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发表于 2010-11-2 20:16 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
Recently , I am really busy. many tests are waiting for me ,also assignment. I really miss our English class on weekend, however, when i woke up , it was over Am 9. lol,) O/ j% ?) j8 e8 F8 }  a
i am short of time everyday for sleeping. lol. + A+ c) m, L' _7 e7 [
hope our leaders could forgive me, I was absent  at least 3 classes.I do apologize for it. i am reading some literary works , and collecting new words. hope there is still a seat for me lol, and I enjoyed the time we have been together. say hello to everyone, hope see you guys this weekend. 8 ]. E  L: }6 _9 [
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发表于 2010-11-2 20:52 | 显示全部楼层
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' H" X/ y/ L1 X/ a9 p* \阿猪同志的问题很严重,对错误认识远远不够,下次大家打算惩罚你表演一个节目。2 \8 n* |2 r- W, y; U& @. d: z3 B

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+ s3 p: e! Z6 K) CRecently , I am 我不知提醒过人们多少次,用I'm; 写为I am,是极其自高自大的表达方式,正常没有人这么用really (用very busy,或 really very busy)busy. many tests are waiting for me(用第一人称主动语态,一般写作,少用被动态) ,also (as well as)assignment. I really miss our English class on ()weekend, however, when i woke up , it was over Am 9(9 am). lol, (用简单从句就好,不要用重来重去的重句
/ u1 ^! n. V( T5 xi am (I'm)short of time everyday(放到最后) for sleeping. lol. (short of sleeping不就完了,你用一个time干什么?)
; A  C4 b9 M; e. R2 Yhope our leaders(现在学习小组是采用XX模式,7常委联合工作,没有什么leader。) could forgive (耸人听闻的用词;如果是非常正规的英文,应该注意的是写作模式。 写作模式的核心是用soft的语言(就是一堆废话)来表达对对方的尊重和礼貌。 而不是通过forgive这样的危言耸听的词语来加强语气。这点要切记。)me, I was absent  at least 3 classes.I do apologize for it. i am reading some literary works (???), and collecting new words(只有中国人知道你在干什么的一种表达方式). hope there is still a seat for me lol, and enjoyed (主语?时态?)the time we have been together. say hello to everyone, hope (to) see you guys (介词没有?) this weekend. 2 v0 h+ f  n) |. I
Best regards
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阿猪同志问题这么多,建议你找老科同志,让他收你一个关门女弟子比较好。老科可是经常向英文杂志投稿的人哦,除了小说不敢写,什么都敢写。不得了的水平。
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 楼主| 发表于 2010-11-2 22:59 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 珠圆玉润 于 2010-11-3 00:09 编辑 $ E5 S" A' u, l1 u* }4 `6 W
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吓死我了,太严重了。本来就是觉的太对不起了吗。所以,就道歉了。haha, but this really helps me a lot. I think you should be my teacher first. lol, I now know i am so good at making mistakes on my writing in English. Thanks , I hope to see more correcting of it. I have never heard this teacher 's name, i am eager to meet him or her  because I realize  I need to learn more about the rules of writing in English. thanks again, I used to speak like this way which you point out that it is so soft , as you know i used to write  letters to Canadians who are very humor and diplomatic . Just yesterday , my teacher said that , wen , forgive me ,i made a misstake for your mark. haha, and i said , no , i could not forgive you , i hate you. lol, teacher was very funny , he said , how about i buy you  coffee. I said , it sounds better than your apology. haha, maybe i should take it seriously.  P/ z6 d6 _% p
thanks , i will try to attend our class  on this weekend.
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发表于 2010-11-14 09:18 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
3# 珠圆玉润
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发表于 2010-12-12 15:31 | 显示全部楼层
lol是什么意思?大笑?
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发表于 2010-12-12 18:07 | 显示全部楼层
laugh out loudly
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发表于 2010-12-16 22:51 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
There won't be class this year, wen.
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发表于 2010-12-18 11:49 | 显示全部楼层
哈,珠珠是个好学生,不象咱们连个招呼都没打。
1 J4 _* W' L# n0 k% e也思念呀。圣诞期间还学习吗?得上群内看看了。
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