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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)7 @, t! |' G9 o0 e3 G* A8 P$ a
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     One day I always remember3 n/ S7 J/ k# K
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  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was8 {; m1 w" o+ ^( H  O1 ?8 ?

1 r8 b; c8 `  r; T5 ^exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my& C% h4 [# y% U

) f& Q; q* a6 b) q) [+ k little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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6 F( |" m% i9 n% W every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid
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5 z4 g* b  j  Y/ k) s was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely 7 y2 [$ [! ^! `0 c* ^- `3 J- ?7 a

1 k0 g+ y1 h+ J! rtrusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since
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that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing4 g" E& `+ e; q4 W0 L8 m
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on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard
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for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my $ X2 V1 k; u: b& v) M1 `

9 O3 A; \& R# Edeaest daughter.: D+ }! _5 F1 G! G* {7 T1 _7 R9 B

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/ S7 L9 I, \( [7 nAfter so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will& g1 B& ^/ s' k7 B4 p
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never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.) H- k7 k( L6 p' s$ x* c6 y

$ p3 O: a* ~8 _1 i5 n[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!
3 O& G# H6 P7 c; V( Rwe should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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