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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006, 3 F: j, U+ m! q: {9 p. J& a
I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  
1 v6 C2 s; k" ZDreamers
, ^# f, q3 E9 f: ESavages2 O, c( \7 T/ t0 F# J
Poets/ h8 W1 F! r; d
Builders of canoes,2 ]0 Q0 y  Z+ V) E  Q$ s
Black smiths
/ t5 `( {2 n! ~+ ]7 F: JMurderers,
. v) s; A: K& T$ c  v' C% DRisk takers,
8 N5 e& g7 g+ S% q4 I! r! r- I! _My mind is full of curiosity and wonder 4 y6 D3 C5 d9 p/ n: v; ^8 w
As I think of what could be.
( x, v! [" b. j# y) \The world is so big to me # p8 c2 P; G: B& Q& \
I wonder what it means to be5 F2 u# ~+ u- ~3 T6 w
I looked up at the star and smiled
4 f3 f' j6 r+ cThey flashed as they have heard all I have read.
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
+ U% ~0 M0 s+ r# q+ T2 X3 n/ I评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。! e5 t: t9 f7 L4 }
顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,
5 K+ X, T4 }0 C: @3 @4 Q" HA poor old Guy;
+ n# a$ _, J' u0 }Legs in a bonfire,. a) h8 C7 B  R. s1 F0 i" L, @) u
Head in the sky
( i6 _# J9 M( j* t- NLonely, with the feel of betray
2 S5 R2 T. e/ G5 G2 yHeart empty and hollow
3 Z1 Q4 a* T3 H! G5 L! q) H( t$ ?Alone I stand  y3 c  G2 R5 ^
I am useless to all % W# r5 I3 _" x) c7 A4 C# _
But I wish I were a dove
* T; f7 X$ Z+ W9 F" ~/ mGiving myself to the world, to the fire
: R5 Z0 e- u  G$ E% [3 AI feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind7 ^# `0 o% e6 f! T3 n- C
I sent prayers to my god
& ^5 z/ W+ }+ g. lThough he does not answer
' `% l: z$ ^9 \3 x! z) ?. x6 _( bHe bless me with the gift of hope
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
大型搬家
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。. I: B3 F3 a  S& I1 r
加油加油,经常写写!
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