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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)
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     One day I always remember$ ^! j8 L! ]* h8 A4 F/ |

  v! n; D6 l; U  J  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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$ V7 `& _( R- vexactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to7 w; o. i$ s3 F* ?7 X$ x1 A1 i

+ N& N2 X* ~8 O& f9 D# Nput up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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: v9 P4 Z$ v4 v9 z1 u little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,2 Q. K, f0 Y+ l7 R( |+ s
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every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid- `9 h0 O# i$ V! ?& @4 ]
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was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely * u+ q2 F: V+ a: i6 {6 S0 A

3 M) G! n, a; x2 H0 Strusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since
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that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing2 w, Q4 T9 T, B5 Z
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on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard
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& Y# |/ S! ]4 n# e" O4 _. [2 N5 H3 Vfor me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my % ?5 P* q9 M3 O0 G/ t1 e, C

$ z; L+ D3 _* X* V% d9 ddeaest daughter.. X7 U9 O4 G7 v6 |9 [' S
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After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will0 Y7 p8 T$ }0 ]0 K5 ^2 m
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never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe." f, P) J9 E& F0 n/ E. y" m1 {0 u
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[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!2 B$ ?' w7 b* A) _& f- t) _* Y
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
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