儿子写给老妈的'控诉'信

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儿子13,正在学习写作. 恰逢范文是一封信,他挥笔就来,成就了下面的'控诉'状.

好心的读者帮帮忙:
1)多少是他妈该改变的?
2)多少是TEENAGER该收敛的?

Hi, Mum, aka. Isabel
, i; F$ }: s7 e- rI have written you this message because:

: X  x! B0 |5 N# ~/ e" H$ |I reckon that I should not need to remember as much  Chinese words because my brain gets frustrated. And you make me work too hard.

, V% [+ ~+ e( e# }; E4 Q  }8 xI should also get more presents at Christmas and get rewards for getting more than 90% in any exam.
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You should let me watch TV, play PS2, and stay up late more.
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' v8 c$ d. g0 b" e, C+ n' A/ {. J- [0 eI would also like to re-arrange my room a little bit by replacing everything with flowers on it.
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I wouldn't mind more PS2 games and DVDs but you wouldn't let me get any.

6 g8 N. ?; r) x# b+ u  RYou should also buy me some poker chips so I can play poker at home.
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I would also like a TV in my room, so my room looks cool, and maybe some more posters.

* R" `+ e& g  N! y( G5 h( EThe last thing is that I should do less chores.
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Your sincerely:( I didn't like writing this)
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155 words

老杨

I reckon that I should not need to remember as much  Chinese words because my brain gets frustrated. And you make me work too hard.不同意，小孩子的大脑容量是巨大的。
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I should also get more presents at Christmas and get rewards for getting more than 90% in any exam.不作评论。

You should let me watch TV, play PS2, and stay up late more.同意。

I would also like to re-arrange my room a little bit by replacing everything with flowers on it.同意。
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I wouldn't mind more PS2 games and DVDs but you wouldn't let me get any.每天1~2小时。
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# \0 V. @/ q6 s$ U5 H$ y9 uYou should also buy me some poker chips so I can play poker at home. 同意。

. ?. N! H, B, K: |8 Y2 vI would also like a TV in my room, so my room looks cool, and maybe some more posters.不同意。
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4 s  c. V( |% Q: Y- p. uThe last thing is that I should do less chores.应该多做家务事。
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6 W7 A, N( u6 {/ m# p+ i) j; T/ gYour sincerely:( I didn't like writing this) 括号里面的话不好。