我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
是十多年前的作品了——
Summer's Coming
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Faster, hotter and sweater,
" J# {8 X. }& K, j% l/ CSummer's coming, coming, -ing ---
+ `' o3 _, P3 P0 D' c! M+ K9 F4 fFrom the colorful nature
To my life and dream.
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( k$ Q& z: w0 T: t7 KFollowing the summer's step,
. \' c: O* \: ?/ N9 P: ]1 f" B: JLet myself go ---
Go to the wild rain
Washing my heart and soul.

2 S* V! j; J. CGood-bye, my happy spring;
Good-bye, my childish dream.
% F- o' b$ y: t) k2 @' II can prepare nothing;
My life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。

一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
4 H* u8 m' U: b) pIt displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.

[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
' X. p" r2 c" Gbut what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
夏天来了