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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006, 5 q2 `$ ]8 A, i6 z4 U) I6 O2 [
I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  ( U. X9 }2 y5 K$ B/ s" E5 U2 c
Dreamers; ~- v  |7 s) T& S
Savages1 p- p* K' \( i$ [# W
Poets  j" I1 I! M  |2 P$ |# K# O( J/ [
Builders of canoes,
& i0 M* v. h$ E4 |( H+ @" u/ aBlack smiths
7 r  F8 b4 H. D" \1 p' I: W" ^5 KMurderers,
7 \( g" C6 U- T$ b: A& y" a3 ]7 `0 FRisk takers,
0 X' z# k, m" }2 Z) u# bMy mind is full of curiosity and wonder
/ m; i( y$ O* \) r8 e3 y( R. CAs I think of what could be.
4 l- `8 _9 W( N& B' e# z1 @The world is so big to me
/ K1 q+ X7 {9 YI wonder what it means to be
2 }) I8 G! X- d) E" u% |I looked up at the star and smiled 7 d! N  Z+ ]/ j0 |
They flashed as they have heard all I have read. , c, |, D$ r' {9 s2 {

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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
( ?0 x6 V: U8 o& o. W! L评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。  f1 e- y! V6 G
顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,
& f6 F5 G1 L( ~' m  oA poor old Guy;3 Z# z. d5 m; _+ j
Legs in a bonfire,; g% W7 E) Y# J$ Z
Head in the sky# D( O5 u  b/ i( _- p, s( z$ L/ W
Lonely, with the feel of betray. z, z6 r* i. X* @' z
Heart empty and hollow' [* g7 T1 P" G1 W0 s
Alone I stand/ q% v- K8 r5 l* k8 \& J
I am useless to all
$ X; Z, J  o! e& F$ JBut I wish I were a dove   n0 j5 r8 I% [6 I' A
Giving myself to the world, to the fire
4 a4 u+ k1 y: a; VI feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind
% e( ^7 u1 W7 p3 X, _' `I sent prayers to my god) v2 }1 w6 U3 i
Though he does not answer! z" H$ H. ]% p, [/ y
He bless me with the gift of hope & p) N6 l# a1 C

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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。4 }( \$ t5 v: G* f0 }" {
加油加油,经常写写!
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