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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)
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6 Y8 G% `/ L: l. V; i2 a     One day I always remember$ V  T2 ?- ?8 B# _% R# V8 J6 X

2 Q# I& h, t) c, D, {3 a/ X# W" \  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to8 U( p5 j* M( |3 f

- L! X' A1 x& Mput up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid( g: V3 T) ]/ U, E+ C0 v6 f

; h: a+ o. K* w5 h' g+ {1 f! ]2 Q was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely   J  m' |$ L8 l) Q

- J* k% {8 s7 j: Q" |, etrusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since 9 H4 q$ n% x  ?

) F, Q0 a) t4 Q7 X: r) rthat date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing6 [6 f* P8 p6 A: N* K7 F
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on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard
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7 x: D) n4 Z7 k! g  a) nfor me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my
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4 S2 b7 q0 i8 Xdeaest daughter.3 p. w8 L0 V+ M6 C* i
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After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will. t6 l9 J, e$ [. l! d9 u2 A
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never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.3 x' _/ w& [+ [

4 }* `" L* u) B& s[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!6 }1 z. B# x5 a/ Q
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
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