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TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架9 U4 L, N) S' n" u: e% ~1 s3 Q6 p

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TWE作文模板汇粹
3 O6 q3 m( D* H$ @( C(一) 对立观点式 7 G5 d1 |" F" c) K6 v: L
1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型) 2 O6 O  S3 {4 U4 F$ ]3 B$ O
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons. 3 A* b" ?! |1 u4 J2 V/ D
The main reason for my propensity for A is that…… ; s+ `( t2 R& W  c0 _1 S  P
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
+ h5 H( m- _- G! k/ LA is superior in another way, this is…
& c2 `! N# U7 v6 @# ?It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
- m: f& P8 Z6 K+ I* L* Y" UFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ... / S2 h- V. L& x. l, k
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" Z+ ^5 B' ~# e; E+ q2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)
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To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
7 e' s* n6 Z; I! U5 ~$ i9 z3 CFor A, A 的一个优势 5 V  o3 t- v- h: m
Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance, 2 [" g% Y7 o6 m6 j; D
Furthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is... % S1 j# E3 [: X5 ~4 n. E$ J
on the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
) y3 z% `: u5 }6 ?2 Q+ smoreover, B的优点2,for example…
- B$ i  j3 t$ U+ a+ h0 }& lFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.
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0 {% \/ D% V0 }: V8 k& D" c1 F(二)单一观点式 # k% G1 Y2 L; W+ x7 ]
1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型) 9 a8 ~) ?' I; o4 I7 x' D

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# a$ E6 ]0 J2 M: S首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
9 I( e& \% S0 tAfter pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
0 c* N0 f* K6 i1 jThere is no denying that… 4 K" O: a) ^+ d) F% O
Another reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
8 H5 b6 }' x  m1 z  }Finally,…
, I, K4 Z; C- f! v! uBased on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that… 7 u: z+ v* @, m& v
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9 n' R5 Z! K+ j5 [3 T: A" e, N2.给出一个论点,主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由.?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型) 5 x& Q1 T  S' s" y% J
(本类型只agree)
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5 r$ U6 F. C. G) v3 m' T( P' Y(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C. : s  }* u7 U$ J
The main reason for my propensity for A is that…… ( A- }  k' |# V. o
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
3 J: |: W0 U! r6 X4 [7 m0 H* ]A is superior in another way, this is… 6 V4 j( {" q5 ?$ X- \
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
# G" x, \" V8 p& B, MFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ... . q/ x: O; Y6 o/ m- x1 A" s3 a
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(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型
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There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D. 5 U7 C* J* W0 [+ p2 P: k: g
When reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
- C" g& n# w4 iThe main reason for my propensity for C is that…… 3 ^% Z/ D0 ^. s- P) v' r3 `
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
7 ]# H: T* _8 l: r% F. iC is superior in another way, this is…
' E% {. D$ i$ E" c) i' ZFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C * n7 o5 O' ^! X  ^, |7 x
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us. & m1 Y/ Y$ Y) C' _: F
(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.) , k  a2 Z) V4 V

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(四)原因解释型 8 Q  R; X8 e8 [" u0 i, f0 P& Y
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Among countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows. 5 [7 G( p* F: ]8 b. v' x' e2 Y6 s
One of the primary causes is that… : {% ]  Q+ y* _" @; U
XXX also results from…
/ i. R& w# H, e: r3 ]9 H… is responsible for xxx, as well. ' ~: Y5 M' c$ q3 f2 `# m
To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX " D$ D* \4 s' y

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0 s! I0 M" s4 c* C! V2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something. 3 j' C; b7 c5 U6 W4 ^# Y8 z

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There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there. " V" o* K5 }. h4 c

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One of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
; N' W" ~' U: t/ J/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
$ c0 W& p9 L6 L) B! T& g/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that… 8 P9 h1 ?5 v6 }. Q* L# T
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9 K0 f, n' y8 ea more subtle point which we must consider is that… ) D7 ], R' p3 G4 A% b7 u7 h

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8 d' D2 @: ~  I/ hIn addition/ furthermore
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" n$ l( ?5 F0 g9 V+ n% `* b# RIn conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……
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发表于 2005-1-6 12:10 | 显示全部楼层
嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?7 A7 m+ e& A( N: [4 j

+ l1 c9 N9 B9 h$ d6 |3 d7 o3 x6 i再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.! d1 A! d3 L2 w
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