Falling in love. j$ |. W% N$ ^
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I fell in love with you 6 K: r1 ^- b! o6 q& X
At the first week we met/ R2 G. v( @" F w3 }. r
) f0 | i* n: v+ K- S$ q) gYou have charm, you have looks- i4 s3 j# C" p8 v& U
with full of pimples in face4 K0 u R. e l2 y9 H3 L ~, A, e
As spotting sky at a summer night( J' _( s" I6 z: H7 O
They are shining stars" e" a" u1 A6 x+ x5 z' a
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Your lip is so big' m. y( S0 @& c& y% p7 E
And that’s good for a kiss [1 X7 D5 a1 E% q+ U
Your body is chubby 2 [4 C# c7 |; O: O9 e+ dAnd that is good for sex % J3 B- w% b9 F C s2 g. `2 [) |% q( b
I was deeply in love; m* p( x5 o1 ^3 \0 A% o
Everything from you is positive! G! }1 k. K* b1 c4 Q% o5 _% k
You blame me everything and everyday- c1 \# F/ A/ Q- r* n0 E
And I think all girls sound like : r0 `& ^% E7 N& i# [4 S+ e 7 j, Z9 X; h3 V5 _! f4 b/ s4 h3 j. FYou could not stand my eating; O2 H' q% P) q+ l/ [: Y) E
Saying no good for making funny sound s" {4 t. `3 D0 M) }+ D) [6 DI think you are perfectly right! a1 I( i+ x; g
Eating with sound is a pig / J- m F1 O3 Y- j1 Y0 \" s& [+ F# r9 B1 b% k
I fell in love with you 9 D- J1 R' i) H5 [( Y' U; B2 }8 i) H
Become a fool to think ! `* k0 R: V! n6 JAll trouble things you did 9 ^* S# C6 z' w; AAnd that is the price for love / X' S! q( Y; D8 O# E 4 v5 f" M: H0 ]you are deeply in love4 M9 n9 G: w7 G& i5 J+ l
Everything from me is negative 4 v1 U- H2 p7 _"My man should be like this, + A# q+ j, p! Z; x0 ]and I am helping you to improve' z- r8 p5 @3 ^6 n" n8 h" A
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You are loving me & m4 D' s3 V3 Y2 K
or that one in your mind?3 A, K- C2 z% c/ ?
My mind is like a mud/ X8 U R7 Z, r, Q# l. Q
can be shaped whatever you want+ u( |4 m7 g" a$ o- N
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unfortunalety not my heart 7 \$ P, u( v N, T) l$ @; K% o1 PIt is slashed by you - M! h: x8 k/ n+ sand I am seriously hurt 2 s/ E- ?% K" l- C+ t+ M$ q: q- N$ M+ U( v& o" Z1 Z ^5 j* C
I will never love another 5 Q8 |% y2 l$ a. z! ?7 OIf my heart can be fixed
sweeite, * w8 \! p' s1 ki am sorry to say that ur poem sucks. 0 _7 H5 ~) }6 l* X- Y( [And this is something I change. Whatever left r too sucky to be changed# Z0 M2 C, X( B
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with the charm, 5 o9 `- C; {( G- l% O( ewith the simles." Z% p0 {, Q' O" }( d
I fell in love with you % k# Y G6 o1 G* ~! W! p* l0 C0 @% o
In the first sign. ! @( ^, \1 h8 Q2 O0 O" fAs spotting sky at a summer ) C- N( U2 x# D7 k 5 P0 ?+ i; i. h# XYour lip is so soft , ^1 a0 s" R5 C* S- athere is not honey can sweeter than ur kiss$ W2 \9 u) P+ ^1 d: k8 U) y' C- w! `
Your body is so sexy6 P" b ?! q/ W% w$ f1 d. V0 V6 g4 k
And I cannt image the moment I touch u. K: |) f2 v- r2 ]
/ l, u8 g% H. F. v BI am deeply in love# U7 Q: u. X1 S/ @; ]# F
Everything from you is so charming# ]4 z5 U, _6 {* h: e/ W: R
although You r so picky for me : Y2 h3 i( _0 B f
And I take them as ur buttefly feelings.
THis is the poem in SNTC S2 and it is not a good one 2.! I+ ]5 F2 W0 Z' S, K" t$ ]
But u can copy the way how she ranges the poem 5 T0 C7 j8 F- @) K4 W/ m9 w& f4 N# y+ g, @' x$ Y
: |# [/ p% |9 \4 QHis hello is the end of her endings$ b6 C! k: w( Q. T
Her laugh is their first step down the aisle+ B) V2 e9 ^' w1 ^# F3 u; J4 [
His hand would be hers to hold forever 1 V G, Z2 N( OHis forever is simply as her smile 8 N5 r; i) H- N
He said she was what was missing n7 g# o2 c' f* wShe said instantly she knew # H" c/ s0 @( t3 }She was a question to be answered# X6 V. {" A6 j, Z0 D H% }9 t
And his answer is ) L0 z: u' o% l$ WI do
Rain bow, you are so right. You improved it , and now it is much better. Seems you also like poems. that is good and wish to keep in touch with each other. Merry Xmas; m0 h! u9 E" _: f4 o$ J k
" `7 c, u" ^. b2 |+ H5 X0 v# W0 s8 pBelow is my new one, any comment?
It’s amazing how I felt + D; L _% J9 n8 S: T" q % B+ s! z# h5 g0 f# ^It's amazing how I felt 9 l3 _) b$ x& Cwhen I was with you' ?/ J# V& M- W3 N, L' F, x* F
My heart beat so fast) e* ]8 |$ ^" u
I looked at you and thought) e% }. F3 |. [; S: I B
Holy Jesus, you were so cute 2 V8 o. S4 Q) s6 z 2 Q/ a9 g$ n. [: n- @9 C L* Y: yYou left me without a word2 b0 `6 t6 ?6 Y R0 v# n$ s4 U
I have nothing except my emptiness% \& h {7 K) W9 A) `" g
My mood is like a cloud& o: t2 Z" U! C( [; k; N- G
How could it be dispersed?& @$ i8 [# K: G' C6 X6 ?9 Z1 J
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Feelings bite my heart # N( ?6 B) `0 a! f# lYou are the right one I wait& N6 h" u, w9 L6 o# E. S+ v1 d) W) F
In the depth of my soul " @8 ~$ ^; P% ~( ?6 p5 j, u6 NI will love you till I'm dead