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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006,
( T2 E' Z9 l1 \0 }" t4 e/ m9 f! EI believe there must be creatures like ourselves  
" i3 [2 ?: B% _6 F( |' A: _9 ]+ A! Z! cDreamers! X( A- [& a2 O
Savages7 I7 V8 p  y. N
Poets
3 H- v: N: j0 x1 @- n! V6 OBuilders of canoes,
9 P. Y' L; l5 `7 X2 O1 w! OBlack smiths
/ n. ^+ L% _- {# bMurderers,
4 G" {! }/ l7 c- `2 {8 V8 H2 vRisk takers,
  d/ I  U  [: N- g; p8 {3 aMy mind is full of curiosity and wonder 9 V/ h, `$ ^# r" {( G0 f
As I think of what could be. 4 x) H& `% _4 u3 ^4 @& Q" @. b) `
The world is so big to me ' [' d# K' ?" V1 ^0 K
I wonder what it means to be
# f- P8 J/ g& K& {" |I looked up at the star and smiled " M/ {+ \+ c  q; L7 {0 t; n
They flashed as they have heard all I have read.
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。/ O$ X" y' C1 O5 }! P" r
评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。, \) E, x+ `# |) r+ B; d; f5 \9 J
顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,
, f1 o, S5 B, Z5 ^; E: [3 lA poor old Guy;  t" \- @3 Y& p. n
Legs in a bonfire,
! v  `) E; y1 ]3 i- R# j$ GHead in the sky
* P5 d5 C9 u" |' bLonely, with the feel of betray* s5 V2 _& b0 I  P
Heart empty and hollow. v4 e  q2 O# S) Q, p2 y5 R
Alone I stand
( ?9 N( W. V  UI am useless to all 3 u1 G+ _6 y" Z, _3 D% A  V7 j
But I wish I were a dove 9 k5 `) F* }8 _' z/ u
Giving myself to the world, to the fire
$ G& u) g$ v4 g# Q  [2 a1 BI feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind' t7 {. G( ]0 G  y. B) R
I sent prayers to my god8 f6 F6 I" L& u/ i  r
Though he does not answer
/ h- b0 Q. _9 V3 O% q6 g  g1 ZHe bless me with the gift of hope
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。
  }, T$ O) Q( a( ]$ i3 n加油加油,经常写写!
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