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TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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发表于 2005-1-5 03:05 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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TOEFL 5分 作文框架
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TWE作文模板汇粹
' V' b! ], S' }' o# |) a(一) 对立观点式
& h5 b( x( m5 }1 a1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型) 8 F. O% r8 Y. f( X0 w4 M9 K
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" s9 K0 T+ h  ^/ ^3 ^- g(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons. 2 b1 N7 t4 {9 F
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
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: r+ E' ?' q$ z5 A$ p( s; XA is superior in another way, this is…
  h  X8 B; n1 D6 L( WIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
3 |+ I4 ~' j8 w7 t+ {9 X  GFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ... 7 l) P( Z1 v& N
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2 v2 K1 n: j( ^* t2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast) 2 M6 j/ G; `. Z+ C+ F* f) L' M+ O

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To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B. : s+ u: O; a4 U7 }. h
For A, A 的一个优势 ! R3 P- W# t6 P1 e7 {0 y
Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
5 @" G2 Z! `, x3 _0 K+ u# UFurthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is... % ]: d' S0 P7 N" ?9 k
on the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is… # r, N/ C& y" G8 }) Q
moreover, B的优点2,for example… + Q8 }8 I  ^% A; P5 }7 o
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2. 9 S; k" o5 ~& f2 v# t  Y1 P* S

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(二)单一观点式
+ Y/ \! c- L  O* m" ?( E$ R1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型) & O4 K4 n0 a0 G% `/ y2 Z

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首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
! [+ {4 y3 Q/ Z. t! r8 ]- mAfter pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
% z4 a" d7 \* A6 z8 \2 xThere is no denying that… ) D* o* z/ U$ _! B8 b
Another reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that… ' N* [$ ~3 A$ A9 u- U& ^! }- x
Finally,…
3 i* b- o1 c! r$ w! _Based on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that… 2 L  x( f' k- C, H0 _4 ^
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1 e& ^" F. u, P( Q: u9 T2 w* X2.给出一个论点,主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由.?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
) {) m. m: _2 o5 d(本类型只agree) 6 l) }" m9 Y, a0 w
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
- D4 E) s% y  A/ \  NThe main reason for my propensity for A is that…… 7 v3 N! o% B5 |* _
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
5 H+ ^5 ^# r2 I) I. w2 @( TA is superior in another way, this is…
0 F/ p7 J: i/ |' t) P+ sIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because… - Y4 x& @& R; i' P7 v. T7 Z
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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  t1 w; [0 j- j  q3 |0 q$ ](三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型
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There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
- I) L. o6 N" c6 Z3 _When reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
! N/ j% p2 G- ?: g+ o) G' BThe main reason for my propensity for C is that……
, ?& ~8 {3 z  E2 p8 W2 dWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
! I4 X8 B3 S7 c4 F: A4 {C is superior in another way, this is… 1 ?+ f4 O4 s; E& H6 v
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C   z& v, L9 w3 T  V5 w0 c
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us. " d9 J+ n2 }8 U2 R5 n& k
(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)
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3 x3 |. x1 j5 O$ r(四)原因解释型 6 y, a# B$ }3 {6 R% Z$ N1 [2 i
1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.
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9 }7 W6 j) s( UAmong countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows. ! E- Q( i! f/ }
One of the primary causes is that… 5 ~/ k# Q$ g- V+ [; O8 ]
XXX also results from… , o7 U2 `, k* }
… is responsible for xxx, as well.
9 U0 _8 b0 m7 `. y7 zTo put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX 0 z% O/ u! [) j2 ^9 I# d
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, u7 }1 g% {8 J1 w2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something. 4 O* t% z& I# Z

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There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.
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One of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
) T: G# V* g4 C6 W% W3 ^% d/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
* P0 K7 p: p  q+ u/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…
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2 A8 D, N" I; @* fa more subtle point which we must consider is that… " X9 ]7 @, J3 d; w) U2 K, {

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% \$ p, L; r7 X! Q- EIn addition/ furthermore
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2 w/ C5 u9 o1 i! FIn conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……
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发表于 2005-1-6 12:10 | 显示全部楼层
嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?
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再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.
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