TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架

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' r# K8 d( N: o9 f' p5 Y(一) 对立观点式
1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)

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1 U* O, |" v/ I$ i, K; f, \1 Q- G(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
$ R3 Q+ R' i. {$ @: KThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
5 d* e  d* Y% J( Z& vWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
) H3 q) b3 d& {3 ~It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...



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* P8 v; ?, l8 c5 A2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)

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% e) P1 S1 g( {To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
For A, A 的一个优势
Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
/ C) A6 W& q6 |- uFurthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
' H7 ^" U6 M+ [7 J4 y/ {on the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
1 H/ g) f8 k# G  X. E: w2 Omoreover, B的优点2,for example…
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.
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(二)单一观点式
1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)



首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
There is no denying that…
3 E6 d. {8 g. i& {* uAnother reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
( H6 o) H& S2 z! EFinally,…
  P# A6 g% i  Y" aBased on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…

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２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
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  m0 w" L9 b1 q2 s; x(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
) D6 y* P: G$ r+ z5 I% zThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
6 z* w+ }; N( C' u+ KWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
' @) W/ t" _" {* p4 TFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...


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* L; l7 W6 @0 P) f- ^2 P(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型
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* c1 @$ M( U! Z0 d- L( a+ yThere exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
" B0 x. }8 o$ K" ]  mWhen reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
The main reason for my propensity for C is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
C is superior in another way, this is…
. K" ~+ t: H" o% q2 |% s  _, f8 bFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)
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(四)原因解释型
0 D$ [. f# O- n  r, z# @4 t1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.

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$ p, K, ?( q$ W/ j陈述这个事实
2 Z8 G, D6 Q' ?3 _+ M" X+ eAmong countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
One of the primary causes is that…
' ?. P6 m4 v( p, ?' @XXX also results from…
… is responsible for xxx, as well.
To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX
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0 b5 I, E8 H7 b- A; ^2 Z! a2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.
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; ]2 y" Y/ P# ?. j背景描述
, e/ d) i( L& n4 o% j+ Z. ^There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.
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One of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
  X3 s+ H% \: J# t/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…



2 w$ G8 E  `& x9 Ra more subtle point which we must consider is that…
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9 o& J# v; A/ sIn addition/ furthermore
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% P* c* i/ c; f5 iIn conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

朱顺顺

嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?
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! @" q. ^2 c' i! x再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.
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[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]