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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)
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0 b0 ]. i7 K9 H6 Z     One day I always remember
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; L  u2 w0 F0 W$ i0 f. d9 j  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to, I$ n/ b4 [) ^& z! n# l
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put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my! b: `: t2 V7 i+ h  L0 x" K6 f. a

7 p- s% p+ }  I* O* W$ c little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid
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' `6 t' g* ^- x! V was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely
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' K- F' c- i! P. Q: m# a7 m. Ftrusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since 8 L1 t( c4 }+ t, f& U! V9 R- J
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that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing& C) |8 o: [) y8 k
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on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard
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for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my , y) Y8 r6 e! `  R. X' @
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deaest daughter.
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6 Q8 y$ a# _  J( B; ?After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will0 }, ~' L/ Q, `$ U# y9 m+ \

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! s4 B; Y7 \: Z[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!: }2 K/ S' D( \5 ~9 {
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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