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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006, % X: ~7 a. D- d6 V
I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  
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Savages) D/ a' c3 ?+ W( Z
Poets. m- U$ n3 `# }" |1 C
Builders of canoes,
3 Z* P- v! u4 d1 pBlack smiths8 ^& s3 G$ o! o
Murderers,
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My mind is full of curiosity and wonder
+ S7 |* N5 D, w$ |, Y2 I! AAs I think of what could be. # j7 p  {% V# N
The world is so big to me ( h' c5 A% p" p) k) h4 p8 v  a
I wonder what it means to be) \0 [9 ]$ j- u2 m. X
I looked up at the star and smiled 4 E$ l1 i9 p& Y2 B2 c
They flashed as they have heard all I have read. - F( c6 c- U) |; J' |) t7 \
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
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顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,
/ |9 i# d% ~. tA poor old Guy;
7 R/ S+ [% W. w! CLegs in a bonfire,: F. B% k/ @" N' U: B
Head in the sky5 @( p/ O+ b4 |
Lonely, with the feel of betray5 E" k6 @" `& b* W! G$ u$ r
Heart empty and hollow
; h: O4 b! B5 f  l1 f0 Z, nAlone I stand
" q/ [; F3 ^7 E5 FI am useless to all
8 g( W1 _; H7 }% a) T2 L  S% WBut I wish I were a dove 4 R9 |* t" I, E9 s: }  o. n( y
Giving myself to the world, to the fire7 G6 L& r, E  Q( n& R" r0 |) u6 L- R
I feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind; C9 e. Z, B3 k
I sent prayers to my god
) l* ~9 H: M% x2 M7 l+ @8 s0 cThough he does not answer
/ w. H! B6 y0 }% I6 t! s0 LHe bless me with the gift of hope
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。; k7 L) {9 ]" Z) N$ l& z) d- o( E
加油加油,经常写写!
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