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TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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发表于 2005-1-5 03:05 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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TOEFL 5分 作文框架
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7 M4 D, [  `& ?4 T1 o( }% |(一) 对立观点式
$ p& Y+ p' }- W0 s1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)
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  i& I0 q6 [8 \(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.   H1 i9 o" O, ?. Q: l- P* I
The main reason for my propensity for A is that…… ' @: p, e" d' A' d' P- R) x
What is also worth noticing fact is that…… , Q+ T+ i# A+ z
A is superior in another way, this is…
; z; T, u' a4 J+ L  {" hIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because… ! J4 q4 t- h5 ?) D$ L) z
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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+ z1 A0 X$ U7 l: g2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)
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To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
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! E  k  |: {; A& E+ v, x# `) @, MWhoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
% m) J4 s, f/ v* h+ pFurthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
- l% T4 Z0 \% m0 s' |; D+ _on the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is… . D& W% K, ]) B  L
moreover, B的优点2,for example…
8 g0 T; o9 C- ~  o4 @From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2. " n/ y) B+ c) ?) L
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6 x* X& v- ^' O  H5 E" S6 U(二)单一观点式
' d7 q* B/ B5 {6 W" T4 i( c9 l1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型) - ~3 V- _, B' _; Z: x% Z
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首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase. : k( T* ?6 f$ W
After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
1 _, g, L1 t- ?* W2 \There is no denying that…
/ q0 e" X( n/ d  G2 k- P3 uAnother reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that… $ v: i7 \) ^# Q+ u, ]1 @
Finally,…
- K) k9 w0 u4 j/ n) F  i( s4 H9 eBased on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that… , u4 b8 i9 P8 D4 g8 ]" f

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. n* {: N4 _; G) x" I( D- f2.给出一个论点,主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由.?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C. / w3 e5 i/ m! o8 a9 K6 U
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
4 O; E; p" p  D8 V  E3 d6 X2 ]What is also worth noticing fact is that…… $ J# Y; E4 I- \/ I
A is superior in another way, this is…
* I0 s" D. n! r* V. [; |It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…   L  a5 N& q: I( x1 A
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ... ) ]0 O8 {. r, t+ a

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(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型
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There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D. & _: v% j1 [/ i" i+ v3 W
When reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
0 ^( H, E2 y+ w# D6 {3 UThe main reason for my propensity for C is that…… 5 h" V' }1 x/ s
What is also worth noticing fact is that…… ! {) C8 R9 F, W* Q
C is superior in another way, this is… 4 C' P: ?. {* I6 L) V
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
, S" a( [. k- s2 }1 |From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
7 |" A6 N6 W8 a/ K; M(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)
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/ Y) b! D6 l, }- e; Z/ P7 _6 Y(四)原因解释型 4 H$ q7 D# F; [  h- F
1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.
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陈述这个事实
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One of the primary causes is that…
: l( \% x5 D2 h8 A* f% W% L  CXXX also results from… - u5 R0 Y1 C5 f) C
… is responsible for xxx, as well. & j) W; M6 d9 {5 v1 o  m6 C. M
To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX
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2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something. - O& A; Y0 q; a
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There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.
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( v3 c. G7 P7 t) W; R# }One of the primary method, to my mind, is that… " _% ]% Z& x/ ~. A( N: F) l
/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that… 3 t. d1 U" {; u3 K' R9 Q, `8 c  q
/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that… ! r, l$ X$ r  W0 U

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7 F4 u2 k; W2 J: da more subtle point which we must consider is that…
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In conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……
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发表于 2005-1-6 12:10 | 显示全部楼层
嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?( H+ y5 t0 ^& x; X! a2 J. C
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再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.
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[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]
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