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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006,
7 S. X5 F1 {4 T4 `: M, WI believe there must be creatures like ourselves  
% M/ Q7 m; s* j! IDreamers  G$ f- A: U4 A( [: ~2 ]  |
Savages
2 j; [; Y& U0 \, [& bPoets/ Q: n2 \. H, Y, x3 n) L
Builders of canoes,
, P6 W' U2 j7 ]; N. E; _Black smiths( r: {$ W6 P) Z$ |& V- t
Murderers,
( {. @' L+ z5 _8 F$ e/ u' {( rRisk takers,6 U2 @  `6 h! {7 Y7 G- _
My mind is full of curiosity and wonder
* {4 U/ D$ K' f& c+ V- ]As I think of what could be.
$ f7 Q0 Y: i/ m$ dThe world is so big to me
0 V  l+ R% S  y4 I  b# HI wonder what it means to be
: F6 _, R; o' g+ ^" X: I7 b2 X- {I looked up at the star and smiled
' W, `+ x/ O+ \; N+ G- q0 AThey flashed as they have heard all I have read. 0 K9 z( M; q3 A( ~. a

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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
* l- H$ l1 W$ L评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。) f1 [) _: {* \9 Q
顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,
, m; [# b( I$ w) X3 w9 fA poor old Guy;
3 }3 W+ Y3 O% T' n& R' M) a" CLegs in a bonfire,$ y: q' \% y. R0 l2 O
Head in the sky! N8 y7 h$ K9 [" g
Lonely, with the feel of betray
  c- j3 Y, @- N1 \/ x/ `  L# {Heart empty and hollow) l$ M" {* n: J
Alone I stand
3 R0 \8 n3 e9 U7 oI am useless to all
* c: y* R7 `7 k. P1 }But I wish I were a dove 3 g& v% o: Q0 S* m
Giving myself to the world, to the fire
) Z* \6 M$ \) v! [* a: `I feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind+ A0 x* e5 H4 }6 p
I sent prayers to my god# F! ?& H8 A8 B% T  _
Though he does not answer" u$ h! p( m( _9 g8 N
He bless me with the gift of hope * k8 z" [$ Q! [% r2 \; c. ?9 o
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。$ z; M4 d3 o. p# Z6 f# D4 a6 N, A/ N
加油加油,经常写写!
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