我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
/ B" S6 c* w) P- ~是十多年前的作品了——
Summer's Coming

Faster, hotter and sweater,
Summer's coming, coming, -ing ---
From the colorful nature
3 l+ B  n' ~7 W+ V/ I3 X. iTo my life and dream.
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Following the summer's step,
Let myself go ---
Go to the wild rain
9 [  V2 R* r9 _" i$ w* VWashing my heart and soul.
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Good-bye, my happy spring;
/ g4 h( {7 l3 r5 u5 z* A0 @Good-bye, my childish dream.
7 b2 v! i' ^5 T" v. rI can prepare nothing;
My life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。
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# W$ j6 p" t$ K6 B一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
; ], J4 F! M: w' n* TIt displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.
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[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
+ y/ M" e7 i; u0 Z  R1 s/ Q' ?/ Ibut what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
夏天来了