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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006,
% ~. I1 E+ I& n1 p/ T3 A! HI believe there must be creatures like ourselves  
7 v  N7 N+ S+ j* N7 W5 H9 VDreamers
5 W6 Z3 x) U" t% YSavages! C& H) j( Y0 u
Poets. N9 F4 q. c& n# l
Builders of canoes,0 z% f( u3 S/ ]
Black smiths
8 V/ c. z% F7 mMurderers,
) y* o5 n/ l: [& N. Y2 ~, _5 xRisk takers,2 z% S' X( }" Z) p( z/ H
My mind is full of curiosity and wonder
, A$ N+ a) a0 [1 B- d2 BAs I think of what could be.
( G8 L) e' r' v: ?The world is so big to me 2 C- R% p6 m5 z8 B) ?9 Y2 ~. O
I wonder what it means to be7 @0 k) e% h9 e# y  {+ [+ Q( e( J
I looked up at the star and smiled 9 M0 D5 I2 I" F  |" `! }7 J
They flashed as they have heard all I have read. $ J0 W, o9 t1 L2 U2 E
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。0 I2 D" p3 b2 `. P& o
评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。
% r' y. q1 K) M' w: K顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,
8 L- D4 ~. K$ L+ }. g' TA poor old Guy;" b  a) }& l* W; f/ {, ~# ]
Legs in a bonfire,; |: X0 P) i; `0 k* |* j
Head in the sky
. R. T/ o  L# o* OLonely, with the feel of betray1 T/ l8 J  f& K& w9 m8 U0 P8 B
Heart empty and hollow
- a  `' P8 j5 v8 F- g& T" [Alone I stand# E% H7 i7 A' P7 d( M
I am useless to all
8 c2 h& Y4 p9 p7 y5 N' aBut I wish I were a dove
9 }: B" j1 V9 U2 u0 RGiving myself to the world, to the fire
( [; a5 y7 O% M6 `1 l! ?4 b/ sI feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind( |& ~" H! P0 B( W( H9 u
I sent prayers to my god
' j+ A5 Q6 j1 V% _" F+ j. S+ ?; YThough he does not answer
1 _/ j! H. ]# |: PHe bless me with the gift of hope
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。
: v  E( O$ A" Q* T# c2 r1 f加油加油,经常写写!
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