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1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.
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1 [- J# \, ?( c% p& M$ F3 h 改进:Artists' work upgrades our civilization. + C$ K% ~# j, G' X z9 ~7 K
4 L6 ]3 h. B5 q" Q; P 2. For example, you work in a big factory. + s5 _9 ?$ s% d/ a0 G' ^; }
7 \4 h1 W D8 d2 P, L 改进: Suppose you work in a big factory. # I6 H A) O# v
; n4 L1 `* W! B2 V: E$ e: L 3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.
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4 V2 @9 E* i- d. s3 K% s" b 改进:You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.
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4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck. - q6 t" |3 T3 q% }0 x0 D+ L
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改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck. ' I. u3 m. }9 o0 I
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5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level. ! I! Q% k7 |& ?
: X9 E; y6 l! |# m* ~4 ^ 改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life. & ?$ W$ M y6 G9 J
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6. Their brain is still very young. % _& v# o2 H: r7 G: M$ J7 m" G
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改进: They are still immature.
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& Y! ]. N, h r; n( W2 g( j 7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.
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改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.
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8 o/ Q4 ^! Z" O% o5 I( @ 8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.
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改进: They cannot tell right from wrong. 7 Z5 `, }9 O, U" t" K
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9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.
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3 B' ^3 q! g( d: b 改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.
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! z, m, W3 n1 @: P+ e' ~/ f 10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life. * ~- \3 {6 ]/ w
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改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.
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( Z; e! ~' y) m6 [/ p9 f 11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development. * @# F0 I6 W1 [7 Y l# d" m/ O! z5 V
- A) i8 H( Z) \7 T7 O 改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development.
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12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money. 6 j0 H8 c. _3 U2 P, J
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改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money. 2 z/ j, o) }) r p* x; y
2 O: |6 B6 e4 }, \! | 13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.
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) O5 y$ ^6 f+ s5 Y1 ^ 改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.
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14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money.
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改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more. $ l4 u6 `: ]. }; ?" n. L/ n
# s) W, F( U. `) J1 P# m" h 15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products. 5 K u% V v6 s9 Q9 x! K7 G6 h
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改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products.
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16. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills.
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) @( B, `2 z# ]3 H* M* ?2 B& z0 C( P& I 改进: In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills. ; P# X$ T- D" j$ n6 @; F
9 P$ r: {' i' H; s+ X# d3 B) T4 r4 b 17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians. , s' J7 \- B! O! @# v; I
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改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand.
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18. This knowledge will become a part of your body.
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; J; ?# a& v8 s4 G. c4 q8 a3 N# X, d 改进: This knowledge will become part of you.
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1 M2 K. D9 z8 v 19. They cannot think clearly.
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: u2 N" H, k4 i8 b& R/ Q 改进: They cannot think straight.
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20. Money can improve their living standard.
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改进: Money can improve their life. : _8 _6 V9 V% K& `
1 \: S6 ~0 @! u( Q/ ]4 E3 V z& N8 X 21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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5 F. F1 d5 o$ i6 h* u 改进: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life. " w& j' x" n/ X3 z" ]! t+ _9 X
9 K* O& d* v0 j& g 改进: If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life.
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23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later.
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改进: One purpose of education is to learn to learn. $ }. R: n/ ]( V9 |4 Y: b1 F. ]
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24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano. 3 `# t" ?% }) x
/ u0 N7 _' D! j, s' U 改进: Many parents send their children to piano classes.
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25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others. 4 p1 q& _; B# V
3 R' U, K0 M7 C# t7 Z, P& g 改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others. ) C/ f! P3 {/ l
0 G0 Z* R7 l$ B* V6 L% Z 26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing. " g* h% H2 ^) Z
( I5 Y {' u' I6 D. h% } 改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.
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1 `; c/ E2 Q& K; ^ 27. Smoking can help you relax your mind. * n- d2 F6 N& V1 `2 m; b3 `' R+ r
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改进: Cigarettes can help you relax. 5 ^0 L9 ?& d8 e
# D. b {0 _4 x% V1 y 28. What's about nonsmokers? : d' V& G- b: c" |! H7 n7 }" a/ C
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改进: What about nonsmokers?
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3 `. y7 {4 n3 o4 A 29. Why not to be a non-smoker? " l+ V& a# _. K; K+ @* d* o7 a
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改进: Why not be a non-smoker? ) e* H3 d. I& R
6 ~) C0 |4 ?/ e* G! k7 U* U 30. Everyone will have many friends in his life. * I" c: h, e% G) Z$ V5 J0 h; U
: L/ Q! q$ w3 j* V 改进: Everyone has friends in his life.
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31. I am not good at maths, but English : C' v, V! l9 a8 }* Z: F/ \9 x
" K9 I4 B8 d2 U" U+ \ 改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English. & E2 j8 G9 n# d: Q% @
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32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time?
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( i$ n, {) e3 b8 p$ q. i9 L0 S 33.It is children who clear about their interests.
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改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests. * U1 U7 O( q* u$ a, v
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34. I agree the latter idea. $ i$ `" H: r( i" W5 k
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改进: I agree with the latter idea. + P9 W9 s$ s4 P! `
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35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo. " n0 k- u6 {6 K5 N7 A. P; N
# O& ]( ?0 Q/ n6 L" ` 改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.
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36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now. ' ?' V& p: ^% y
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改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.
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/ m9 n* ?1 }+ c# n- ]) W- a 37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are. 8 d/ S; x& K" t3 J. u
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改进:People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn. ) F: q' Y( Y6 T0 A% ^' `. A
6 l* S X- w. ?- J( c 38. No one knows all the things. ; }* z7 r) r1 m
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改进: No one knows everything.
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39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.
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改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.
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4 N0 X* k' Z0 J6 f/ Y* S# T+ n# H 40. Each form of having friends has its advantages
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改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.
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& i* m: y. A. a6 T6 | 41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up. # P1 j' z2 x$ C
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改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply
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42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.
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5 w, k( ?1 z+ L v/ o4 Q) j 改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.
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8 O( |" _& G5 n* w- ?& P2 ?6 c 43. They will learn the bad habits. ' q* K1 K$ O2 d5 |2 W+ I- a
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" H6 m( x5 \/ V' r3 s 44. In this continued process, people make progress. $ m* O4 F$ `1 I5 F
7 R* l9 C; P- C1 S' p" G3 |/ t 改进: In this cycle, people make progress.
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& K5 v6 M' E2 P3 S6 r5 G 45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary. : L0 L& b0 X* F5 g: @: `, o
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( o" ^( M* Q, ~/ a# q% @ 46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.
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改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.
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4 y- p9 L! J: K+ N' f! O0 N J+ v 47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact. 8 Y* Y* D. N* W
( m8 k8 ?$ i# R4 v% j( B 改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.
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: e# a! P6 {; B; u 48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.
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改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.
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49. Children should be taught disciplines in order to avoid unnecessary lost. ; _; V0 \5 a2 E. j; A7 `. q
( R9 l0 Y4 {5 N0 ` 改进: Children should be taught discipline in order to avoid unnecessary loss.
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50. I felt alone.
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