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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006, : G; n- w& a1 {) J! e) i3 e
I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  
* l' l8 h+ U: z, ^6 v5 jDreamers2 j9 [% n0 f! i2 `
Savages
& ]5 L- i0 e0 X$ TPoets) y5 X2 R% m0 U, m$ @! O9 L
Builders of canoes,
: m6 g$ U5 e2 ?" v& V" }1 zBlack smiths
' y, N# A  s3 @Murderers,0 ^3 J( K' _' f3 h$ N+ h; m, @
Risk takers,
( b/ O; Z1 l) r" sMy mind is full of curiosity and wonder
/ F' ~- `$ o7 f: T" aAs I think of what could be.
6 o) {5 x1 y4 l* M2 Y% _3 _The world is so big to me 6 s9 O* X* k3 R: f
I wonder what it means to be
! W" u" u/ W- J$ |$ C7 kI looked up at the star and smiled
6 j' R# E7 C* Q! ?" z" M2 WThey flashed as they have heard all I have read. : }3 x& F  C6 e$ }2 L

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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。2 z- E) R8 _1 t
评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。
- k: J" H+ l0 X: X1 P( x8 T% s顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,# ~: T- M2 s% q; t" U2 [; ~4 `5 i
A poor old Guy;
5 N' r: ~0 {9 K. ^6 y# H; jLegs in a bonfire,& e8 L/ p% s, K0 ~- X, U3 V
Head in the sky
- r8 E" W/ d- u; a( ^Lonely, with the feel of betray. m# l' y# R( R) g+ {/ _9 I% v
Heart empty and hollow
9 E5 P6 i6 ^  B$ l" nAlone I stand
( O- K& }% a# h) v/ MI am useless to all
' k- L8 v2 N2 b+ r- L% E2 _* \( YBut I wish I were a dove - Z# M! W# c0 L
Giving myself to the world, to the fire4 [9 {$ f5 o) D& O
I feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind1 m( @' o- @4 w9 F% L
I sent prayers to my god
/ J( M3 B) u) Q* e% D5 hThough he does not answer
$ c! G& X5 c0 M0 Q9 R/ p1 A+ s( E6 vHe bless me with the gift of hope . z& _2 W  U6 q; X1 U/ D
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。. j5 ]0 |6 ^$ f
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