and remote keyless entry
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Air Conditioning
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- N  {. S4 f- |+ P3 O% pTire pressure monitor system
9 D1 k$ o! I4 _: G0 C8 mInformation system
6 ?8 A8 F+ y( h3 e- A0 eCentral control locks,doors,windows
Power locks
9 a0 Q/ e  f# U3 yPower mirrors
4 g" p* d" O, \! D6 bPower doors
  {& h5 H! ^1 Q# r* rPower windows
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% D7 W8 j; R: z! nRear window defroster
0 E" r$ _  |; I* o1 u: _Bluetooth hands-free operation
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Airbag: driver
: [  |/ l+ M1 v; LAirbag: passenger
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" r) j4 h8 w  T: f3 |5 I2 b/ gAlarm
Fog lights

" ^, L/ y* {" [7 ?- a- ^**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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Please call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
Pick up on March 18-22.
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兰君子

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SALE A CAR
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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .
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, l: i0 Y3 ~' h7 C7 }: B4 JIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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( Y4 N, I  h7 K2 SIF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
0 H3 b1 A+ b& x: y! |! k5 c# b7 U5 w( n IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING
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layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
$ @4 K6 w* R! }1 @SALE A CAR

0 h: ~8 N! T3 p3 l, p0 v4 RDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

) s5 i) z3 s( F  N4 u* R这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."
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urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
# X! V3 ]) d0 [0 Y这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

+ O4 G& z4 l0 t% J* H; lFcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
* ]( a9 m1 U3 P4 i8 l! J) TThanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

" D3 z/ A* i! h4 i6 `Sorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
You may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
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Last, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:
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9 ^. t: G9 L# _; y1 Z6 n* P"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".

There are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.
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Sorry to give you "HARSH" again.
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