作文竞赛第一贴！！

茉莉花开

抛砖之作！（我英语测试时的作文之一）
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　　　　　One day I always remember
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　　July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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, ?, f3 H7 C# S2 Q; c) N( xexactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to

# i" C% X+ o2 T4 L3 k9 dput up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my

little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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, T/ R+ U9 k2 z every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid
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- E$ ]7 ]# V& t; _& G$ E was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely

' b  w" W# ^) F- e: O& m; c9 G- Vtrusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since
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, a, ]6 H- l7 ~* R* W% K' ythat date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing
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* m9 l$ B& G: k3 w4 ?/ o8 U( g on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard
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( Y* V2 w" a. u, H3 x8 ofor me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my

deaest daughter.


After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will

never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.

[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]

mercurybird

good better best!!!!!!
$ p- O) s, o' Ewe should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!

OliveOil

It is great!

connie

GREAT！