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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006,
* j' y9 A; C( A" B7 [0 X* |$ `I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  2 W2 i/ {6 l$ w3 z: S& j
Dreamers6 ^4 X8 W" k4 M
Savages3 u$ u6 `4 J. x. Y
Poets
" H! i7 G2 j+ k& Q' lBuilders of canoes,6 R) D' j* M/ q% q, t5 A4 X
Black smiths/ \/ v' M- V" }. C3 J
Murderers," X- l# h( o# D! _# Q9 r2 m5 L  a4 L
Risk takers,% c! |* R9 ~4 H* v- m/ T# r
My mind is full of curiosity and wonder
/ \5 |& J) ^: OAs I think of what could be.
5 d$ X9 ^1 ?- e, J- Q: f: ]The world is so big to me & A' i. n& s: u) \/ f% l% F
I wonder what it means to be% b0 a* X* s4 ^" c9 f
I looked up at the star and smiled ! i* h) X5 j% H. {0 a; N
They flashed as they have heard all I have read.
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。1 o" D  n/ ^) l, C  L: \2 D
评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。8 p  w" c" `0 Y+ Y) a
顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,  T2 c4 c' O% L+ k/ O
A poor old Guy;
9 C0 a* A: n' s) U4 w: I. DLegs in a bonfire,
* g  N" V, h2 Q* ]) K$ ?9 AHead in the sky
8 k: a3 m/ H$ D" |: w6 J9 KLonely, with the feel of betray7 m/ ^7 b( _% s2 [* ]5 Q
Heart empty and hollow
9 Y. r  |% L. T( F, ]( MAlone I stand1 J2 Y6 I" `: F) D, W
I am useless to all
/ Z/ \, N0 H8 s+ b, g' WBut I wish I were a dove $ e2 l/ \2 p. S3 s% x, @4 S
Giving myself to the world, to the fire+ D& J* h3 D3 a: k
I feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind
3 o* O- W/ [2 K& KI sent prayers to my god6 b! _* {' t' i
Though he does not answer- i) a: u2 A) C+ C/ V- `% g) V
He bless me with the gift of hope # l1 r: p6 ^3 G

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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
大型搬家
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。; @! j- P; y4 L/ a, z4 ^  g1 O+ }
加油加油,经常写写!
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