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I just wrote a poem- X1 l1 Q! G( t$ X: y
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.
" t7 }" z! [+ ~4 p! K& kHowever,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem( v& R. ?' _4 [/ f+ o
Thanks a lot!!!
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/ c) `6 S* s; H+ q! Y. _Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you 6 \& |* x0 ?* y/ V' O+ h$ b* Z
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
( P: `$ m3 v8 J$ v Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
3 e- s' K+ w8 O* I V" q Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
7 N2 n/ f% \1 U- Z" T3 |5 u" a7 a Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
3 q2 i- x W5 D; S6 T( X8 g7 { Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness : }* v. ?: F# A `: Z' L/ d$ w
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
: V0 H- ?. ~4 o' L somehow I realized you were still in my heart , W% l1 @- j$ l# L+ j- H/ |$ w% T6 W
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness7 a5 f2 J& G3 B) ^2 Z9 V0 T: p" B
somehow I lost myself inside again ; N+ X5 J1 e* @/ i* A- ` b
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog 9 ~$ c2 j! x& C0 \. S% M5 e0 N# F
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
; P+ C. t9 Q3 F! XFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
; Z0 T. h; v( M& \Basically, I almost finish this poem
; G( z3 d0 _: D I am 一个人de精彩
) ?) C- Y: l. j/ p$ r" w" T I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
/ C( w- A4 i6 K1 p; @ [But........ - s5 v: N% |- ~$ \
Ironically? Isn't it? |
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