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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006,
& W# y, j, C) y! c, r8 A7 D, hI believe there must be creatures like ourselves  
# X( }2 V1 k+ K2 t9 R* P& TDreamers
# h+ [* T- \5 ^- j* TSavages* J) h3 n6 Z5 V8 N4 Y
Poets
3 O0 b7 j  \' b8 H/ dBuilders of canoes,
( V9 [! G1 h! o! ]3 g: a4 ^9 t) JBlack smiths
" b( n' u9 ^1 a! O$ x: c" A1 F/ `$ kMurderers,
0 K7 ?& d4 n% ^( v( oRisk takers,
; h! ^6 R  o5 uMy mind is full of curiosity and wonder 6 G! L2 _( b8 P
As I think of what could be. / R! Q1 i' q, Z& K8 E  }! c" X
The world is so big to me
+ w1 r, w0 n* j" BI wonder what it means to be9 _% k0 q- Z% `- T. k& u
I looked up at the star and smiled # L2 F3 r, L$ F
They flashed as they have heard all I have read.   _" J6 J! \- ~
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
% v$ o3 [+ n: W5 B/ }3 u, @. A5 R评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。
1 c5 C: v4 r9 m& x顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,: K5 i2 U8 V1 M  u* R8 ?- k% k
A poor old Guy;
3 S; J& [2 B1 J, kLegs in a bonfire,
0 v8 R1 A5 W0 P9 PHead in the sky
4 w3 d  C: I* s3 Y, Z9 J" ~Lonely, with the feel of betray
2 m$ E# ]" T+ ~- f: D( I7 m, UHeart empty and hollow
' e4 l( }2 Y/ XAlone I stand
5 t) V+ \6 O! {4 `# |9 O" fI am useless to all & {" h+ V: ~* e) d
But I wish I were a dove % e& d: z5 Z5 C2 L( P
Giving myself to the world, to the fire6 H$ ?, ^- ?7 I8 ?* n
I feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind
# i4 t# q/ V9 v$ R: T; eI sent prayers to my god
$ V) [. g" H7 D( TThough he does not answer0 Z# a1 |# y" b
He bless me with the gift of hope 7 l/ q! H" l8 c+ t
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。
. J9 X/ N- G+ @5 \8 x加油加油,经常写写!
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