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有人发起了翻译竞赛,重在参与.想和大家磋商,所以先抛砖引玉,把一个不成熟的翻译先贴出来,过几天也许还改一改.翻译有意译和直译,由于不太懂英文的诗歌写作,又想保留原文意思,所以就直译了,
f; S4 d& F0 }( i- J: S,.清晨,急匆匆的走过安静的街道。Early morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry.
8 Z/ C0 s# _! L/ ]( B/ c零星树叶的飘落,松鼠开始了忙碌。Partial leaves fall down everywhere, squirrels are busily running .
8 n" N% B" X# @' l1 Y现在的我,一如一年前的那个我。同名同姓。The current I, the same as one year, the same given name , and the same family name.
2 G/ {, _9 d- u2 \6 a梳相同的发型,背同样的背囊,不苟言笑。The same hairstyle, the same bag, reserved laughing and talking.. @( p- s0 ~; X5 G2 {, r
眉眼间却似乎多了什麽,又少了什麽。Seemingly added something in my eyes, or lack something.3 Q1 D" v! q' f. ] [
夏天过得那麽快,我几乎遗忘了那些个汗津津的夜晚。Summer went so fast, I almost forgot those sweating night.
9 i7 b9 w2 A5 k( T猫儿们在炎热的时候常常彻夜在窗外乘凉,追逐打闹。Cats were often playing the whole hot night outside windows to get cool.
- r- T0 ~: c) u" K9 P就像多年以前的我们,似乎也是如此天真的肆无忌惮。Like us many years ago, mindless self indulgence." N# h7 M3 n% T2 l" d" e9 o
我常常在入秋的时候怀念夏天,I often cherish the memory of the summer and those people that make me riant even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming以及
' [ s9 b+ ?4 D/ }5 i9 ~那些在最烦躁时想起也会微笑的人们。
1 R/ D6 V% d7 t0 E世情缘无非是梦 The emotion and the carma only is a dream.! a: H$ x' S7 ]1 ]# m/ ?2 E( t
昨夜温存不该的相逢 That shouldn`t happen to meet each other last tenderly night.8 w" i5 l1 d5 {* B: c
想要忘记又不忍放弃 I want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.+ N2 x. r+ d6 E" E2 ]1 I5 }2 d5 k9 p" r
最怕爱上像你这样冷漠又温柔的人I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild.
$ I- d& L% E6 F1 \; v寂寞世界谁来靠近 In this lonely world whom I can step inside love?
, R( Q1 d0 s/ a' R/ K' _醉过之後身边冷清清intoxicated then feel cold.% W+ V8 K+ `: \
迷路的心没方向的云The labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.
9 k$ \5 s! R, Q( `, c. l, i最怕拥有这样似有若无的感情I am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have.
2 ^- x# S% }1 k0 d" H多情人都把灵魂给了谁 The amorous men to whom you gave your soul?
5 J: A0 [0 x9 v3 g6 JWhy I am always hoodwinked!为何眼楮总是蒙了灰' ….. p3 K4 Y, o; b, Q: z8 ?
多少次小心翼翼告诉自己I have told to myself many times cautiously/ ^( N; m2 K. @7 k3 I
不要坠入痴情的轮回 Don`t fall into the spoony whirligig.9 L# K' C- D0 [- s% m! T9 j( k* q
多情人总让伤给灌醉The amorous women always get drunk by desolation,
7 r+ l V5 ]! r- E为何潇洒一点都不会Why can`t I take it easy?
0 ~+ m" u+ O0 ], n7 c3 q5 z5 S多少爱恩恩怨怨换来今生How endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!
! q t% v$ I* E/ ~7 N永难平息的泪2 m% o$ A6 y6 a1 y6 d* p
每当夜深人静时,When the quiet night comes& J- E* ]; `0 r
~我的眼前常常会泛起你的身影。Your figure usually appears in front of my eyes.
# a& \4 |% c$ u* ^+ v" c2 [+ y当你看到我时的那一声问候The greeting when you met me mad my heart in touched unaccountably.1 ]3 t4 }( {! j+ m6 I
让我的心里感到一种莫名的心动,
. k4 S, C; S, s7 i你的yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul / \6 o2 E3 J' z: d
一抹微笑;
% {# n! H4 I8 W V' a一个手势;
! M4 x# G7 Y! q( H9 S2 f一片话语,
& o* d5 X- v" @* r愉悦著此时我惆怅的心灵、
1 H* h- c* \; B# u. Y+ H, e明亮著我漆黑的角落,The moon lights the dark corner5 r9 q: X9 a! w, n3 A2 z
心里总能感觉到点点温馨。I feel a bit of cozy.
, y, q( B7 I/ `+ w3 G这一瞬的爱恋,The deeply attached to you in a twinkling* G$ ~+ `# }8 j$ h
也许是一生一世的最亮点。maybe is the most light spot in my whole life..
, i4 j4 Y" W% C* w% m起初,对你的出现,I didn`t cherish your appearance at first,
, H+ A$ h- _+ V我并不以为然。, c& d# E; i2 a: o9 t6 b w
可随著时间的流失,but accompanying with the time passed
# r4 `9 E" t. a4 o, x6 z慢慢的不知不觉中,I am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion .
9 V) _7 O' y. P. T, |9 c+ I被一种情绪所左右,0 T& w& g: _' P* w: b7 {
总感到一种难 以名状的朦胧的喜悦。 always feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly .
! u! ]% n# T3 L( s& F+ \* L4 _) N8 i即不问你是否喜欢我,Without asking you if you like me and if I like you1 D/ E+ k: v4 B$ R& I+ c& {2 ]4 Z
也不问我是否喜欢你,) N0 s# ?$ x- S
对你的存在只感到亲切,only feel gracious for your existing.; `( C; w7 M" u1 B* {4 \8 r7 |5 T5 Q
只希望能为你做点什麽。 only want to do something for you9 F4 ]2 M7 t" ]- q8 [
3每次有意无意的遇到你,every time when I meet you, r& R8 b5 K; a, E( F
心中都泛起丝丝柔柔的喜悦。The sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil
7 T8 w, i$ k k7 ^7 V, s. O/ H6 }然而我真真切切地知道,but I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere
1 V( V# ^; b# x你的身影已化成一种氛围, h- i7 r' X( B M% g
记在我的心间。That lives in my heart.
) Q6 m6 N1 X* |. N6 O你知道吗?Do you know your name can suddenly come into my mind at anytime!
2 Q: E; }) @$ o5 Z随时随地我的脑海里会突然涌现你的名字
6 X4 J: k" j7 r3 }/ W哪怕你某个转身时飞扬的衣角even only your flying clothes corner when you turn aroud,7 x( {' @ F+ ~: @
一种声音,and your voice; r' R/ ~: U O, R( e3 |
也让我柔柔的有了心痛make me gently distraught with happy feeling.
1 G6 J$ w' f: a6 m- w/ R1 w, g掺杂著幸福的感觉。" M3 I d/ m: f2 o0 m
与你相识的那一幕幕,the scene that meet and know you prinkle in my heart like the snow on the land
5 W# u+ I0 E0 B/ P9 Q p! n象雪花般撒落在我的心田,
6 T* V8 s8 H( ^倾刻间,suddenly flurry that all are the love to you.
& ^6 g% Q! i9 ]% ]9 l纷纷扬扬开来──全部都是对你的爱恋。* D# d9 Z7 V; c$ p* O# y- g
你知道吗?Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss
" Q; a+ t& K& Y5 o有一个能够让思念的人,
6 h; d* k- d8 N: |/ u/ i4 ~$ }5 p其实也是一种幸福。
; W. N- V* o& c- }尤其是在这样的日子,especially on the day, the gentle sea wind and the sweet summer. , N, k* L2 U7 A# T) e
柔柔的海风,$ H9 H' K# |2 I5 C
甜甜的夏天。
; |, I& Q0 l+ v7 ?2 S. }* A一扫那一缕如烟如缈的忧郁,Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy
/ G" [9 K& m: s( ^& w1 s只是静静地等待你的身影,only waiting for you quietly.
5 a: c+ _6 |7 y' v- m5 F: j/ H) D仅仅让你知道有那麽一个人,Just let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.
$ u, j, s7 s' X! n想和你有共同的情结,
* P8 I3 R$ F+ a Q共同的心愿。
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好想与你在细雨中漫步,I really want to ramble in the small rain with you( D& x; z" f O. f9 `3 P0 H
一同感受著春雨的洒脱,and to enjoy the rain washing together3 F* z1 |0 W- N% W
或是赶著看一场电影;or rush to a film & U$ b9 L$ Q- q# {$ G- S* \
或是静静地聆听一首曲子,or listen to a music quietly.8 t) [4 f/ Y( Y8 I2 @
『多情人都把灵魂给了谁』whom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?
2 m8 e2 _# d% \: W4 e( `5 c我们相拥旋舞,然後双目相视。We embrace and dance and then gaze to each other, 9 h! c& c& _, J$ N) o
浅浅一笑,smile or gently kiss then say “ I really love you”
. `- u/ n6 M) w$ s* R; s/ K或是轻轻的一吻,
: V# i9 ~. M' z1 ]" M0 a: [2 x再对你说∶『我真的好喜欢你』/ w$ v- D4 p' S! b% z% y: P7 p
就足够了. That is enough.6 J% G1 @+ |! ]% i" y& S
这也许是千年前就悄悄播下的种子,Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago! 2 W3 t9 P, d7 m) `( p
终於在这漫长的季节里深深地植下了根,finely it deeply rooted into the earth in this season and sprout.: P! ?8 b8 O" W
萌出了芽,
5 ]) q& _6 U' l9 ~" _一如对你的思念,the same as my missing
+ y& m7 Q$ A3 _9 V4 A; r3 n浅浅地泛著那一点点新绿。It comes a little bit of verdure.
& i- D. h- Q( e; R/ t6 j如果,如果有一天,If , if some day I can touch of your hand' m2 F& g+ Y$ s1 w4 r7 W
能够牵著你的手,! r- m+ `8 C/ m5 N, J
那麽,我愿把全部的眷恋都放到你手心里,then I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.
7 ^; Y+ C* u2 f1 }# [9 z让你细细地触摸,Let you touch me slowly and read me carefully. 0 b# S/ k9 q( _" W6 I
慢慢地细读,' n' e a0 S# r; `
我将用整个心去感觉你手里脉脉的温柔。I will enjoy your mild emotion though your hands with my heart and soul. 1 |3 C$ }) w( H4 P
在你对我伸出手的那一瞬,At the moment you reach out your hands to me ; |5 s7 r% o+ C2 [7 k. P
我就拥有了世界上所有的关怀与热忱,then I will have all care and ardor
6 o1 k0 ~& q! B+ d0 ~就让我牵一次你的手,好吗?Let us walk arm in arm , OK? |
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