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  1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.
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  改进:Artists' work upgrades our civilization. ) m  T. n; r. h( _' g( C# D
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  2. For example, you work in a big factory.
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  改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.
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6 O' y' ~3 H) [8 f2 v  3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job. 2 a7 P7 N6 b, D

4 i/ _' d0 g, g3 P: F! }  改进:You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.
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" i6 `) I( q9 c7 K+ w) E  4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.
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& B/ C$ N1 k3 K3 g" U. F  改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.
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- y$ q( s, R& x  L5 y0 B  5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level. 7 Y# I# X8 `2 F# j( L  m

1 ~$ y$ A; h2 ?" n1 V2 q* v# s6 ]  改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life. 3 r$ V" v* n% |/ b
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  6. Their brain is still very young. " Y7 K2 q" O( R' h' ~" V& o0 [2 s

! f5 v& a. v8 c( Q/ u  改进: They are still immature. 3 F; ~/ F- s' ?; v, M4 J

. S: O) M, m! h! D! b3 T( o, x+ T  7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.
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9 U  |7 S8 r$ X9 d' g  改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.
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. T8 B+ ^7 y' ~- a) n  8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.
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  改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.
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  o& W) A* @$ Y& h& ?  9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.
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  改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.
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  10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life. . P& ^: [7 K7 B6 N* A

( e! o% O3 t9 l6 D/ `  改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.
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! H" F5 C! U& [) K  11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.
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' D- z4 X+ U8 Q  改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development.
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% _$ Z% W2 a+ x' x) ^) P& K/ u' I  12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money. $ k8 m: Y* K. c

2 Y8 b1 i. O: D) \/ ~5 @  改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money. + d$ t# j7 ], s  H6 Z

6 r! I! h' Z# S; N  13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.
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  改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one. % t) [5 E: m+ Z9 E6 I1 J
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  14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money.
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5 x& s% _+ o: j2 r. b  改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more.
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  15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products. ) ~7 x/ ]1 }0 J1 {$ T5 [$ U

- ^6 @- J! {5 c; U- D5 X9 G  改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products.
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* y0 D. `9 S  C/ d4 b2 U* v! t  16. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills.
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/ I  k, k$ H0 p( n2 m5 g' O  改进: In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills.
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9 v4 F0 A9 U& Y; e8 i/ j2 r* ~  17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians. . h6 P4 u, g# c0 Z& P9 j

% L8 @5 ~! v, }  改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand.
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  18. This knowledge will become a part of your body. $ V2 E$ H. X4 P) g. K; _
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  改进: This knowledge will become part of you.
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  19. They cannot think clearly.
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  改进: They cannot think straight. 0 z0 K+ c" M$ m& @

! {9 o! D) d7 a3 z* G+ V, f- O' v  20. Money can improve their living standard. 8 v3 i( s& R& C4 ~! n0 k
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  改进: Money can improve their life.
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  21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money. 1 k* X$ z/ |" U* x, v
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  改进: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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  22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life. 5 u8 l+ b& Z7 d' T7 V: c7 ^% [

# V$ _: r, D0 P' d* I7 Z  改进: If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life. % U1 K6 w5 P3 G2 w! B" u  Y4 m) H

8 T9 A+ }* [) D+ P  23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later.
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  改进: One purpose of education is to learn to learn. + [3 I% U( I3 ]3 T  [  F% p& I
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  24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano.
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% \3 k9 b7 `0 s5 T6 }$ ]( F  改进: Many parents send their children to piano classes.
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  25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others. 7 a& ?2 c& K  v" [7 H+ ]  b( V

$ g" m( w% r# G/ K# c  改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others. 9 Y6 g+ z5 D& w/ o
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  26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing. ) g3 V9 t% G: _& S( t3 ~1 n( M: O, e9 f
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  改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal. - {3 ~" ^" q) ]/ y1 L3 R9 S

$ K8 t0 ^( a8 ?- K" F- s6 `1 b  27. Smoking can help you relax your mind.
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  改进: Cigarettes can help you relax. + q1 i) d/ |8 x

  G6 j8 n) O5 a0 b/ ]' i  28. What's about nonsmokers?
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( q4 `/ Y$ F  L6 b  m" ~9 ~  改进: What about nonsmokers?
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/ g, l! G) V% [+ w  y  29. Why not to be a non-smoker? : K7 \& ~0 n# T0 G7 P; D( o

# _- e; ]+ P# B1 L. O2 l  改进: Why not be a non-smoker?
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# F$ W7 n5 B: D! g* P7 w  30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.
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7 Y% T4 l* q* Q, [4 @  改进: Everyone has friends in his life. 2 w' x1 m' H7 W% a) l: D3 R9 N4 L
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  31. I am not good at maths, but English
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8 O) o$ B6 O' W0 m. R5 T# |$ g; I  改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.
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  32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time?
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9 ~2 `  r, x7 d  改进: Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time?
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9 u, K' N, D$ X8 W: l  33.It is children who clear about their interests. ( s/ Y+ I( y: e9 P5 h
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  改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.
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  |& g7 A6 C. W/ K7 P  34. I agree the latter idea.
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2 g* H) ~% J. v  改进: I agree with the latter idea.
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  35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo. ( }$ K: |& b9 h% n2 ?( ?$ S$ H

2 Y  M1 B! k& H( y6 L5 Y  改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo. $ b5 S5 s8 `2 W% X$ m' a  f) \
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  36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now. * p' a3 N$ I, C. a+ m; x; g
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  改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.
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  37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.
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2 J3 H- o0 o8 |  改进:People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.
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  38. No one knows all the things.
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9 {( G7 H( r, `8 Y- n: P) T. w  改进: No one knows everything.
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( p) ~# U3 l/ E, ^2 b. k8 n# e  39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.
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; j( T6 [* k$ N- {4 b* ^  Z  40. Each form of having friends has its advantages ! _( V( w+ |( }; C
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  改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.
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$ }; h3 B  F5 R# v% s% U  41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up.
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  改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply
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  m! _$ r5 z' U. z0 z4 k: E9 H2 s  42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor. % \) W6 C3 F% A- J

/ B$ g9 B) I/ e9 J5 @; [  改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.
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  43. They will learn the bad habits.
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  改进: They will develop bad habits. 3 P# t, {) k+ k: I! N
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  44. In this continued process, people make progress. , f% R2 v) _2 z" V

2 q' O/ b2 J( _+ D9 [  改进: In this cycle, people make progress.
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( c2 e+ d7 H5 `. D, M3 z6 n+ {  v  45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary. 5 J3 u- E4 u2 P, B; j; e+ g* A! c1 j3 `. Q

; y( G0 k0 e( t  改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary. , ^8 p7 J" Z9 L) t
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  46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency. % X0 g: m  y) H" o
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  改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings. + a5 e2 `6 M7 B. I/ H
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  47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact. - d/ B& T( X; P! Q# J$ [5 ]$ i9 P
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  改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result. ! u6 p; ^' G* ?1 b

' N' i4 F. g* t6 {# k  48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing. - j! r1 R8 B7 U" X

7 S0 O/ X; i$ \: t; x  改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.
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9 e" y% d, d1 ?" T. Z# ?  49. Children should be taught disciplines in order to avoid unnecessary lost. 4 ~* c' F2 p# X& p$ S' O8 `/ J
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  改进: Children should be taught discipline in order to avoid unnecessary loss.
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  50. I felt alone.
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9 m* U. K1 N, P. f  改进: I felt lonely.
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发表于 2005-2-24 08:39 | 显示全部楼层
wow, where did you get those sample (the cheglish one)? I have to say the revised samples are really really good.
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' o7 Y4 Q7 c0 e2 k% eThanks
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 楼主| 发表于 2005-2-26 07:02 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
平时的积累,呵呵!
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发表于 2005-2-26 14:03 | 显示全部楼层

顶!

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发表于 2005-3-1 08:25 | 显示全部楼层

很好。

能否解释一下 status quo 是什么意思。
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发表于 2005-3-1 08:37 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
是现状的意思
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发表于 2005-4-9 18:26 | 显示全部楼层
:lol::lol::lol:
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发表于 2005-4-9 20:42 | 显示全部楼层
Wow,看得我头晕目悬的...还是记不住...呵呵
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发表于 2005-4-9 21:09 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
有些改进似乎意思有些改变...
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发表于 2005-8-24 02:47 | 显示全部楼层
好哦.xiexie
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发表于 2005-8-24 19:48 | 显示全部楼层
thanks
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发表于 2005-8-24 21:11 | 显示全部楼层
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