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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006,
0 J) ]1 J- k: k( Y) Z6 `+ qI believe there must be creatures like ourselves  
: g9 ^; b& F) G% u1 s  Z- fDreamers$ n* x+ _0 i% w2 w' H4 @% l# _% z
Savages
3 l5 M1 s& b3 G$ u& F) QPoets
0 `* `  `6 g; M0 ?. Q  _' mBuilders of canoes,
7 }5 m# G1 Q, `' ~) ?9 p% wBlack smiths
& j+ m8 p  E' S0 _3 @Murderers,6 c6 ]" |: Z( L4 R- K: S
Risk takers,
! ^6 }3 s+ P$ k9 L3 Z8 zMy mind is full of curiosity and wonder
1 {5 W% K$ s# A' f. R! m8 N! ZAs I think of what could be. / a+ I8 l$ n( |7 i) a: w6 f! w
The world is so big to me
+ R; g* y* x( Q' p5 Z! GI wonder what it means to be
9 Q! N- ~; z8 J2 u) l) p% JI looked up at the star and smiled
4 v, C8 b( j* c  ?  VThey flashed as they have heard all I have read. * i  N  \4 h0 W3 o* f3 R) v0 `

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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
8 G. k, p7 p+ C+ D$ ]评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。
2 h& z/ u8 ?4 K5 f顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,% M' O# R& p9 l& m+ M
A poor old Guy;+ |; e; z$ g5 I3 F8 k, Q) F) n
Legs in a bonfire," j+ r- q4 p  i5 q3 D/ S+ O
Head in the sky
. K6 L2 I7 z( u  q# F" RLonely, with the feel of betray8 k5 F6 I" o$ c  s# q
Heart empty and hollow/ @( n, N% w$ u* L
Alone I stand; w5 w* x" x) i5 V7 d" V! J5 l
I am useless to all
( v# }7 D1 o# G! U9 Y. f% TBut I wish I were a dove
0 @) w& @# M) ~Giving myself to the world, to the fire8 y1 o+ _1 a4 y8 f% S: H: o
I feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind
0 F  I& _" q; W5 j7 K0 F: I1 ]I sent prayers to my god) b; ]4 |# J3 @, D$ c$ E
Though he does not answer+ @8 `- Y6 L5 k1 C4 y
He bless me with the gift of hope " u% a( ~9 J9 }9 [( o
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。
, r( k; b) g5 \2 o, y5 `加油加油,经常写写!
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