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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)  @9 ~' Z5 D  \* \4 C" D+ I* s
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     One day I always remember' |! d9 D' z8 ^6 D% R( Z

2 l: M/ Y+ u2 ]6 y  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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+ \$ c: }: q0 l7 texactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to. ?" Q' A  j; U8 ?9 x9 u9 m
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put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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% K, O8 ~1 Y0 g9 J3 [3 f little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,; h9 L! \3 S- d: I$ p

* ~  g7 ^2 ~0 p4 i! V, D4 {( M; U every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid3 W4 `! h2 z5 l" W& T0 }
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was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely 1 u& r% W6 |3 D( A/ s% v% {

3 B1 ?. c/ ~8 u+ X* L0 Vtrusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since " D' o, h* a. t$ H5 U6 i
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that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing, N1 k" I4 t1 f8 q/ }) g
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on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard 3 X& e; Y0 [" Q; r2 Z0 {
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for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my 5 R1 J0 V: L/ b( B
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) V9 u' S' @: J- x* j. U' V& C/ D& lAfter so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!; N! \& v7 ]( p9 T+ N$ r
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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