锻造地道英语句子

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　　1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.

　　改进：Artists' work upgrades our civilization.
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0 y5 b" D, |" y  ?! a　　2. For example, you work in a big factory.

6 `7 g. ]1 ]# P/ m3 l　　改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.

　　3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.

# P6 M0 l% P/ L4 o　　改进：You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.
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　　4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.

　　改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.
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" d0 }# R2 }' c- M$ Z　　5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.

' Q8 z# F0 J9 m5 E& y" G1 k　　改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.
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　　6. Their brain is still very young.

) w0 Y/ y, g' G　　改进: They are still immature.

　　7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.
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　　改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.
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　　8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.
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: O' d- z5 F* k8 K　　改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.
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* o' J* z6 @7 t* y* @　　9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.
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3 e" p4 M  b, m7 M+ e3 f　　改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.

- ~8 n& l3 j+ [( b6 s0 N$ A　　10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.
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' B* _9 u* g" }% X$ Y0 y$ n　　改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.

　　11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.

　　改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development.

5 T% P! _* T6 Y) u& b" ?　　12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.
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　　改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money.
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1 c0 i$ `% l, h) K$ X' |2 w　　13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.
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　　改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.
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( n; U, t* `4 }. ?" A　　14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money.

2 f* [4 x- w* K1 {- x1 u& R+ n　　改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more.

　　15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.
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　　改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products.

　　16. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills.
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　　改进: In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills.
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" |+ u' P5 ?4 J8 [. a1 c　　17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians.
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　　改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand.
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. c0 |2 o0 X4 h7 Y　　18. This knowledge will become a part of your body.

* S0 `3 ?3 O9 U! C　　改进: This knowledge will become part of you.
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　　19. They cannot think clearly.
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　　改进: They cannot think straight.

　　20. Money can improve their living standard.
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　　改进: Money can improve their life.

9 g6 x7 p  ]$ N! C. u　　21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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　　改进: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money.

& a, ]( h* B5 s　　22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life.
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4 c: A6 `8 M9 x7 S# r5 n- Z　　改进: If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life.

' s2 |: D# f6 |( n0 f5 A/ K　　23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later.

7 u3 V! z1 ^! O; C' x. \　　改进: One purpose of education is to learn to learn.
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0 o2 L# l5 [* j5 ^: I' a; C, ~; v　　24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano.
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9 K& B9 _6 B  W* K+ u' a　　改进: Many parents send their children to piano classes.

" N  }5 S1 S* Q: M$ Z6 c　　25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others.

　　改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others.
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& N. F7 z  ~/ t9 z7 C% F　　26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.
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% F. X0 l- z0 u- k. J. _3 o　　改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.

. \) n5 v, W  E4 g$ t, c　　27. Smoking can help you relax your mind.

1 b. z  U4 D, @　　改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.
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　　28. What's about nonsmokers?

3 ~) W, o3 ^4 e6 v　　改进: What about nonsmokers?

0 W( F$ P1 E! m' O% ?. Q　　29. Why not to be a non-smoker?
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　　改进: Why not be a non-smoker?
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　　30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.

7 }. F9 C' l8 f5 P; k　　改进: Everyone has friends in his life.
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　　31. I am not good at maths, but English

　　改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.

　　32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time?
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　　改进: Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time?

0 v: ]: Y0 L$ @　　33.It is children who clear about their interests.
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0 h4 E  C% @$ n6 A. W) _, F4 M　　改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.

　　34. I agree the latter idea.

3 d7 U) Y5 t! ]4 o6 u　　改进: I agree with the latter idea.
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8 i' u) b; E, w, p. q　　35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.
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　　改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.

　　36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.
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　　改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.
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　　37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.

　　改进：People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.
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; w7 P4 H, D+ e4 N　　38. No one knows all the things.
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( W( |# M/ m* s8 ^8 M# {　　改进: No one knows everything.
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　　39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.
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9 s7 T& n5 ^5 y　　改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.
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　　40. Each form of having friends has its advantages

( k3 V3 \( e, _  f' o* j) Q　　改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.
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　　41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up.

　　改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply
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　　42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.
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8 i& y. |. u: C0 A( P5 m$ e　　改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.
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　　43. They will learn the bad habits.
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　　改进: They will develop bad habits.

: @  \% f" n- `! `: a/ T　　44. In this continued process, people make progress.
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, i: P: N$ r: B9 F" K2 ?　　改进: In this cycle, people make progress.

　　45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.

　　改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.
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　　46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.
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, b2 o. v, ^% o2 l: O  m　　改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.
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0 @8 K% j; _1 p, \) H# [' u　　47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.
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" b. _" [. F6 r; I# u9 K% T  z: x) W　　改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.
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　　48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.
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3 D# E+ L0 s) U  E: y1 E+ D! m　　改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.
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　　49. Children should be taught disciplines in order to avoid unnecessary lost.

　　改进: Children should be taught discipline in order to avoid unnecessary loss.

3 q9 E/ V9 x0 a$ ?; `2 S7 i8 T! X1 N! A　　50. I felt alone.

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孤寒一剑

wow, where did you get those sample (the cheglish one)? I have to say the revised samples are really really good.

Thanks

sindowa

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平时的积累，呵呵！

玫瑰上的小蚂蚁

maxlake

能否解释一下 status quo 是什么意思。

寒塘鹤影

是现状的意思

spark

:lol::lol::lol:

玄紫妖妖

Wow,看得我头晕目悬的...还是记不住...呵呵

醉酒当歌

有些改进似乎意思有些改变...

自由自在

好哦．xiexie

penguin

thanks

lischka