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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006, + A. o0 q6 L) |% ?
I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  
* A: b$ L+ M, c0 V7 p; dDreamers$ O+ w5 Z+ }5 X) Y
Savages' F& [5 `  H2 V$ Y& ~. f( c; v7 a7 E
Poets
1 Y6 d1 G; |9 ?. a/ ~Builders of canoes,
% ]  Z- V6 o5 e6 p7 s; dBlack smiths2 J0 \4 F) K- ]; s
Murderers,; p0 [- B# ]+ z
Risk takers,
8 z, \' \: J" z8 G6 P/ @+ rMy mind is full of curiosity and wonder 7 L9 _- g9 y! w4 X& S
As I think of what could be.
0 \$ A! ]. Z& I5 @8 D4 rThe world is so big to me 0 j  ~8 @. u1 `
I wonder what it means to be# N* ?8 D( l$ P0 R/ `
I looked up at the star and smiled
( r! [' m  x4 S, \# `They flashed as they have heard all I have read. - P2 }1 A  E4 ]9 A  L. u

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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。  Z+ ]+ e+ a# C+ f: Y# g
评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。
0 n9 l; C: f5 @. m/ j顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,# H" _% `, }9 D- K+ Y
A poor old Guy;8 r" Z- ^! g  Z* R1 b' x7 Y
Legs in a bonfire,  b: ^: t$ F+ p  U3 O9 v1 K
Head in the sky2 x/ d: \" C/ R+ S" U+ m9 \
Lonely, with the feel of betray/ }! g: Q5 s* U$ B8 q8 _2 |
Heart empty and hollow
& J' D4 y* B( N& g( @7 ^Alone I stand) T0 b" C/ D$ B4 @% q! c
I am useless to all
1 D1 }7 R& K+ n6 J3 p  @But I wish I were a dove # [$ \8 j& Z2 C& p
Giving myself to the world, to the fire% l1 ^( W- F5 H& A2 i2 p
I feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind
* @# G4 `  ]  k$ w! T4 ]* ^8 ^I sent prayers to my god" k7 ^, F$ U6 U$ F
Though he does not answer2 G$ _6 L: |4 o; s; t3 b" x
He bless me with the gift of hope
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。
- e+ h7 U: D+ X- h3 G% n. M) u加油加油,经常写写!
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