我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
) T, b- w4 S% q( e! I是十多年前的作品了——
1 e: m, I, ]# Z4 ]7 KSummer's Coming

Faster, hotter and sweater,
Summer's coming, coming, -ing ---
* Y9 T$ `( g/ b. VFrom the colorful nature
To my life and dream.
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Following the summer's step,
Let myself go ---
* J5 Y- D. a6 y0 ?Go to the wild rain
; _; g7 ?) g3 L# A% {1 CWashing my heart and soul.
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( f" e* C$ z- T" ~, k, mGood-bye, my happy spring;
0 s1 M% F6 I. J3 w$ A/ LGood-bye, my childish dream.
: Y" U/ U5 f! C0 x. x; N7 a7 AI can prepare nothing;
8 G, V+ O7 Y( }' g& F& c, u/ kMy life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。

一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
It displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.
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简约

thank you, i can see it now.
but what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
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