锻造地道英语句子

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　　1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.
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; N" p9 \# J8 T1 R& Q' \　　改进：Artists' work upgrades our civilization.
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　　2. For example, you work in a big factory.

　　改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.
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　　3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.

/ Y1 G  u9 r: Y/ Y4 ~* {/ T. @9 [4 P　　改进：You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.
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　　4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.

  u) W7 `# Z' C% V" Z; |　　改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.

" q6 m( X, Q7 u: T4 L3 Q　　5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.

( Q! L( x# {' B  O/ D　　改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.
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; S5 F. @! ]2 Q! y+ i　　6. Their brain is still very young.

　　改进: They are still immature.

　　7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.
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　　改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.

　　8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.

- M% I. E7 y( k% R　　改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.

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, k5 Y0 s. ]1 A, Y9 }. b3 P　　改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.
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　　10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.

3 k1 `0 d% E9 }* B　　改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.
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　　11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.

6 \, i2 \# v3 \3 }  e: z　　改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development.

+ ~9 Y, y/ K: `7 y; w. L, N9 O  h　　12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.
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　　改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money.
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5 T! g: u: B& }, C4 i$ [　　13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.
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/ e  B- b0 k( Q" K: U- ]  `6 S1 D　　改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.
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  u! j7 _, J, q- a　　14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money.

# o6 K; C3 f8 S+ C. n, V　　改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more.
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8 e- `3 F$ t: f- [1 U1 v　　15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.

　　改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products.
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　　16. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills.
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) ]- a5 Q. v0 `; Q. b4 i　　改进: In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills.

8 E$ a% a- E1 ?/ V! p, W7 V* \　　17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians.
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　　改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand.
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　　18. This knowledge will become a part of your body.
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　　改进: This knowledge will become part of you.

　　19. They cannot think clearly.
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1 _. W0 `7 P' G* L& \) |( s9 [6 U　　改进: They cannot think straight.
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　　20. Money can improve their living standard.

　　改进: Money can improve their life.
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$ v7 F: _0 s+ j" s  z  v0 \　　21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money.

; E3 c2 X* g3 l1 C+ p" ?- m1 Q7 R　　改进: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money.

　　22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life.

/ Y& k6 v$ W% {0 D　　改进: If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life.

) X9 R$ w  K+ d5 |! w　　23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later.
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  ]6 Y# ?# U+ g; r　　改进: One purpose of education is to learn to learn.
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　　24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano.
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" J4 J4 _7 R( w: U/ _' h# k　　改进: Many parents send their children to piano classes.

　　25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others.

　　改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others.
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　　26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.
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　　改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.

　　27. Smoking can help you relax your mind.

3 F; A9 Q* P$ {' R6 k# _! Q, O　　改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.
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" a# r. B% ?% C9 Y　　28. What's about nonsmokers?
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5 Y1 f! O- p& a% S　　改进: What about nonsmokers?
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　　29. Why not to be a non-smoker?
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4 ^5 t8 c5 }4 |+ u. o* O　　改进: Why not be a non-smoker?
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　　30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.
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3 J# r1 M+ Z9 Q+ M0 x. W7 i　　31. I am not good at maths, but English
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4 Y0 C4 T7 l* L* Y, y　　改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.

0 V& P! e7 t  o- u" ^　　32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time?
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　　改进: Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time?
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　　33.It is children who clear about their interests.

! u, V8 P* T  \& y2 {3 U　　改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.
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8 b$ g( t' Z/ H　　34. I agree the latter idea.
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, F! f/ [% @+ v3 ^　　改进: I agree with the latter idea.

　　35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.

　　改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.
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: T7 S8 B# |3 |0 m' ]! z% z　　36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.
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3 e' |1 s0 R( a( S- T, d　　改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.
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　　37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.
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　　改进：People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.
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  r/ a- T& j6 B: ]5 K　　38. No one knows all the things.

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* t, W' G& L2 w% v! F; e: }) c4 p+ F　　39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.

6 W4 t% [. G% b$ W! t　　改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.
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　　40. Each form of having friends has its advantages
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4 c: a+ l' V% y( A　　改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.

0 \( o( d' I. }+ H　　41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up.

! \9 R5 _+ h! |　　改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply
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　　42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.
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/ }! g4 j5 Q7 k0 r6 O" Y　　改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.
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　　43. They will learn the bad habits.

　　改进: They will develop bad habits.

　　44. In this continued process, people make progress.
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. J5 c9 [5 B. S  F+ f% d1 H　　改进: In this cycle, people make progress.

　　45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.
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　　改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.
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/ E5 G9 Q! s- w6 l+ M4 a　　46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.
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　　改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.
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　　47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.
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　　改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.

　　48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.

　　改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.

　　49. Children should be taught disciplines in order to avoid unnecessary lost.

1 j8 s+ M6 U2 }9 Y" R　　改进: Children should be taught discipline in order to avoid unnecessary loss.

　　50. I felt alone.

7 X( d' m" x6 F2 A. O6 g　　改进: I felt lonely.

孤寒一剑

wow, where did you get those sample (the cheglish one)? I have to say the revised samples are really really good.
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sindowa

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平时的积累，呵呵！

玫瑰上的小蚂蚁

maxlake

能否解释一下 status quo 是什么意思。

寒塘鹤影

是现状的意思

spark

:lol::lol::lol:

玄紫妖妖

Wow,看得我头晕目悬的...还是记不住...呵呵

醉酒当歌

有些改进似乎意思有些改变...

自由自在

好哦．xiexie

penguin

thanks

lischka