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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006, . H% H! r  C; c# c
I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  
8 O+ j! H9 Z; ^1 b9 q/ M/ q+ g$ NDreamers
8 U4 ~5 ]1 g8 JSavages4 e4 A: m' b& \
Poets0 `2 [% P0 Z4 S8 Q! |
Builders of canoes,
+ a. N; X6 [" _( {/ V2 iBlack smiths
$ j! Z2 d  b( b6 I! kMurderers,: p% |* h2 U& H6 [  x9 [
Risk takers,
; r* @1 u4 Y* t% ~My mind is full of curiosity and wonder 1 e  F7 J+ }) ?' f4 F8 Z2 ~1 z
As I think of what could be. , W0 f- b! b( _. k
The world is so big to me
3 @. H% W& f5 F8 nI wonder what it means to be
, l4 R+ P5 {4 b( q* [/ t1 I8 BI looked up at the star and smiled
8 {, s  D0 A* YThey flashed as they have heard all I have read. : b7 t' W$ T( o

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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
' e0 t+ y7 H8 w评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。
# T  F# u% n1 y- w- i* D3 M6 P+ H( I顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,
1 h& r! Q8 `1 U3 GA poor old Guy;# u) D" N, l! d% h) f
Legs in a bonfire,
# x2 f( g5 x: e) VHead in the sky) Y. x, s7 y# ^$ [5 F# ?
Lonely, with the feel of betray! R6 c8 h7 X' f- ?) l0 p0 b
Heart empty and hollow
6 `0 S% M2 w$ g8 _: X. L# _( C/ D8 aAlone I stand
+ K" v0 R: E6 \5 d- E, Y$ [2 x2 rI am useless to all
- @& Y- l! w4 y2 j0 |- H5 ^" NBut I wish I were a dove 9 P: C# x: f; `$ \  a" i# D- W1 a
Giving myself to the world, to the fire
8 H. f% L; F( iI feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind! X( I8 O+ U, j6 L, a6 p# {
I sent prayers to my god! ?2 G! A. P0 l, r
Though he does not answer/ {, N- g4 ^, i7 ]# a3 b" I. u
He bless me with the gift of hope
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。
' ?1 N8 P+ T- @5 x/ t加油加油,经常写写!
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