锻造地道英语句子

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　　1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.
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. n- z4 \. t0 {7 W+ K　　改进：Artists' work upgrades our civilization.
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　　2. For example, you work in a big factory.

　　改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.

　　3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.

$ D7 n$ N$ y% G2 O, P　　改进：You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.
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8 f& j  o" f9 j　　4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.
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　　改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.
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& Z5 _; m6 I+ O, c　　5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.
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　　改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.

  v+ `1 X* L, H. F1 t7 _; n　　6. Their brain is still very young.
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　　改进: They are still immature.
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4 s( V. Q5 R3 z2 K7 G+ w　　7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.

8 I& E! P7 Z$ a1 I1 k5 z+ h* |　　改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.

9 k. Z* j5 \; A  {+ c; s1 V7 w% o! M& p5 w　　8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.
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) E3 n' z, }" K# K; c- `　　改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.
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# ?7 z% t% ?9 U% V, [. L　　9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.

* E3 Q$ m$ y: V4 r" u1 M: S　　改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.
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4 n3 P6 X. v, r　　10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.

　　改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.
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7 p  P7 E$ R/ }" J/ T# H　　11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.
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& z7 {& Y1 l" }" ~; |( |　　改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development.

+ O8 b+ _" C; M, t　　12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.

　　改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money.

　　13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.

  I0 {  h9 z6 d/ H  L2 `, F　　改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.

( b' i( F+ W% @# z/ O# J　　14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money.
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　　改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more.

　　15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.

　　改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products.
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% i4 L) e$ r9 Z, m! U　　16. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills.
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　　改进: In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills.

8 o6 o4 Z" u7 X; x% D0 ?( G2 |+ H7 c　　17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians.
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! Y: S0 c/ P4 N! H$ ~, [　　改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand.
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　　18. This knowledge will become a part of your body.
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5 l$ G1 S. E  q% Q( \. q: v& I　　改进: This knowledge will become part of you.
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* B& f  a8 u7 L( I# f7 ?　　19. They cannot think clearly.

# O# d) x! z7 n9 V' M. e　　改进: They cannot think straight.

! G" x5 u2 J! r- p  V1 f* N　　20. Money can improve their living standard.
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  ~' x& S+ ]7 `1 E　　改进: Money can improve their life.

. i+ _- |& Z. ^8 x) {　　21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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% L) |; d# Z3 q! w2 O　　改进: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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3 k! {! P+ k: |& ?　　22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life.

　　改进: If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life.
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, w/ ?# S& B' ~/ h  v# r( W7 f　　23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later.

* y; _" S/ }1 W. o, B0 \$ X' ~6 c1 R　　改进: One purpose of education is to learn to learn.

　　24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano.

　　改进: Many parents send their children to piano classes.
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　　25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others.
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　　改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others.
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　　26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.
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　　改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.
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　　27. Smoking can help you relax your mind.
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3 a0 U, Q3 I) ~/ s) S. ~4 ?; W　　改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.

　　28. What's about nonsmokers?
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　　改进: What about nonsmokers?
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+ B! s- R9 V8 c* F% J/ ^　　29. Why not to be a non-smoker?
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　　改进: Why not be a non-smoker?

; i3 O1 F. I' L, G& ?& I. f　　30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.

　　改进: Everyone has friends in his life.

　　31. I am not good at maths, but English
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　　改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.

$ j& i/ x' h% v  v7 o　　32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time?
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　　改进: Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time?

  @! b2 `* }4 J　　33.It is children who clear about their interests.

+ \% D+ e3 d$ z9 Z+ o, X* U- Q　　改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.

1 J6 w* T% ?* T& A* o" F8 o　　34. I agree the latter idea.
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* d- g* m4 V2 W! ?; T　　改进: I agree with the latter idea.

　　35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.
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* J* [$ q2 G: x1 N1 g# C　　改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.

　　36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.
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! Z" {; J8 V- v8 {3 e$ ^* u. P　　改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.

" W, f2 i* X+ Y/ ^1 y　　37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.

2 Y6 y9 p. y6 m" B8 u/ [$ E* r　　改进：People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.

, `" P1 N0 O; X$ L　　38. No one knows all the things.
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　　改进: No one knows everything.
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# q- ~$ a2 F8 W+ T1 ^8 i3 |. h& b7 H　　39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.

" ]) {& A0 E" \0 D- C　　改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.

" ^1 ?" h# [$ a: u( `- ?　　40. Each form of having friends has its advantages

　　改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.

　　41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up.
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$ f- B6 X  R. l- Z8 X+ ~# h" X% ?# ^$ g　　改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply
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　　42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.

. K' b' Q2 \3 F) F　　改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.
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4 s$ b( m3 E: Q1 J/ w　　43. They will learn the bad habits.
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0 }8 j6 l( ~7 |' B% ]" s$ w　　改进: They will develop bad habits.
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  ~; A2 c/ h" I; ~9 ~" J3 m# j$ ]' ]　　44. In this continued process, people make progress.
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　　改进: In this cycle, people make progress.
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　　45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.

　　改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.

9 w4 o0 Q, w7 H: T4 [% F+ V8 d2 N　　46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.

　　改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.
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8 q/ c% m, j$ t& g7 @6 J　　47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.

  S/ f8 b; a7 B, L  [　　改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.

# E2 u3 Y- U# X0 Y　　48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.

* \3 V: k) p1 v6 \　　改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.

　　49. Children should be taught disciplines in order to avoid unnecessary lost.
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　　改进: Children should be taught discipline in order to avoid unnecessary loss.

　　50. I felt alone.

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孤寒一剑

wow, where did you get those sample (the cheglish one)? I have to say the revised samples are really really good.
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sindowa

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平时的积累，呵呵！

玫瑰上的小蚂蚁

maxlake

能否解释一下 status quo 是什么意思。

寒塘鹤影

是现状的意思

spark

:lol::lol::lol:

玄紫妖妖

Wow,看得我头晕目悬的...还是记不住...呵呵

醉酒当歌

有些改进似乎意思有些改变...

自由自在

好哦．xiexie

penguin

thanks

lischka