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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006, 3 S3 {) s  |& T" O8 f  I
I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  , P9 I8 {, ^  R3 Q4 {
Dreamers
' ~2 J; r" d# w9 m2 v" o: `7 G5 ^Savages
) u* T" p7 \6 c0 MPoets
  B. g0 B, n5 S$ q0 x; F5 t+ EBuilders of canoes,
  n0 N4 h8 E. A0 X' G2 qBlack smiths
) m  w/ l2 G# P$ BMurderers,
% q. J) P$ k7 Y' Y0 u, ZRisk takers,
6 ~8 p6 w; v- Q+ s7 ]0 LMy mind is full of curiosity and wonder 4 y. f& J1 w* B: |
As I think of what could be.
# I0 c( N  I) |$ k# l; X4 }- ~# AThe world is so big to me
# Z3 o7 W( n5 R, R& l8 o- mI wonder what it means to be
: s& E# G6 X( y( f! A+ b2 h* zI looked up at the star and smiled " C9 M; h: s# n
They flashed as they have heard all I have read. ' M/ t0 }: w! W! h
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
1 p- T, d3 S% Y% |1 V! d评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。( ?$ C# a1 V$ _- ?; F; ~0 e
顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,
/ X+ z2 w/ F  g2 N1 JA poor old Guy;7 A" h! j/ B1 B1 L
Legs in a bonfire,
* \: h4 x- r. w5 n* e! {; \! X: VHead in the sky
" o: P  y, h6 [  JLonely, with the feel of betray7 t) e; ^' e9 T5 x  j0 A
Heart empty and hollow! U# L& W0 N: z6 h2 {- n8 T; Y
Alone I stand# o- I4 _% Q- `4 g7 j4 q$ y
I am useless to all / h) S! _& g" g& r
But I wish I were a dove
# I8 H; n: {3 a6 b6 o! {/ ^Giving myself to the world, to the fire
& _. d: ?: d( @7 g$ Y! UI feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind
3 m5 Z  g; l/ m7 `+ p- a; pI sent prayers to my god
6 D! c: l/ z: ?: v2 C: m1 xThough he does not answer' ?* T) n5 I7 [. f" Z4 b8 ~
He bless me with the gift of hope 4 T" m: e* g+ r8 B, l

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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。
% ^! p& ^8 r8 d) G7 Q加油加油,经常写写!
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