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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006, + X; C) o/ A+ Z6 d' P& U" T
I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  
3 s$ |' A) B7 b$ n2 v- s: d/ v: [+ \' QDreamers
- ?" c: a" J6 }! P. t: U. j/ u& pSavages6 X" s& V7 w2 e8 w. o
Poets, H. h; J3 _' r: [5 [
Builders of canoes,
& E) G! X$ @/ ]) X6 w9 aBlack smiths; _+ O( C. ]( r8 ?# p# |/ q0 T' |
Murderers," ~& ?9 q8 m- L, ?0 \2 J, B8 M7 ?
Risk takers,0 C0 h6 l/ `8 W( U+ M3 y4 K
My mind is full of curiosity and wonder 4 Q6 Y8 U+ W  o1 @. \. k
As I think of what could be. + E& C6 _/ _+ n: ?8 ~+ i$ j7 Y
The world is so big to me
  E. h8 @0 s' c( A, H7 }  J: oI wonder what it means to be$ ?0 ?4 G. L4 X/ I/ _+ _
I looked up at the star and smiled 0 H2 F$ ^" w4 V$ }  X
They flashed as they have heard all I have read.
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。4 e, G1 w  c. t7 h9 U
评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。
4 r2 Y) V( v. ]6 @顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,, t$ ~; R/ S  M; {! D4 I
A poor old Guy;
: i4 {8 D6 r7 z+ {Legs in a bonfire,
8 K- q8 _+ Y6 L) b% T) q0 _. l, SHead in the sky/ O, D8 r5 [, {  h0 u
Lonely, with the feel of betray
" \0 J9 }( J! E3 M( d9 aHeart empty and hollow
: H* x4 l/ v, G9 M' O) x2 EAlone I stand
. t) J$ I% L: D7 Q7 s9 ~8 B- II am useless to all , d9 b2 }% H9 @9 ~- n2 v; w, E  X/ [
But I wish I were a dove ) ^+ l+ d* \- k1 u2 {% ?% O0 a1 N0 n
Giving myself to the world, to the fire3 c: _$ v( _7 p7 s/ Y
I feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind
1 B0 N8 |+ N1 ~' t2 h' zI sent prayers to my god; B8 Z: }$ w4 Z: L% L1 r# _
Though he does not answer, }4 L; i, M' I4 Q& Y$ d$ q5 z8 c
He bless me with the gift of hope
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。
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