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1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level. ' a6 J# y- k( E: V! ]3 O
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改进：Artists' work upgrades our civilization. $ s8 T$ A3 F- C) M p9 _
+ t( `4 m6 S. u5 S& N 2. For example, you work in a big factory. 9 x8 g" L( ~5 L4 Z$ o) Z) K
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改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.
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; ~4 ?& M. _ z( [4 P 3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.
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|4 n* _4 _% w# P" _ 改进：You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career. * q# N+ a5 w. G( R
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4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.
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改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.
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5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.
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8 F: }, @ w; d( m. D1 t7 Q. r- ^ 改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life. - K5 v' u( \2 Q; V' B1 x
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6. Their brain is still very young.
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. w3 L: b$ [/ K7 Z) b 改进: They are still immature.
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7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things. 2 F7 Y% X& B2 e; c' J
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改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.
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8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.
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改进: They cannot tell right from wrong. 7 D$ S9 b4 T X. v$ n3 i1 {
% [! k0 C9 w* k4 G$ K8 o 9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time. 3 O/ t7 v( v( w- z# H7 c) y0 Y
; r7 w e" [5 t 改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time. 7 h9 Q0 H, h( P8 U% u, w2 U2 |
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10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life. & e: L0 \7 j+ r) n: l0 D
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改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it. ; J: b) C4 n, n9 Q3 X
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11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development. 6 I4 @6 z! @8 X3 n& b7 V: K3 o5 }9 s
/ T% w& v1 m0 ^' U. o d 改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development. ' i" F5 n" x# `' Y" o6 \/ T8 G& T0 m
% s( {% c9 J7 F; I: [7 {- v 12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.
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6 g |6 ~1 D1 Q& c; S' s 改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money. " D; z& V4 D$ j2 f: Q2 b# l& K" u5 S
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13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.
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改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one. 2 [! ?, k- K/ R4 V' X
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14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money. - f( f! `4 ~8 E; [' k: I$ p) l# d8 K" O
* [# a( y- ^, S% I* S# u, k 改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more. ' _# F/ O+ \5 S5 [, H: `2 x( \* L
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15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.
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1 b& R2 y4 C/ { 改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products. : N9 W* X1 r3 E4 N2 D
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16. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills. ! R5 f/ L4 |8 s. W0 B3 L. G% s9 v
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改进: In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills.
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17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians.
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8 z/ m# j6 Q: [6 b" ?$ ` 改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand. 8 o/ B! h- l5 f
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18. This knowledge will become a part of your body. # G4 v F; x# o1 ^0 ]" z7 r
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改进: This knowledge will become part of you. , ]6 _; X R$ P n
- r* J% T. m; v/ U. A 19. They cannot think clearly. , i1 t6 X( \1 P1 A, {$ U4 P
! K% D0 K" k) r& L% J; b 改进: They cannot think straight.
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20. Money can improve their living standard.
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改进: Money can improve their life. 8 `/ Q" \( }! ?3 L1 T$ K) d2 m
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21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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/ O9 h( |, t" N 改进: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life.
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改进: If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life.
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23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later.
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5 a4 H5 C, S) H7 L& r1 O0 g1 Y, D 改进: One purpose of education is to learn to learn. ) F+ h% C$ ]" d3 k5 s& v' O4 `! g" s
6 @" I+ p; l0 l' Z& c1 z 24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano.
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25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others.
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改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others. " J+ p2 Z8 C, K5 ~
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26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.
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) ]. K2 ^+ ?7 v ? 改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal. 7 ]+ r1 R. H V/ U2 q/ Z
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27. Smoking can help you relax your mind.
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改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.
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6 A; |) B. o8 f; O: W' z 28. What's about nonsmokers? ! n) n9 P9 s" Z/ v2 L
- ]& u% M, k8 m K% B. y 改进: What about nonsmokers?
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29. Why not to be a non-smoker? 5 C" r* _ M# `& o, p9 y3 G5 t
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改进: Why not be a non-smoker? + I; u. ~1 Y' a8 I. [( S
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30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.
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" \$ J7 L8 Q2 c4 B% l 改进: Everyone has friends in his life. {# P, A' k+ w3 u
$ }+ ~0 W( S# q# i 31. I am not good at maths, but English , e h x: o3 t# W9 }# J) v
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改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English. 9 r3 f N$ l, T" e
- r, I: L) E. v2 T* h- { 32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time?
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改进: Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time?
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# n- w5 R; `; { 33.It is children who clear about their interests.
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4 _: O" q! f6 S+ M' F 改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.
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* ^7 C5 F. E# U$ r, [ O" Y 34. I agree the latter idea. ' @+ V) [1 v3 z' d _2 E
9 p0 X; M& I5 |2 ?# d 改进: I agree with the latter idea.
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3 t7 n: R4 N% @* @" ~! q 35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.
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改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo. 5 u! k0 B5 t7 j. {2 G0 k( o
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36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now. / X. B* u& g7 n7 h
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' A0 `' j! Y! k$ n+ d 37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.
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" ]% U; O$ n# D& W: m 改进：People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn. . m* `: p# B" A8 P3 \% u
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38. No one knows all the things.
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9 W) k0 U X6 ~& p3 l 改进: No one knows everything. ' W1 b- _9 d2 a# ~* c( C" K8 C( W
+ ^4 ~5 I/ J; A9 v 39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.
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改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life. 8 o! n; m8 S0 s" C+ s
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40. Each form of having friends has its advantages
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6 z' }, ]' b5 G6 A/ Q, k 改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages. ) {, J9 H9 e, O/ l8 P$ P
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41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up. : F3 Q0 ]4 e/ M' c$ U6 N+ e
% ?+ }+ |! h9 y1 S9 h3 M 改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply . | z e [# T% R1 ?
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42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.
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改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor. - x) S1 Z" l- ]8 v
$ h8 q: w/ {: w q7 b3 e2 l 43. They will learn the bad habits. & S7 X5 C( ~* G' f
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改进: They will develop bad habits. 6 _, Y5 x0 W- q/ E2 V
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44. In this continued process, people make progress.
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改进: In this cycle, people make progress. 8 X. A% r1 d+ q, S( ?
1 c9 H. e1 _ H( `4 q4 k+ B# t 45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary. . K, s) G( }9 l8 q
4 w6 u* u; m* n/ R% ^0 r 改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary. ) j6 x$ \8 H, |! Z5 A3 J; f0 B
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46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.
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, ^/ N5 c$ w& M4 Q5 V8 K% j6 F; w 改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.
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9 ^! x. @& Q9 u8 z 47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact. * } b( {+ _. Z" l8 p7 H h2 E
5 W; X& o1 N0 S' k$ ?3 t) | 改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.
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48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing. h6 ]" s& D0 g+ b% h) _
& w5 N! Y w' V t4 i2 K* J 改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.
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49. Children should be taught disciplines in order to avoid unnecessary lost.
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改进: Children should be taught discipline in order to avoid unnecessary loss.
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50. I felt alone. 9 y8 G/ G8 f) g" N+ t- x
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