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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006, 9 r0 h- t$ I- e
I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  ! K, W0 w% V0 b  {
Dreamers# _( x7 i$ v4 {! z3 X( Y  s' H
Savages2 K- u1 z8 E9 B8 P( u
Poets
# ^7 j' L( g# o% @* |& aBuilders of canoes,
' ~  C# K& ^2 \, o. `4 ]Black smiths
3 J* K, |: w1 _$ R. \* q2 oMurderers,
% |: H$ W4 N, d6 t5 b6 f9 bRisk takers,5 C2 K" x8 y. a3 i6 X8 w1 N! ?
My mind is full of curiosity and wonder " Q5 Z6 `6 Q8 K
As I think of what could be.
6 [" a9 B) Q" r, j% }The world is so big to me ! Y0 f) g; C! D! v9 k$ U
I wonder what it means to be: D# [/ u3 p0 H, z  z7 M  ^
I looked up at the star and smiled % {  k2 U5 T2 R7 @6 `  M
They flashed as they have heard all I have read. % r9 {& e, z. r9 l
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
& s, R8 k% ~' Q* g: S2 ]评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。& ~- X5 b7 @* ^9 D
顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,- |+ i7 Y8 R! _8 X; |0 A1 v& x
A poor old Guy;
! S. z0 E! L0 \7 eLegs in a bonfire,
' J( r) Q. F0 J! r- t# I/ ]& ZHead in the sky
7 f' [' [- _+ Q8 k* P# [  TLonely, with the feel of betray
7 V( s8 b  a% k0 B7 l. g7 J# uHeart empty and hollow3 r- O% I) X+ v+ r. Q, `8 l
Alone I stand
! ^9 l+ W% k* V* G8 m' cI am useless to all
1 p& k. A/ @) e1 u# d& a/ S- ?But I wish I were a dove
0 ]- M- K0 s& H3 S2 d  ]Giving myself to the world, to the fire
* N- c& p5 \2 A/ I/ @I feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind
2 g7 o) Z, X7 [7 o0 W: A# |# |I sent prayers to my god
$ o4 n) x- A5 u% J( c4 h# EThough he does not answer
* _! T6 X1 ?5 y; u3 aHe bless me with the gift of hope
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。
* y  N. c" G% }. _( f* J加油加油,经常写写!
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