Falling in love9 E; I* a; ]- S9 x: v- \) }
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I fell in love with you % a& Q* I6 f8 i; j& Z7 l
At the first week we met . o: ^& V& ~0 \0 n C/ Q $ e' i7 }# i7 R2 k3 i" d/ g. N* dYou have charm, you have looks 1 E' J4 l: m# Q0 U/ x- Fwith full of pimples in face" Q5 Q- M5 ?( X0 H1 S# B$ i
As spotting sky at a summer night ; ]( d$ P: Q7 R- t6 h/ y$ v5 y' pThey are shining stars 3 l; a5 r2 s+ N; L0 P# \# L # u3 l9 l: i& e7 x2 g# ?3 |Your lip is so big . l/ P2 p; D+ I- ?* |; sAnd that’s good for a kiss$ S5 e4 _' r+ H& J2 f1 i/ C* U2 f
Your body is chubby $ d, p8 K# v6 n0 ]: W/ _: W$ LAnd that is good for sex3 u9 y9 `& z ^0 j
- z' q3 P) m W) dI was deeply in love ! }6 b$ B" f; q$ DEverything from you is positive ! V: G8 Z' L& X# Z$ \+ sYou blame me everything and everyday 9 l5 G/ h8 V$ OAnd I think all girls sound like 1 q* r2 Y9 A$ a0 V9 e 3 t5 e$ G% Y1 t+ X7 q2 `7 @0 tYou could not stand my eating - B0 O% {$ `# N3 i; n) T" sSaying no good for making funny sound6 h# ], T8 g8 P
I think you are perfectly right3 M1 K! r& ^4 |5 \; r# r8 a# P
Eating with sound is a pig+ r1 Y' U2 e' p. K3 |
+ d, I! v- w- ?. `0 DI fell in love with you ! g6 g8 E) q+ `: [ H4 w; R
Become a fool to think1 t1 S- \4 }8 ]5 R0 B4 ]
All trouble things you did# C0 m# `& i" r& G$ X& C H# d
And that is the price for love + y( Q" @0 Z; S& A: N7 O( x1 {$ i5 N/ c8 o
you are deeply in love % g1 R9 c$ |) D4 ^% ~0 Y& [- D# A: \6 yEverything from me is negative ! g- o4 c+ v9 g6 V1 y- \"My man should be like this, 9 w+ b2 U8 P) c: @$ c0 j: G# Kand I am helping you to improve'! w7 m i4 Q4 C' s
+ J5 w F: q4 V* A- H5 ?% ]: h. `You are loving me ) G1 |5 s. j$ l0 h4 K. |
or that one in your mind? $ b+ x* h7 @6 T% {. ?! ?My mind is like a mud( T6 u& Q# a/ F4 X
can be shaped whatever you want) i( p4 Q) z0 j7 l6 R
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unfortunalety not my heart, m5 |) Z! p, b$ H! w3 W
It is slashed by you 6 X' f4 e' H d7 z" c
and I am seriously hurt . M/ p: U& O/ O8 z) _3 L7 H. ^& ] - r- e/ z( S1 W- g9 R z) }+ N" ~I will never love another " q F( d8 H/ L: p4 i
If my heart can be fixed
sweeite, 7 ]2 `7 g( b! k! I9 c& ti am sorry to say that ur poem sucks.- q! C; Y0 d4 V2 w
And this is something I change. Whatever left r too sucky to be changed7 U) l- q r+ y
# i7 d7 m# n, i8 G3 n+ Gwith the charm, 5 u5 _6 j+ T5 A5 k+ Fwith the simles. 2 I8 }, r/ s6 cI fell in love with you 5 ]$ q/ \% _3 TIn the first sign.: L: ]% ^) p1 M3 F0 f& v
As spotting sky at a summer 9 L' d. s6 s% C) A* O6 h V7 t# `) z' q! W9 P# }9 z4 x
Your lip is so soft 5 D' i- r: q# Q1 p3 |# C6 z
there is not honey can sweeter than ur kiss 4 F# n5 Q/ \4 I: I* P" W& nYour body is so sexy, {0 M5 r% b& t
And I cannt image the moment I touch u.; h) o+ |- H T3 ^0 ]/ {
$ \3 }) `$ D, V' X8 L5 mI am deeply in love8 G( c2 c6 x: p4 M/ r# r2 h1 I
Everything from you is so charming ( E8 l% ^+ O+ o# Ralthough You r so picky for me 9 u w. `* ^9 [& `: g6 M$ bAnd I take them as ur buttefly feelings.
THis is the poem in SNTC S2 and it is not a good one 2. 5 l+ A, R$ d" Z0 j) yBut u can copy the way how she ranges the poem# h& {# W I9 ~7 s& d1 f+ p/ h
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4 P* k) [# L! ]# h# ]His hello is the end of her endings 2 T" ?2 }; H }: K" w8 THer laugh is their first step down the aisle ) e2 S6 X7 \9 v' @, L# I7 e4 h9 [1 T8 RHis hand would be hers to hold forever/ f6 A. g7 r, q
His forever is simply as her smile * j! N. ]: {3 q' B4 AHe said she was what was missing& s. v4 e' u: r) @8 A' a$ j
She said instantly she knew. f5 {- P1 P# u& t9 A7 q A
She was a question to be answered& O1 B% g2 Q" S- O) _
And his answer is - u% P: e* X' I/ f; O0 R
I do
Rain bow, you are so right. You improved it , and now it is much better. Seems you also like poems. that is good and wish to keep in touch with each other. Merry Xmas9 W& q" ~% j6 Z
' F2 D8 j$ y6 B! f1 cBelow is my new one, any comment?
+ b; e9 b) h. U% EIt's amazing how I felt 5 [6 u ]1 |, ]' E! O: h1 r
when I was with you" M9 l5 {" E$ |! l$ l5 ^) L* w
My heart beat so fast , D# r" C0 e+ e7 m, z$ F# eI looked at you and thought & [3 \5 p" J- BHoly Jesus, you were so cute 7 _8 R! V8 y+ C C# V4 Y( ^" g* [- p. K0 V- f9 H2 A4 K+ f
You left me without a word! {- b9 Q3 J; \1 P W. E2 d
I have nothing except my emptiness7 M" w5 F; Q2 j
My mood is like a cloud 6 l' `! j! r# P: B; n5 [* \' `How could it be dispersed? O! M: m; q. k4 r! _, C) [# S
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Feelings bite my heart 0 Y6 F' X9 G/ `, eYou are the right one I wait , k }- z* S r( S: UIn the depth of my soul 8 ]/ k) I5 _' s# |% JI will love you till I'm dead