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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)$ O% s! G/ Q9 x! \
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     One day I always remember
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  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was. K/ E5 @, G/ w0 ~: J0 F

" |4 y7 W* ^3 |( U1 @( c/ a% @& h) Fexactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to. G) {. x- \5 ?$ C  R# C+ `! ]
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put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,+ g2 j' X3 m% O1 H5 I
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every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid5 f$ t2 q6 L3 y3 D( W+ E

( I" o! @* C2 h/ [ was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely / f7 U/ d$ ]6 e4 Z% ]$ P

( s0 ]9 ?  w% X$ E9 `% Dtrusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since
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: {7 e& D% n8 x& a  q% I* T7 Lthat date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing
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on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard 0 w& a" {2 `+ {' Z- g( Z

+ V4 \/ d- \9 rfor me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my ) H1 f$ Z" k! ^

5 j0 m% M" h: Ddeaest daughter.
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+ a9 R6 g+ w3 W. [After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will9 m, x! X9 v  r+ X1 S# p

3 a  l+ k% Q9 ~1 J# a never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.: ^7 w8 v4 i1 H: k% K- M- ]
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[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!
% x- a: `) [2 v5 K* q& ~6 B: I& g. {we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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