我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
3 C* K3 S. S8 P9 E& H% T是十多年前的作品了——
0 a% {/ b. E9 C8 N+ Z' ?' L- f: ASummer's Coming
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- D8 p: ~$ c) m! d6 KFaster, hotter and sweater,
Summer's coming, coming, -ing ---
From the colorful nature
# E: B/ @# C' J7 @! M- bTo my life and dream.
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Following the summer's step,
, @6 d* l' a& I  Q# K0 g' s8 F" iLet myself go ---
4 y% y! Q3 x4 J% F' w* QGo to the wild rain
% d, W1 s7 b4 z- Y" _  YWashing my heart and soul.
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Good-bye, my happy spring;
Good-bye, my childish dream.
0 c4 S  ]$ A# d: |( s) KI can prepare nothing;
" v& ]+ {& f" \* ^% P5 {6 W# K0 o. [My life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。
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; N/ F5 D# `' R4 K一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
It displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.

' Q, ^) a8 V; N: X+ b( n[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
1 V8 i' W5 e2 cbut what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
夏天来了