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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006,
! I) Z! H) a/ T9 h. T# vI believe there must be creatures like ourselves  
* W$ S+ ~( V, QDreamers/ k9 q& x- s% n$ `  d
Savages
8 }4 K. K2 |( b! z' KPoets, r, j' Q/ J8 O
Builders of canoes,4 d+ I8 X/ J2 }/ l; E9 }4 `. _& ^7 S
Black smiths# U* k* x- y2 F% X3 j
Murderers,4 K+ ^4 o0 w" |  i2 h9 `6 X: j. G
Risk takers,
- T% `* S' o1 V9 v/ ?My mind is full of curiosity and wonder
/ x" t8 `: O: G6 y6 FAs I think of what could be.
6 V9 D. j! G, m% z1 ^" A7 BThe world is so big to me
1 W3 |! X7 l/ j8 a" J9 GI wonder what it means to be
$ ^9 r# w+ O7 l# GI looked up at the star and smiled $ Z* W& O8 {4 q: n
They flashed as they have heard all I have read. 7 H' H+ Z" N& `. B% \

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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
$ L$ e; V: f/ L4 T& r# _& p评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。' c! C6 S% g/ n7 z' m
顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,# Z4 W7 p/ g! r) O
A poor old Guy;8 t& `$ C) |$ {& e* D
Legs in a bonfire,
6 H, `& r' ?9 T! B) S7 PHead in the sky
/ [! ?+ ~/ J9 Q4 TLonely, with the feel of betray
% L, O3 l8 e$ R' pHeart empty and hollow& k+ Q' ~- `4 y) n  s7 h
Alone I stand
: E, Q8 ]$ t# Z$ KI am useless to all
; z: ?7 C  d' D6 @  s8 m' uBut I wish I were a dove 3 X/ C; I2 j( _$ j, G4 [
Giving myself to the world, to the fire8 \" |0 }% C6 \* Z6 D/ U
I feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind) F6 q( r/ S' J- w1 V
I sent prayers to my god
. C: W  A8 [7 _5 z- Z) mThough he does not answer
: Y% [5 j5 ^4 E- {+ Q( N+ h0 I/ GHe bless me with the gift of hope
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。
# t* V8 U  Y, i, w7 O加油加油,经常写写!
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