锻造地道英语句子

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　　1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.

　　改进：Artists' work upgrades our civilization.
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　　2. For example, you work in a big factory.

9 \& X" k6 f+ I4 r4 \) o- D　　改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.
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　　3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.
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6 {' }; c3 r% k# a  p　　改进：You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.
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　　4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.

. W  d8 q1 J% B% H7 D( a% k　　改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.

　　5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.
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　　改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.
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　　6. Their brain is still very young.

- s/ V% }( r% J  g4 B. g1 ^. {　　改进: They are still immature.

　　7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.

　　改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.
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　　8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.

　　改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.

　　9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.
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* l6 s$ _' j3 W. i　　改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.
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; a! Y" s  q: c　　10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.
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' \9 @2 \7 W( e! q; J4 [　　改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.
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7 @! ~  d4 g- T: x5 O　　11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.

8 c1 y( C; q/ u0 ]% T! x* V　　改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development.

　　12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.

8 w. u" b( ~2 [3 F　　改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money.
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　　13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.
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" p* L% g# s0 U6 ~5 ~　　改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.
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% r# I' D. v, s% C　　14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money.

" C0 J0 l) y7 z, U; A* i1 {　　改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more.
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, ^* H+ f  p5 S4 c/ u/ b　　15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.
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　　改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products.

　　16. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills.
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& Z" e% _& P% N　　改进: In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills.

3 Z) B$ f) U! Q2 ], d* h2 i: P　　17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians.
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　　改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand.
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4 y& Q$ k( l& y　　18. This knowledge will become a part of your body.

　　改进: This knowledge will become part of you.

" @9 k8 L2 |5 ~　　19. They cannot think clearly.
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　　改进: They cannot think straight.
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* E9 v0 |* B; B' q- d　　20. Money can improve their living standard.

& q: K: Y5 |" \: o/ [　　改进: Money can improve their life.
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　　21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money.

　　改进: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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/ t% I  u- m) h# w9 N　　22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life.

　　改进: If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life.
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+ B) s4 H6 L! O2 y7 M　　23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later.

　　改进: One purpose of education is to learn to learn.
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　　24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano.
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, p' d7 R  ^; @: g3 c# T9 m　　改进: Many parents send their children to piano classes.
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　　25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others.

　　改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others.

　　26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.
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% b2 T. n! d  n( ~- i' @* M　　改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.

9 H* g% O2 [1 L7 E　　27. Smoking can help you relax your mind.
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$ d7 w) [6 }! w( s, E* J　　改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.
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' z; J8 c! r  [8 v  }　　28. What's about nonsmokers?
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+ u7 l1 B, @& y3 t) q1 x　　改进: What about nonsmokers?

; s+ ~5 s' w; W4 W3 D: C　　29. Why not to be a non-smoker?
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　　改进: Why not be a non-smoker?

　　30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.

' r( Z  E+ m, R/ ]" y. a+ t　　改进: Everyone has friends in his life.

/ t8 T4 U. L) U" _　　31. I am not good at maths, but English

& ?7 h7 A- D  X/ b5 p2 j　　改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.
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　　32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time?

　　改进: Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time?
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$ t  l4 N6 n* `  y. z: R　　33.It is children who clear about their interests.
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, k4 o# m8 r  d! V) i4 Z+ m; w4 J　　改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.
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　　34. I agree the latter idea.

9 ~9 q- s' q/ w& U5 F　　改进: I agree with the latter idea.
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　　35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.
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　　改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.
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　　36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.

# {' h0 d5 u" h2 u9 X% l　　改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.
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　　37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.

　　改进：People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.
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　　38. No one knows all the things.
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　　改进: No one knows everything.
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　　39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.

　　改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.
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/ `1 U+ L$ u' P2 D　　40. Each form of having friends has its advantages

- ]7 i# E" W1 C　　改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.

2 ^) ~" z8 n& o' C　　41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up.
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　　改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply

# [, o2 a& e$ _+ V; p　　42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.

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/ O* o9 n3 k# h% O/ P　　43. They will learn the bad habits.

　　改进: They will develop bad habits.

　　44. In this continued process, people make progress.

　　改进: In this cycle, people make progress.
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　　45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.

　　改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.

　　46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.

　　改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.

　　47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.

　　改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.

( e9 \2 ~- T' v- X! [3 ~) d) R2 F; Q　　48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.
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% g5 \+ D8 s0 G1 B　　改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.

　　49. Children should be taught disciplines in order to avoid unnecessary lost.
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　　改进: Children should be taught discipline in order to avoid unnecessary loss.
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9 X0 E0 T5 u; ~8 f) `　　50. I felt alone.
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& U! T7 P+ [& r0 B: P6 t* G. a　　改进: I felt lonely.

孤寒一剑

wow, where did you get those sample (the cheglish one)? I have to say the revised samples are really really good.

Thanks

sindowa

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平时的积累，呵呵！

玫瑰上的小蚂蚁

maxlake

能否解释一下 status quo 是什么意思。

寒塘鹤影

是现状的意思

spark

:lol::lol::lol:

玄紫妖妖

Wow,看得我头晕目悬的...还是记不住...呵呵

醉酒当歌

有些改进似乎意思有些改变...

自由自在

好哦．xiexie

penguin

thanks

lischka