我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
, R9 D/ ]& W9 @. z是十多年前的作品了——
Summer's Coming
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Faster, hotter and sweater,
/ L& Q% V( X" r$ I: wSummer's coming, coming, -ing ---
From the colorful nature
- L3 \. \  \0 ?To my life and dream.
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Following the summer's step,
Let myself go ---
Go to the wild rain
Washing my heart and soul.
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9 o. t4 |+ p/ X# |Good-bye, my happy spring;
* m5 ]: d  {8 c3 i  Q; a* sGood-bye, my childish dream.
I can prepare nothing;
( [" k( c+ t* g  W  e7 i( F7 z0 Z# BMy life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。
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& ]) a0 f7 ]# }- {) U: d' B: R一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
  s9 A8 ?) n. `It displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.
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[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
0 _1 \8 |* a1 f. w/ H$ _# qbut what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
夏天来了