我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
. A$ Y6 _9 }" ]0 N% f$ h; X6 z是十多年前的作品了——
7 J; W+ K# d" m" C* K- }! N3 J5 d9 jSummer's Coming
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Faster, hotter and sweater,
( o- z, M  e* K& ?9 _Summer's coming, coming, -ing ---
From the colorful nature
8 t! \4 n/ t# C3 @! pTo my life and dream.
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Following the summer's step,
Let myself go ---
Go to the wild rain
: W& s& A) J8 v# [3 j2 U; K3 sWashing my heart and soul.
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1 ?; N" o; I+ T4 kGood-bye, my happy spring;
  Z* i2 s0 Y3 k4 S7 t; Q: n0 {& s- {Good-bye, my childish dream.
I can prepare nothing;
' o2 t" T7 _6 ~' oMy life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。

一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
It displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.

; P% |& W* u% R. x[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
# Q8 P1 b4 i( Z2 E! M& n0 |8 hbut what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
) y4 u" \$ A; O夏天来了