TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架
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(一) 对立观点式
+ \3 U+ b+ g' z6 R- E1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)



- P, d. W0 P4 E" d: m- cTo choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
# W9 d- {2 ^  d* s8 ~( [For A, A 的一个优势
Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
) L2 C9 S9 d; U: P* l  c+ cFurthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
0 p% ?' s) @) ~# zon the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
; Q% e; w, J. V- D/ f# f( rmoreover, B的优点2,for example…
/ S- d9 b- c$ l- ~+ vFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.

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(二)单一观点式
0 e* f* d/ W2 E( g# W5 O5 F1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)
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8 t2 G/ {- u. n" Y: p首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
9 k) U0 K: W1 h: kAfter pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
There is no denying that…
Another reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
Finally,…
" H; r+ B* ]* e) p9 w! b& `' G' {Based on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…
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) {' ~! L1 j0 Q+ l# \' ~, s. t  o２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
(本类型只agree)

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5 Q0 G' b" P; I9 g; A(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
. B% k8 L+ n$ H/ A3 d: tThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
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" m1 R: l7 }5 a2 e# U- x6 DIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
) x2 r$ a0 b' W+ c! t+ Z. ZFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型


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There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
When reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
9 U% M  W2 V; v$ `$ h, gThe main reason for my propensity for C is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
C is superior in another way, this is…
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
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(四)原因解释型
1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.
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0 q7 T4 E/ C; L1 A3 l1 b0 R1 C( F陈述这个事实
Among countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
One of the primary causes is that…
0 o4 V6 B! k% Q0 o1 IXXX also results from…
… is responsible for xxx, as well.
8 g# q, C7 w. U; n+ ETo put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX
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2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.



背景描述
There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.



6 F6 v5 g$ g0 S0 k9 T: UOne of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…
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a more subtle point which we must consider is that…



2 r% v3 U; W4 ]In addition/ furthermore
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3 L/ x& K0 a' W6 |, P0 {8 J- N2 mIn conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

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嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?

再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.
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; C2 x+ o/ a! c0 a" N/ ]0 ]4 `[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]