我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
是十多年前的作品了——
' S9 S. a7 h7 SSummer's Coming

$ T) R# A  p/ c/ OFaster, hotter and sweater,
Summer's coming, coming, -ing ---
; N% w* C2 O$ c0 r) v2 bFrom the colorful nature
, I5 t1 t6 {  R1 E! M" T$ wTo my life and dream.

- g( f0 L! n& MFollowing the summer's step,
, Y0 L7 o! g1 @' r5 QLet myself go ---
Go to the wild rain
& \2 g! Z& q$ ~& G; }( OWashing my heart and soul.

" h$ w" T8 s5 P# J: @Good-bye, my happy spring;
Good-bye, my childish dream.
& K8 w, I, d% p  `$ k& cI can prepare nothing;
. e0 t8 _; U) w5 b( s5 x9 p5 iMy life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。

一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
It displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.

+ V+ }4 B# v6 j, q' [. c[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
but what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
! ^9 S4 n: r& }7 l! p# Z7 E夏天来了