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发表于 2005-1-5 03:05 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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TOEFL 5分 作文框架
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1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型) ) O9 O" F5 Y! E) m. E* u
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons. 7 }. n/ \) S- g1 U* L  q1 e
The main reason for my propensity for A is that…… ( c; I1 `- n1 k0 m# A' P
What is also worth noticing fact is that…… ( t1 ^2 }+ N2 @# i
A is superior in another way, this is… ) {- a+ H: i% E- W" K2 o8 H. @
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because… 3 O  K. @; E* W6 z) M7 }
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)
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To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B. ! s3 w5 g2 U0 @% E1 s
For A, A 的一个优势 8 C2 t( |+ E1 \' I) ?- ?
Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
3 g5 [' h+ A3 _* N8 {1 O8 {Furthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
8 Y4 d/ T4 q3 E5 T$ ^  g; Con the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
! n3 N# L+ L! T8 g8 j2 P. ?% Umoreover, B的优点2,for example…
& T5 K2 T2 ]  ]: Z- Z7 E/ U* LFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.
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(二)单一观点式
0 X. f1 ?/ y& h% v& f1 k1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型) $ Y/ B" m! N; O* |2 _+ a
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After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.   F1 i  v, A$ Y6 p. O
There is no denying that… ( g" N/ }& y  D  E9 f
Another reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that… ' m: ?, y5 M  O7 M0 T4 ?: q
Finally,…   F4 G& C  ~" N$ f- y, I& i
Based on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that… . W& e# r5 s) [7 k+ p# w8 y
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2.给出一个论点,主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由.?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型) + L. A( X/ p' V& U3 G( x. T
(本类型只agree) 2 P( @0 A% Z6 l* w# \5 h% G0 _

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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C. , w+ m7 P' v0 L% X: k7 Z8 D
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
1 C; L, {. Q( @What is also worth noticing fact is that……
- O& n. ?* B4 zA is superior in another way, this is…
8 n1 E5 v9 |- h1 R' DIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because… ' j% p/ K9 ~# n1 \
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型
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/ u3 W3 t& M8 }6 `' m7 fThere exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
0 |2 H  e# R" |) Z, f3 WWhen reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
* \( f  w5 U8 ?/ {9 L( U! ?* g  GThe main reason for my propensity for C is that……
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+ P- y# h8 b% l5 {C is superior in another way, this is… / i% w' ^  |' W( T! X/ z
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
2 Y" o1 E9 |7 ?From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
! i5 W9 z- S* i# I- I(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.) 0 a$ E4 U4 k- O5 w8 a8 h5 o

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& w) T! X- s0 J. Z(四)原因解释型 0 z7 V9 d" t# V. O" C* l& g
1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因. 3 m( Z8 I- [4 Q& |
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Among countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
7 g3 B" B4 J; [" z/ n5 sOne of the primary causes is that… 1 f6 Q& K0 L# B% [" \, G9 }$ p5 x
XXX also results from… 0 D; _* ?1 h1 O1 k
… is responsible for xxx, as well.
1 Q) Y$ M5 R8 i+ V1 B7 l2 {To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX 0 k- N: @7 d1 j/ F* m  t7 b" o% ?

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7 m4 m+ C& _/ B7 A6 b0 R2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.
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8 L: x# b( @' `: h& b' W: QThere are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.
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One of the primary method, to my mind, is that… . S% B( w% r  o3 I
/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that… 8 f3 V8 j4 U; k7 O; N
/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…
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a more subtle point which we must consider is that…
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/ {! p% S% d+ W1 YIn conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……
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发表于 2005-1-6 12:10 | 显示全部楼层
嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?
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# s6 X' F) |" S7 _! R/ d4 l5 |再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.- |6 \2 N2 b1 z$ m& G( ^3 V

" L0 t* L7 ]6 p; \9 u[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]
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