锻造地道英语句子

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　　1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.

　　改进：Artists' work upgrades our civilization.
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　　2. For example, you work in a big factory.
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, m% E' f9 Y- q. y　　改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.
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7 D* g+ |4 v& h; Z- @2 d0 `　　3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.
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; r2 z# Z$ O9 X4 u- M  F6 C5 a( [　　改进：You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.

7 Z- [  \$ |" }$ F8 u& y" G  {; H　　4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.
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　　改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.
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3 O2 H6 E; G6 H% o1 _　　5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.

" t: `6 R! A$ U; y9 }8 E( H+ ~　　改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.

　　6. Their brain is still very young.

- f# w8 _3 B5 F　　改进: They are still immature.
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　　7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.
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+ ]& T1 f  E, m( H$ J  A) ~　　改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.

" G- k4 t& Z1 Z6 \1 p　　8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.
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( G, v2 P9 B/ Z4 ]/ r, Q3 G　　改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.

6 f4 N9 K6 A. @5 a　　9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.
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; J( c7 z* s8 j. a& v　　改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.
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" n/ i. k$ A, `　　10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.
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! M% q2 A* l% f　　改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.

　　11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.

( r) U& ~* z' w9 t　　改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development.

　　12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.
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1 n5 y- K8 S0 x. Z. ^; A/ n　　改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money.

　　13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.
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　　改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.
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　　14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money.
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　　改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more.
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　　15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.
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　　改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products.

　　16. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills.
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! M7 p  z- t/ P/ a6 I　　改进: In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills.

, t0 T( \  ^* N) z! P; S0 l/ f9 ]3 q　　17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians.
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8 _; u) ]$ h6 P0 f& P5 P3 S9 ~3 ?　　改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand.
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1 e/ H  m$ h2 L+ ?- L& ~3 m　　18. This knowledge will become a part of your body.
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　　改进: This knowledge will become part of you.
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' G- X1 l3 ~+ ^$ a1 I8 V　　19. They cannot think clearly.
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, w6 o5 J4 K( S& Z- n　　20. Money can improve their living standard.

　　改进: Money can improve their life.

4 f1 @. d, X0 r6 D5 c" |　　21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money.

　　改进: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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　　22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life.
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9 s8 ^6 X5 s+ `! }( D/ \1 f# k( u　　改进: If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life.
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　　23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later.
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　　改进: One purpose of education is to learn to learn.
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1 M" i$ m- \3 S( |+ H! D& a/ K　　24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano.

: s/ S6 J. t4 V% Y8 m　　改进: Many parents send their children to piano classes.
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" m  u( Z( I0 ~2 Z- w　　25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others.
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* `# d6 G! i9 A9 ^+ F: i4 J　　改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others.
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　　26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.
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　　改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.
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; k4 J4 e+ H( |3 r$ \　　27. Smoking can help you relax your mind.

　　改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.
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　　28. What's about nonsmokers?
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　　改进: What about nonsmokers?
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　　29. Why not to be a non-smoker?
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　　改进: Why not be a non-smoker?

' Z4 ~( K2 F6 M+ u$ v% B　　30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.

* U% ?- Q( ]; [" L; G/ C+ |, \　　改进: Everyone has friends in his life.

　　31. I am not good at maths, but English

　　改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.

　　32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time?

　　改进: Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time?

　　33.It is children who clear about their interests.
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* f; _8 [9 Z6 O; b$ q7 i　　改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.
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1 P/ d' l* y* _3 x　　34. I agree the latter idea.
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6 i! l+ ~. F# f, r　　改进: I agree with the latter idea.
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　　35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.
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　　改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.
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/ u) ?  p. P) y7 W: l　　36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.
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& |2 P4 l" D) H8 h$ ?$ h" }# O  o　　改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.

　　37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.

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　　38. No one knows all the things.
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　　改进: No one knows everything.
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　　39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.
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& e9 B% H; [# H: \! j5 t4 J　　40. Each form of having friends has its advantages
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　　改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.

* B& C7 m' r/ A  Z1 }/ A　　41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up.

  l6 L- X& x$ q7 d: w1 |. _5 E　　改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply
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9 M  U& T% n6 a8 d3 M　　42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.

9 o5 K7 S9 Q4 }" y! Y　　改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.

6 u* F! l8 X" H) \( [3 B+ U9 G  U6 X　　43. They will learn the bad habits.

　　改进: They will develop bad habits.

6 Y2 ?, Z8 E6 z　　44. In this continued process, people make progress.

　　改进: In this cycle, people make progress.
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, A* Q# L5 g! t2 X' d# j! W- W1 y　　45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.
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　　改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.

　　46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.
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4 J* |# j# q) J4 y　　改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.

3 d7 O2 \8 W* P1 D  J　　47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.

　　改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.
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, q4 R# B3 ]1 F* k　　48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.
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4 J# p# w! G3 Z9 n9 Q0 r　　改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.

" D! _8 l3 m9 a% R9 A) q　　49. Children should be taught disciplines in order to avoid unnecessary lost.

　　改进: Children should be taught discipline in order to avoid unnecessary loss.

  t2 c) P: G" {6 k% p3 ?/ a　　50. I felt alone.

　　改进: I felt lonely.

孤寒一剑

wow, where did you get those sample (the cheglish one)? I have to say the revised samples are really really good.
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sindowa

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平时的积累，呵呵！

玫瑰上的小蚂蚁

maxlake

能否解释一下 status quo 是什么意思。

寒塘鹤影

是现状的意思

spark

:lol::lol::lol:

玄紫妖妖

Wow,看得我头晕目悬的...还是记不住...呵呵

醉酒当歌

有些改进似乎意思有些改变...

自由自在

好哦．xiexie

penguin

thanks

lischka