天啊，这个版的英文描述能改改吗

SheJing

Killing me softly with your words, I'd feel flushed with Sentiment;
" Z6 W9 a) n) B* e& I" x7 [Touching us deeply with your feelings, We'd like share whatever we own.
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2 E5 s& Q4 G+ F, I鸡皮都起了。“Killing me softly with your words,”？？？？what the fuck

竹帘儿

Killing me softly with your words, I'd feel flushed with Sentiment;
Touching us deeply with your feelings, We'd like share whatever we own.

* d$ [0 Q% S( E. n+ g鸡皮都起了。“Killing me softly with your words,”？？？ ...
& {$ k+ ~% V& N# a( i: R  u; wSheJing 发表于 2011-3-26 05:48

哈哈哈哈

珠圆玉润

你指的是我儿子写的那几句话吗。是有很多错误，但我觉的我改了就不真实了。

arbo

We would like to share, not we would like share.
I think it is better to have sth more appropriate.