我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
是十多年前的作品了——
/ u2 f/ n6 P/ G3 oSummer's Coming
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Faster, hotter and sweater,
( x. [4 m8 K+ j2 F3 E6 jSummer's coming, coming, -ing ---
, R! I6 ]5 {( b( Q3 a/ C- I% N" OFrom the colorful nature
" L2 y6 ~+ c# k* eTo my life and dream.

Following the summer's step,
$ g9 }) g" n. ]8 Q5 X- ILet myself go ---
Go to the wild rain
Washing my heart and soul.

# w$ c& Q! K, y6 c0 h/ Z0 v" J/ }  g6 sGood-bye, my happy spring;
4 H5 Z4 i1 L& v) XGood-bye, my childish dream.
( u: G9 k1 _) M0 D' C6 M6 dI can prepare nothing;
0 H9 B: [: s1 e9 pMy life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。

' r2 x1 G8 X" E: T一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
It displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.
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[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
5 U# E* O0 x0 n) Nbut what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
夏天来了