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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006, 5 g' o' l7 h" a
I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  . i2 _1 H* |( n# `
Dreamers. w; ]! R+ m+ u: Y
Savages; t" t, K- g4 B2 Z+ _
Poets% l, z2 O# S) b7 \/ w
Builders of canoes,0 Y" X' C  e. L' E* q! D( k* G* F
Black smiths
2 k: V9 e6 X/ j* Q. d0 d' gMurderers,0 D7 c8 \, T; C: x1 X
Risk takers,7 q: }( v0 v: n& d( k: h. B3 k8 m8 j6 {
My mind is full of curiosity and wonder
7 ~+ R$ {" i& ]) T2 a+ G2 K: LAs I think of what could be. 8 Y* g% T4 C, n4 ^
The world is so big to me ; s- A# s$ f! a7 [1 R' y8 B
I wonder what it means to be* Y( E1 \/ X! C5 m
I looked up at the star and smiled   R. U5 Y  V0 C* y7 {
They flashed as they have heard all I have read.
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
1 Y. u3 T$ N# |( o- M. h; ~2 X, K评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。8 S* p' @/ Z6 e+ p: \# C! Z
顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,
8 O0 N' f) ?# e; ^' ?' Y' J7 P, wA poor old Guy;0 o+ i) E- w/ |
Legs in a bonfire,4 D4 }7 L8 z/ Y1 n2 H! ^" m* t
Head in the sky& n; R& M1 i4 J  p1 T
Lonely, with the feel of betray
1 h0 L( {& p# t, ?. RHeart empty and hollow6 U- ?$ i( w+ c) U% E; a
Alone I stand
( K6 F  A' \; V9 m1 oI am useless to all . w; o0 |0 P% t( }
But I wish I were a dove
$ M* ]- I! A( i$ ^* q" aGiving myself to the world, to the fire
4 ~. b+ |* Y$ I4 W7 FI feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind
3 _, R0 @) _" C) |% yI sent prayers to my god: ]; e! R7 G1 K
Though he does not answer
9 }- W+ G: `9 f, q3 x8 P9 A) tHe bless me with the gift of hope 5 S- _3 ~: D. l# T
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。
8 F$ H$ @' Z2 c# ~0 l2 k加油加油,经常写写!
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