我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
! [  O; r. A7 q* Y& W3 r! G5 ~5 w是十多年前的作品了——
* T' w  ?3 t6 q0 J! o" L4 MSummer's Coming

  w: f4 D. M4 s! r1 J  E3 C3 `Faster, hotter and sweater,
, l1 W& t8 R8 R9 G% U0 f! [Summer's coming, coming, -ing ---
From the colorful nature
: o- E1 q9 F/ Q; f! JTo my life and dream.

! c0 o; n- N7 g2 F' D# XFollowing the summer's step,
) J' u7 m$ j3 i' o2 s0 Y( [Let myself go ---
, B& `# X  [: ?8 E* j2 zGo to the wild rain
Washing my heart and soul.

Good-bye, my happy spring;
Good-bye, my childish dream.
I can prepare nothing;
My life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。

一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
$ R& `' M1 [- d! B9 k5 Z, HIt displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.
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[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
" N/ U3 z7 X7 n8 g8 h. [but what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
$ {9 Q% `5 O/ S& b& z$ y3 s夏天来了