爱的代价 (ENGLISH POEM NO2)

我在故我思

Falling in love

I fell in love with you
At the first week we met
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# c7 @( q! y- X' U( R1 J% iYou have charm, you have looks
with full of pimples in face
; v6 f0 I8 m* ^. wAs spotting sky at a summer night
They are shining stars
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Your lip is so big
And that’s good for a kiss
1 ^; F! y0 g+ m* F  aYour body is chubby
And that is good for sex
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5 w6 @/ {5 Z8 g% C, K! AI was deeply in love
Everything from you is positive
3 a' L( t0 V9 S1 P; k7 X& ?You blame me everything and everyday
0 _% S3 M( c7 {' G: d! `And I think all girls sound like
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You could not stand my eating
0 n' \2 _" H" p# X# I5 ySaying no good for making funny sound
I think you are perfectly right
5 i2 B  P0 P: c7 Z: q; e0 W- N0 hEating with sound is a pig

6 E) x: W- X+ d0 e1 g3 p9 fI fell in love with you
# e. |3 E  v9 }: S: HBecome a fool to think
All trouble things you did
And that is the price for love
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You slash my heart
$ `# k' F9 V2 n9 r% h1 Aand I am seriously hurt
/ X% R; y3 h' Q0 JI will never love another
If my heart can be fixed

+ W5 `, E) o# ^8 }[ 本帖最后由 我在故我思 于 2008-12-21 10:57 编辑 ]

scuba1995

还没看,先沙发上坐下

scuba1995

再拿条毯子, 楼主的诗估计会让俺掉上半地鸡皮疙瘩

* P, ~  |( C& K' L湿人啊....

新移民

还真是屯子大了多有才的银都有哈,简直乐死我了,哈.....

我在故我思

爱的代价 (ENGLISH POEM NO2)
, R+ n+ d9 a2 O/ l/ ZFalling in love
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I fell in love with you
2 E" W' G$ Q( B/ M2 f' b' }; tAt the first week we met
3 R4 q. r' g+ Q% S+ G$ E5 X5 E
( d7 p* H$ V" a; ^( kYou have charm, you have looks
with full of pimples in face
. z& y$ V5 C0 L3 F0 }( xAs spotting sky at a summer night
9 ~1 _  w5 ^6 H2 t4 G* JThey are shining stars

Your lip is so big
1 w( c* J; v: h+ ~And that’s good for a kiss
Your body is chubby
$ M* m+ g  }. p: T& a! G4 K" _And that is good for sex

I was deeply in love
Everything from you is positive
! A+ R4 Q" B& ^' z+ d9 y/ GYou blame me everything and everyday
And I think all girls sound like
$ H  `1 Z7 ?2 c1 M4 W5 _; S
! s) r& N5 I; W3 OYou could not stand my eating
Saying no good for making funny sound
0 O# ^( T; f9 m# L& a  L% xI think you are perfectly right
Eating with sound is a pig
3 O+ J: F$ I$ h& V
/ ]; ]/ w  N5 wI fell in love with you
Become a fool to think
1 y7 c; ^8 k; s4 Y4 g5 p) bAll trouble things you did
: H% ~* |9 U; B+ e; h2 l* _And that is the price for love

. A, i5 L( U+ w# M" ]' W) I+ [you are deeply in love
0 A7 C3 I: s: z% `4 R& u+ d3 S2 Y. OEverything from me is negative
"My man should like this,
# G6 |% o8 e7 X; Y3 B( N) Cand I am helping you to improve'

You are loving me
1 l3 H; k4 g9 v9 a5 R; A$ @8 O  R( oor that one in your mind?
My mind is like a mud
can be shaped whatevery you want
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+ N8 _5 ]- i) Q$ h, @# junfortunalety not my heart
It is slashed by you
and I am seriously hurt
2 H1 S; Z$ B  qI will never love another
If my heart can be fixed

我在故我思

原帖由 scuba1995 于 2008-12-21 11:13 发表
再拿条毯子, 楼主的诗估计会让俺掉上半地鸡皮疙瘩
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# L% m' J  @# A' w( ]2 L湿人啊....

你小子的沙发可害了我, 正准备完成大作, 被你一个沙发加一条毯子弄得修给不了了

新移民

啊?还没整完哪?
够湿的了, 还真想把谁淹死啊.
哈哈哈...还真长见识

我在故我思

原帖由 新移民 于 2008-12-21 11:55 发表
啊?还没整完哪?
: p* J' q# T! V) G6 `' D够湿的了, 还真想把谁淹死啊.
哈哈哈...还真长见识

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; L2 i9 `7 }; N# _# a: I该让你们见识一下心坛第一大才子的风采了

scuba1995

原帖由 我在故我思 于 2008-12-21 12:13 发表
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该让你们见识一下心坛第一大才子的风采了

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鱼雷

滔滔江水，。。。连绵不绝。。。。

新移民

今天一想起这两片"湿"就想笑,实在忍不住啊.
哈哈哈哈哈哈......笑个够

马户

超级好湿!!!

suvescape

看的我毛骨耸然

scuba1995

看完你写的诗,俺赶脚着吧,写湿这事,好象也挺容易的...........

新移民

容易?吹牛吧你.
不信你试试, 估摸累吐血,你也整不出这么搞笑的湿来.到现在我还想笑呢.

P.S.你一个沙发加一个毯子的可害了人家第一大才子了, 知道不?

精品中年老男人

我在故我思

原帖由 suvescape 于 2008-12-21 23:36 发表
! l" N1 Z% i- Y/ O( n9 A看的我毛骨耸然

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' y  y$ `" c2 X' c5 I, P有这么恐怖吗?看来你是缺了点幽默细胞了

我在故我思

原帖由 scuba1995 于 2008-12-21 23:42 发表
看完你写的诗,俺赶脚着吧,写湿这事,好象也挺容易的...........

听过吗? 叫做难者不会会者不难.

我在故我思

谢谢新移民网友的和其他网友的支持. 笑好, 笑比哭好, 笑比恶毒好, 笑比变态好. 看看这个网站, 就知道我们需要更多的笑声