SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!
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VEICHLE OPTIONS:
+ v2 H9 z& ?8 I# _; [Automatic transmission
+ R# Z/ w) O4 ASilver
( S4 m! [9 j6 V0 t2 PRemote starter and heat blocker
2 k0 N0 U! A" Y+ M; TTwo sets of keys and remote keyless entry
Four additional tires with rims
Air Conditioning
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Tire pressure monitor system
& k+ q0 d3 t) C' `4 ~1 l8 I0 @8 vInformation system
; \/ m8 u5 I% Y7 A! q# \% b3 UCentral control locks,doors,windows
Power locks
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& g- G" c" w" _' i$ I- k0 kPower doors
Power windows
4 b! P9 a/ G! U) I- vChild safety locks
Rear window defroster
Bluetooth hands-free operation
Radio
! H) Q0 n7 K4 f( |/ VAirbag: driver
Airbag: passenger
( R$ ^* Y6 }  a' ?4 ^Airbag: side
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6 f1 g0 p5 p# A8 h/ g0 e* S1 bFog lights

4 u( }& N! n: |. v8 {**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

. Z  i/ c3 |4 f: {( `* x, l7 UPlease call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
% B" H# h/ b0 j) g( ^Pick up on March 18-22.
" R$ K- a- U' V5 P# cCash only please :)

兰君子

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1 u/ [' |; g+ \1 x1 ^- X* mDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .

5 I' r$ O: K, K  d, Q5 VIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

IF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING
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layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR

/ Z  K( d5 ^+ r7 u2 hDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

# Q, U$ o' t/ M; c) q& i这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."

; o! P- c* U1 b' QBy the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
  M! ?$ _' A# V+ {  [! x' G& X这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

0 P2 U5 [  @9 |3 PFcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

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zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

Sorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
You may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
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Last, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:
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0 o- s3 N1 L# V/ L& M"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".

  O) \1 }4 l. t' B9 GThere are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.

Sorry to give you "HARSH" again.

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