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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)
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     One day I always remember0 l; B+ l5 E7 B- W
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  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was6 K, E: x. F; N
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exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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, u: A& {0 h' M' T0 P( [3 e8 L every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid
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was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely
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trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since
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that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing
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on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard 9 c* U+ d! o; }( O
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for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my
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deaest daughter.
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/ G2 j& i% `5 I) Q* H3 |After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.6 P* u  `& T& ]9 S
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[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!4 z7 @7 {! l5 r* a2 J  \% R& G% i
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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