TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架


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1 [" y# v; k' a1 M(一) 对立观点式
' ]& |; c0 [+ \1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
% u. r3 N1 O5 D. S# k3 m  |' j& bThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
  I. P- ~2 ?, W1 O$ P4 \What is also worth noticing fact is that……
! k  {) ^& g% R  x8 K% TA is superior in another way, this is…
. T1 o9 S$ ?5 MIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)

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To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
8 e$ w6 {4 Z  ^5 }- g, NFor A, A 的一个优势
Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
Furthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
on the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
" ~8 ]" o! Z* ^; X! cmoreover, B的优点2,for example…
  ?! t' J) z, @  ?+ oFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.
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(二)单一观点式
6 d: ~/ q+ Q7 n1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)
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" a% G) C% X" r2 u- |1 [首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
' L# L: [" _' e; I1 jAfter pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
There is no denying that…
; [+ P" Q- r( z- |" z) f% V$ IAnother reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
Finally,…
' X8 k7 x- A0 k' XBased on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…



２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
(本类型只agree)

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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
% H- L! Q& _6 w1 \; q- u5 O- p; zThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
% x) N" m' ~; {  a& r, r* bFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型

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There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
/ e; R- I5 C- T6 S/ p9 L3 r" |6 KWhen reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
The main reason for my propensity for C is that……
' z* L) _/ j9 z& cWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
, ~5 q& \. [; S0 A  @3 oC is superior in another way, this is…
3 R8 U2 U2 q7 `! ~From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
2 b4 I$ ]/ h2 N7 j- Q9 b(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)

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(四)原因解释型
5 L2 u! S* \5 S3 ?: N1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.


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Among countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
' y" D1 e4 p& F: |0 MOne of the primary causes is that…
$ `* ?' O) q2 BXXX also results from…
, `2 L. q) j  k4 P… is responsible for xxx, as well.
* X+ m8 d4 g: a4 j" M+ ETo put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX

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2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.



背景描述
+ ~$ {, M7 e& A+ x9 S7 N4 I& fThere are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.


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One of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…


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; o. z9 ?, G# k1 b, |; Oa more subtle point which we must consider is that…



; F* D2 {# F  AIn addition/ furthermore
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In conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

朱顺顺

嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?

再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.
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# _/ X' n2 Z1 Y6 Z[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]