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I just wrote a poem; Q4 w4 g) o; P0 j. }2 m5 _/ E
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.
4 U% f4 G% h J; X) tHowever,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
/ \' K2 t/ H; Y Q r8 UThanks a lot!!!
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9 m* S! s+ Q2 TFormerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you " a% r' V6 ?4 E
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us 0 w+ k! e9 Z/ d1 F. P
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
# j- p' V) e ^2 B$ I8 r. Q Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
3 n# n# R1 t3 b9 ]6 u1 O4 z# w Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
w c7 V% p1 t0 |' H" Y" M8 @: ? Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness # v% ^, i# W2 X8 G2 \* s
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday # r7 O6 Q& h0 W& b S
somehow I realized you were still in my heart
5 W0 W/ D, Q! [8 r- _& j O6 x somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
5 s6 T z. t. g0 @# _9 f somehow I lost myself inside again
4 D6 |' |! P% k( k* gNow, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
+ z% c+ S: ^5 z0 Q3 Y somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion" i1 x6 Y1 h- y I0 W8 y
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
9 P; S; F% ^% S- x1 }- [Basically, I almost finish this poem, }( q# W; V7 ^7 d8 k) v% G
I am 一个人de精彩
* u% d5 r( G2 ? I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
/ Q& W4 J4 ?( S0 e/ N3 [- J# xBut........
3 h6 ], C% x3 F+ vIronically? Isn't it? |
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