我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
. `  w4 m' H+ |0 l! ?是十多年前的作品了——
Summer's Coming

/ o! O2 D: J" d' q1 pFaster, hotter and sweater,
# E, O2 k: p0 b' a) F3 ~& H  S" WSummer's coming, coming, -ing ---
From the colorful nature
" ~( P5 p! [5 lTo my life and dream.

Following the summer's step,
5 _& t$ z! f: E9 m4 A5 l5 b$ E( k9 w+ Z. LLet myself go ---
- @  v& i* S( v# w# h; sGo to the wild rain
  Q9 }. Y" h$ jWashing my heart and soul.
' E  K5 J( f/ j& D$ t( l* f. Q, Y
1 t' e, m) l2 j) x  A* v: M! {Good-bye, my happy spring;
Good-bye, my childish dream.
; N3 k9 ^2 u3 a. fI can prepare nothing;
8 m. T; `8 Z) m& @( HMy life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。

9 v2 {1 Z; i* J# c一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
It displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.

7 ^8 W9 m" r+ z9 g5 V[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
1 M% y7 y$ U2 D' l& [" jbut what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
3 n! d+ p& g1 e4 l" x) L; T, W! m夏天来了