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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006, 1 E% L+ S1 g# b% A5 D8 ]+ J9 n
I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  . v$ k! _5 ]5 R+ j0 a* a
Dreamers
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Builders of canoes," L2 D0 e- G: F- p
Black smiths
1 u% V  x7 \" M, ]$ DMurderers,# e! S9 _7 ^4 C
Risk takers,* K" ~+ t5 U3 E3 U2 c$ z, R
My mind is full of curiosity and wonder $ U0 j4 b) D& }9 v- l
As I think of what could be.
' n1 s) _& t! L6 E. k, wThe world is so big to me ( a5 E# h9 u3 L9 \
I wonder what it means to be) A6 h5 v1 |' t- C, _
I looked up at the star and smiled   Q( g. R: v% Q; }$ |6 z
They flashed as they have heard all I have read.
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
/ Q4 e/ Y- ]& y: X& n" r- O评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。
4 ]) t5 n  E2 m' q7 c" k& D# R" i顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,6 L- ^5 c- }( G5 k; p
A poor old Guy;3 a6 J5 [5 r& P2 [- I. `5 ]1 T
Legs in a bonfire,7 o& V* j* u6 C) a* l% e$ D" o0 _
Head in the sky
" R/ \+ i, ~0 Y% O, O/ U" j. fLonely, with the feel of betray7 U' N: I$ N, U& V% W% T3 V& q9 K4 ~
Heart empty and hollow
4 z  D8 v( n3 {1 O  l5 zAlone I stand
& d( V! o9 Q$ t) _4 ~) KI am useless to all
% O- J! J5 g- k  O6 hBut I wish I were a dove
: K* T' O! F8 ^* Z/ z8 c1 Q. TGiving myself to the world, to the fire
5 }5 z/ Y% F: u; O* K5 D. gI feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind
) D: b- G. `' m, r4 iI sent prayers to my god
) W9 C8 u+ M. D7 ~* qThough he does not answer$ x( x) f7 _$ Z% \0 U
He bless me with the gift of hope
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。
% I, H$ C! U6 _加油加油,经常写写!
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