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1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.
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. w' c9 T# Y, R) F. ?' u 改进：Artists' work upgrades our civilization.
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* d4 I7 m+ k) f& L' @" \+ P 2. For example, you work in a big factory.
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7 k& M$ @# G- V; f7 F& G" D 改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.
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l( U/ j- D4 k) E' Z* E 3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.
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9 `4 f" w$ T7 [4 k- x 改进：You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.
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4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck. 4 s/ Q1 a0 w5 O- ?5 m" E; `( X+ c
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改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.
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1 Q$ f& Y6 `! j+ ~ 5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.
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改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life. . Q; F M$ ]9 `8 s( O
- V' N) j9 _! A" [/ Q+ J2 G 6. Their brain is still very young.
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改进: They are still immature. 7 }9 p" n9 M/ _1 R- p( b/ t) A( r
! {: z! Q8 T4 o* Z- b# _ 7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things. $ j0 K, o( D) b3 O& w
, \% T* P- |6 d) D8 N# F% Y+ A& z 改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.
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8 l" @/ G6 e0 h4 j3 D 8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong. ! ^1 h, J" @. j2 a
0 y& q- v( z- J, ? 改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.
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8 P" m) j! S( | 9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.
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改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time. . F! u" a$ x: p+ |
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10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life. ! y! i. |4 _# `! J( l8 Q
0 x8 V* Q$ T% x. D' f8 w 改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it. : L+ U6 C% z0 K- Z h$ Z) ^
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11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.
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6 R$ \- I {! @5 t& }: H0 |" U: K 改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development. 7 C/ o8 C# z5 p, f4 y! b5 a
) y- A* R; l% |: }# d1 {7 i 12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.
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6 N" E0 U; Y0 v8 D5 z$ h 改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money.
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13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.
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' K& M- Y! Z4 j0 t& v9 @1 ~ 改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.
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14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money. 9 F& P; }7 W! ]' X1 }
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改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more.
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& L0 n9 e! S7 n: p8 | 15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.
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改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products. # b' s+ N* [" \: k/ p
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16. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills. ' U3 V9 g0 s1 F: a
; V* _' }- V2 `, d# ]' F 改进: In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills.
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17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians.
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' M# G! y: u) ]0 S* { 改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand. : \3 A6 E6 V' x& n G& z; V8 G
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18. This knowledge will become a part of your body.
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: E: o* {. \5 x6 ~2 w2 \" W& P. [$ |3 X 改进: This knowledge will become part of you.
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; ?" Y( F6 s( x3 { 19. They cannot think clearly. ; o0 C x! p/ Z
9 Y) Q0 Y: c' A+ b$ G/ O 改进: They cannot think straight.
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6 y9 l' X: g4 T! C) @( ~+ y 20. Money can improve their living standard.
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8 [; d4 _# u9 X' G/ l6 ]7 f$ b 改进: Money can improve their life.
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21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money. / Y0 t$ J5 Z' @$ a
) \ \3 C9 ?, D! Z. |3 l# m, @5 V# } 改进: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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5 ?; o+ l7 i7 i) x& b8 C) E 22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life. & l! u! [! V" K1 t5 N
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改进: If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life. ' t% b) t9 g1 C6 _6 a# ]5 o$ N! g
: m! `& D" I+ o8 B; } 23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later.
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改进: One purpose of education is to learn to learn.
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( R# F4 h8 e% z+ f( V% g" y% w 24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano.
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改进: Many parents send their children to piano classes.
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25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others.
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+ \ z U8 T7 W 改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others.
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26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.
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' z" ~" H2 h9 \ 改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.
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2 j7 Y* a( {: ]5 x' p/ k& v# V 27. Smoking can help you relax your mind.
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改进: Cigarettes can help you relax. ; h& g+ S/ f: x+ ? `
7 ]/ d. l" x% W* J 28. What's about nonsmokers? % m+ N$ _3 I, O5 t2 F# I
0 n# u; A* E- F* E2 s% Q9 F: Y) q 改进: What about nonsmokers? & c7 f2 U1 k5 ]
4 |3 j* K, V" e. U* M6 R* T/ h 29. Why not to be a non-smoker?
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改进: Why not be a non-smoker?
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30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.
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改进: Everyone has friends in his life.
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31. I am not good at maths, but English , a1 x6 c+ U2 |( x H% g8 O* a }( ?
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改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English. ! S9 }0 M! _- {2 L
# M' P. I* q; [/ R5 y 32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time? ) N" W, T3 {5 ]' t: B1 i+ J: j3 p; I
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5 k+ D# t7 {1 X" M/ k 33.It is children who clear about their interests.
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M: R9 u* y& _- E( J @0 L/ n 改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.
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0 O9 U+ w8 t7 n) d 34. I agree the latter idea.
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4 z( Q) l- D! {4 q 改进: I agree with the latter idea. 1 \3 N9 d4 m S, X
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35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo. % f$ X. V" S5 _; H
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改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo. 4 F& _% X0 v9 c2 w$ a0 T) B& }: d
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36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now. * I" x& {0 m) V" ~1 d! I
" o( H, x, I# Z 改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.
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37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are. % q3 m ~8 g2 w$ l
+ Z# j3 F5 F" @8 H* P1 U7 m. z* m 改进：People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn. / n% t( @' E7 n2 s3 ]8 U6 V# w
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38. No one knows all the things.
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5 m( a" a' y. |& n 改进: No one knows everything. : t. p/ m7 H8 ~2 S' j
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39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life. ! ^( t; A4 ]: A2 X
2 |- H- j, \, {1 w9 O0 ]6 g 改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.
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40. Each form of having friends has its advantages
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) F0 E8 d% J6 f3 v6 p4 i' O! h 改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages. 4 _8 J; P% Q: p) [( L7 a
" ~% J$ ?. L5 v. y2 ]- j& B. p8 l 41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up.
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& _: u' ^6 u0 j 改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply
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42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor. % @3 l6 Y0 ]5 f/ F: a
; c5 b. ?) Q2 ^5 p2 ` 改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor. 9 m; A9 X# _# a/ f$ {+ J1 B( ~
( C6 ~1 V$ J6 \* b8 F 43. They will learn the bad habits.
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改进: They will develop bad habits. $ h7 N( H) l" Y3 |6 O" y/ n
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44. In this continued process, people make progress. 3 q# o% \+ E8 Y' j: F* ^
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改进: In this cycle, people make progress.
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45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.
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改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.
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46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency. 4 V# p0 A! T7 W% i, D
1 F' V7 @3 H. L& e8 _ 改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings. 6 S* m! s9 u6 d M( _
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47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact. $ ~/ e" k- C: g$ i
/ w; t( ]7 g& f1 Q) \7 p' ` 改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.
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# p( Y" j7 ]3 u" L 48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.
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改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.
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1 B+ q; _/ }; K" E) Q 49. Children should be taught disciplines in order to avoid unnecessary lost.
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改进: Children should be taught discipline in order to avoid unnecessary loss.
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50. I felt alone. 5 A+ a8 H: R7 I$ f; C I2 a! D
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