锻造地道英语句子

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　　1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.

　　改进：Artists' work upgrades our civilization.

  D) O& p; l) M; U# t6 Q2 l( a　　2. For example, you work in a big factory.
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1 w  j( E3 u. l- m" E　　改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.
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$ h% ?1 a9 v6 I; k　　3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.

　　改进：You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.

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! Q  B. e% h' A" m4 l　　改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.

　　5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.
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　　改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.

　　6. Their brain is still very young.
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　　改进: They are still immature.
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) p' R6 W3 a0 L2 z+ d　　7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.

　　改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.
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　　8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.
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　　改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.

; U' @9 Q9 @( m2 s0 q% j9 O3 s3 M1 f　　9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.
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& G8 X* E( b+ ~9 W4 ~. }1 Q( Y　　改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.

　　10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.
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　　改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.
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  _6 r, h3 G; [- K4 j* _　　11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.
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. S  l( }. x0 w8 l- k( g　　改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development.
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- Z+ K2 h+ _( [$ T　　12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.
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　　改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money.

　　13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.

　　改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.
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　　14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money.
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　　改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more.

　　15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.

　　改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products.

! X% m* x* J, D- ]( E# t　　16. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills.

5 t& a" d; @1 E9 M# O* ?: Q6 d7 r　　改进: In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills.

　　17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians.

　　改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand.
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　　18. This knowledge will become a part of your body.
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: q3 N4 _: k/ M8 x: D6 E: n$ ~1 s　　改进: This knowledge will become part of you.
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! A# b+ n& K1 B+ {* b　　19. They cannot think clearly.
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　　改进: They cannot think straight.
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　　20. Money can improve their living standard.

2 k4 W- f- q; w$ I2 J" X, d  j　　改进: Money can improve their life.

　　21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money.

　　改进: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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　　22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life.

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  h# b! ^5 E" ]. G　　23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later.
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6 q5 Y! ^3 N; ?2 N　　改进: One purpose of education is to learn to learn.
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! i  |% D* m7 ?4 |　　24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano.

　　改进: Many parents send their children to piano classes.
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　　25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others.
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　　改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others.

　　26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.
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　　改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.

. j6 {3 Q/ y& y6 b　　27. Smoking can help you relax your mind.
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8 W" d5 `% _. D, n% \　　改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.
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2 Q! c7 B6 ~& T  H1 v　　28. What's about nonsmokers?

　　改进: What about nonsmokers?

　　29. Why not to be a non-smoker?
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　　改进: Why not be a non-smoker?
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　　30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.
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　　改进: Everyone has friends in his life.
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1 x/ w  K: k4 e　　31. I am not good at maths, but English

% P4 S; b3 }3 X* @- \　　改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.
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$ V$ |. }) D" M3 V　　32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time?
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$ ^1 r+ Y+ G- O0 I& r3 [$ u; F　　改进: Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time?
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　　33.It is children who clear about their interests.

　　改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.

% `0 r7 |6 V3 g( x# a　　34. I agree the latter idea.

5 F1 @7 h' u3 C6 `) S9 W　　改进: I agree with the latter idea.
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# @4 U, B& S) j1 B0 Q  r　　35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.

5 N3 s) J: k# n. o　　改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.

; [5 k; t! V" e' Z6 I" p" V　　36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.
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6 u9 |& ]6 A9 M0 d8 s# S" p+ H. L　　改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.
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+ \! {4 \7 v3 @# z. |　　37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.
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' j) I! s2 p; r7 x　　改进：People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.

9 S5 ]+ ?5 Q7 p4 d) a: f　　38. No one knows all the things.
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　　改进: No one knows everything.

$ Z1 k+ Q; q. t$ j$ ]7 `　　39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.

( P' {( ?$ ^3 h3 t$ W) z8 R6 f　　改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.
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( B# e: R0 H! x. }: q% Q8 }　　40. Each form of having friends has its advantages
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% K$ L4 q; `  o& f: Q　　41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up.

　　改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply

/ R: D) [) h3 p　　42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.
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  Z! E* h, }# r, X) H( j, c　　43. They will learn the bad habits.

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5 L3 {2 e6 u  X; V# }　　44. In this continued process, people make progress.

/ k. ^  `0 [5 ]- {( U$ w+ T8 @　　改进: In this cycle, people make progress.

- X9 f7 R, D' h* w2 d, |　　45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.
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5 l5 X/ |! {% ~0 k( ~' k　　改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.
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　　46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.

　　改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.
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) p( v$ I6 D7 I  `2 s9 W. v) @　　47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.

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1 g3 ]! o0 b: U% W　　48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.
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　　改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.
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　　49. Children should be taught disciplines in order to avoid unnecessary lost.
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　　改进: Children should be taught discipline in order to avoid unnecessary loss.

　　50. I felt alone.

　　改进: I felt lonely.

孤寒一剑

wow, where did you get those sample (the cheglish one)? I have to say the revised samples are really really good.
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sindowa

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平时的积累，呵呵！

玫瑰上的小蚂蚁

maxlake

能否解释一下 status quo 是什么意思。

寒塘鹤影

是现状的意思

spark

:lol::lol::lol:

玄紫妖妖

Wow,看得我头晕目悬的...还是记不住...呵呵

醉酒当歌

有些改进似乎意思有些改变...

自由自在

好哦．xiexie

penguin

thanks

lischka