TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架
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* s: V1 ]: b/ b5 X. {  X9 j' W(一) 对立观点式
1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)
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0 M3 T; P, X4 n7 R(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
$ W3 x) S) H! }3 xThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
/ ?3 H, N1 N6 @" E! o  j& l/ ]It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
  X3 w9 ~- p. K  d4 l$ U7 XFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...

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  h- l8 p$ b! q; l# \2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)


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1 E# {" u& T8 L  I! u' p2 [To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
For A, A 的一个优势
# L) F& j, X! {5 R( \Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
Furthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
1 t- `1 O" C; R7 Non the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
: j( s! Y4 \3 p# [* i, Mmoreover, B的优点2,for example…
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.
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(二)单一观点式
8 e/ H& v* g, y7 m. S8 W1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)
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: c" o! J5 d% E7 w1 d- {首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
6 R  T. H) p" V# W! xAfter pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
There is no denying that…
" Q3 G3 g! D$ k6 b! RAnother reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
Finally,…
" g& p( Z; w$ Z% F+ z- O; E/ {3 qBased on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…
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２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
(本类型只agree)
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
) l3 Q, w4 S9 p  LThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
7 c$ S6 q8 D5 H; ]A is superior in another way, this is…
9 k- M9 p0 ^" o) y& v% i5 pIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
/ x; A( ?2 S, ?$ l8 Q( ]) d- l; mFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...



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% D/ E- S1 V. x6 q5 m* W* Z7 P& Y(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型
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There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
& E2 T* q% f/ }2 {When reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
& U7 S: R+ A" g; }- r7 NThe main reason for my propensity for C is that……
- ^8 `4 }" E; V" gWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
2 k2 U8 \5 G9 O  l( |) eC is superior in another way, this is…
9 }- {0 _- {. ]  \. h1 y( M; qFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
! f+ V& ~" v3 p. ^. hFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)
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6 ]. b: d' j, b0 Q; q% ~8 _/ Z(四)原因解释型
1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.

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; k' f& Q  j5 c, {6 j5 `, n7 J- p/ F陈述这个事实
7 t1 C/ Q6 I! Q9 E; hAmong countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
One of the primary causes is that…
  M" ~% W* h5 R7 f9 j9 {1 }' SXXX also results from…
; T2 Q2 f2 d8 l+ s6 G… is responsible for xxx, as well.
To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX

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2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.

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背景描述
There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.


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One of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
3 Q: i: |  q7 v0 b( S/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
* V/ }9 W. T( r; J5 B/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…


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+ {# }& e+ \% K! I) C% H9 Ra more subtle point which we must consider is that…
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/ O, B! u. A. ]3 T' VIn addition/ furthermore
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$ ^( o" J& Y& K# _' }. X# O5 l# s' jIn conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

朱顺顺

嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?

再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.

[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]