TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架


TWE作文模板汇粹
6 ^7 a4 W* F( p( p$ R3 P(一) 对立观点式
2 g$ Q9 |2 o' S# f% K# q& D; t: h1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)
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# [' ~, c$ W8 p" P! {9 F" ?/ {(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
1 ?( @. I" o! a- K: U# _The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
) x" R$ G3 P6 N, _3 ?What is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
& O, u0 k; q% D! g' C2 GFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)
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" M: f$ L5 \- o. K/ s6 O1 s- VTo choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
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Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
7 P& Z( m, S' a* E  }2 lFurthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
on the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
moreover, B的优点2,for example…
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.




. Q, _5 N8 s  A* Y6 {7 A( v(二)单一观点式
" G! z8 q9 x0 d2 u1 b# g+ S0 b- ?1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)
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首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
There is no denying that…
Another reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
: `5 f7 M5 u7 w6 ?+ H* k9 eFinally,…
Based on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…
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3 q. t- U. `! H8 m5 C3 T２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
(本类型只agree)
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  c8 [1 p! F/ [. K8 z8 B(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
4 ?" g' b( t5 PThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
% D4 Y7 \8 E3 n7 ZWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
0 S7 V) r5 f; h, T  r% lFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型
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; C" q/ [: N$ T; ?1 FThere exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
When reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
# m* I( G/ W/ r5 G' eThe main reason for my propensity for C is that……
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C is superior in another way, this is…
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)
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7 I# d4 e: |, Q; l( ?  G(四)原因解释型
5 W9 m- o6 g: r5 g5 j9 M) q1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.



陈述这个事实
8 f. t/ A6 F! d" `# ?! c* ?Among countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
5 V. K& x* b: @, s) {. T+ COne of the primary causes is that…
; F# |" |5 E& b1 OXXX also results from…
6 v7 n9 _; e# j: j… is responsible for xxx, as well.
! U" t2 }# q! O9 H- kTo put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX
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2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.
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背景描述
There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.
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8 i" d/ O3 w0 `4 c2 B1 x4 t4 }One of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
! W+ v* I# ~9 n! U/ \( v; z/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
- E; q- S, }: m  I/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…

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a more subtle point which we must consider is that…
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) u, a5 X  ^) b) CIn addition/ furthermore
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* f8 @' X' o& |/ PIn conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

朱顺顺

嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?
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再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.

8 {( I3 P2 D& `[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]