TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架


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' Z$ C( t6 @8 c% b* ~(一) 对立观点式
& R- m0 |/ B! k" ]1 L1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)
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' a1 @' Z$ E6 H9 V* X(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
; p. B) `* C% S7 `/ IThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
) l& y8 f2 m' ^$ W7 I0 Y4 q* M8 hA is superior in another way, this is…
. @) N1 `- N1 F6 c6 J2 \8 w9 HIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...

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* c3 b! B, q. D7 L: r2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)

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! [. g: z$ R/ n# u. D+ GTo choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
For A, A 的一个优势
Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
9 H% a, k1 \+ L+ {, _Furthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
: o! m. K; b# o% B* \) E5 zon the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
moreover, B的优点2,for example…
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.
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(二)单一观点式
1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)

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; K" Z, r, ^6 `2 \* f/ J5 T首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
There is no denying that…
Another reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
Finally,…
: q; U1 D- j0 E' \Based on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…
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２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
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5 o$ z& P6 Q9 E# q$ v+ u(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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0 t; j* C+ r# i; O(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型

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( A, Q  {3 r: \There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
When reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
The main reason for my propensity for C is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
C is superior in another way, this is…
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9 Y& N+ Y$ C; F7 m" d4 B" NFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)
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, D& w6 s3 J0 ^+ v. D* F& ?(四)原因解释型
1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.

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+ O, Y& r9 v  x, I8 g陈述这个事实
3 L5 v2 ?) w7 E  `5 V4 ~# YAmong countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
One of the primary causes is that…
7 \( g: f% k* B; C# eXXX also results from…
2 E5 g' O& g$ o& w8 a" h3 L… is responsible for xxx, as well.
To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX
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) O! p* B6 g& E* L  E2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.
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背景描述
" M+ ]0 P, V. xThere are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.

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3 B' ]3 b% y! t  s" VOne of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
# B/ w; n( c6 Z7 n' N( N4 R3 j/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…
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a more subtle point which we must consider is that…
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In addition/ furthermore
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In conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

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嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?
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3 g5 |* R" X* w; O( W+ O; }% i再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.
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7 \% ~' P5 J% I- t5 \3 j3 Q5 K[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]