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TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架
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(一) 对立观点式
. j, ^* X0 J& v- q" r3 r1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)
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9 \; j9 X4 B9 H/ a4 ^' Q2 }6 B: G9 ~(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons. . n' d; X9 Q5 G. M8 d
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
1 y, x6 F( g2 ?! g/ X0 nWhat is also worth noticing fact is that…… 4 \/ t) R( F: X. D
A is superior in another way, this is… 0 S, R9 P) b7 X$ H% r) ~* Y2 T
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because… $ e) q% R5 t, Q& L  d* [: D$ }' P
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ... : ?; T+ f+ _1 N* o: Q

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9 Y% p3 @3 Y, h2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast) , g6 @& i% A3 D. i$ ^1 g$ _

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To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.   a+ F* o4 ~# I* y. V- M  o
For A, A 的一个优势 2 P5 T. C3 A) G6 f. V1 S: l6 C$ \. w
Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
( G5 Z/ U. H8 n8 Y  v% iFurthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is... , c9 N) w' d6 k$ J
on the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is… 4 Y- q0 y; C5 d3 E1 C
moreover, B的优点2,for example…
% q3 |" P% [9 t, }From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2. # d0 E" G* V& j6 S& A4 T: q

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(二)单一观点式 $ l, O: D7 Z8 g0 _
1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型) & D0 M' V5 d, Y- X3 o# o% P. _5 a
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After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below. 5 a$ I% j! _4 B! y! n
There is no denying that… 9 Z9 j+ V  L0 a! A% d# W* z
Another reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…   I6 W/ P0 r) \, y" v+ |
Finally,…
8 g! s- t, c8 e) M" M. N' O9 |Based on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that… * t/ @: T. q/ B
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2.给出一个论点,主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由.?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
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2 N) h. ~: i& c. [: M(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.   M% r1 e1 i+ \. h2 ^* ^
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
" v" O! E3 z8 d9 Y- l) M8 S; x) b1 {What is also worth noticing fact is that…… 4 j( _2 ~6 N; B. I
A is superior in another way, this is… ) N2 H5 j$ X& m# ]
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
6 D' I! o. _1 L6 ^" gFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ... ) b; Q, c2 k+ u' L* H$ A; Z0 U: T

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2 c/ L' R7 z4 K3 u3 p(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型
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There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
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The main reason for my propensity for C is that…… ) r, t8 d% V6 |! v" `) _3 t
What is also worth noticing fact is that…… + _  ^, H: i9 v
C is superior in another way, this is…
) P) |8 l" l* H; k" O! ZFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C ( [1 t" K6 B+ c4 j: k
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
" p3 o4 r/ T0 X. V, R(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)
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(四)原因解释型
8 x# _4 \( C% |7 I& S1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.
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  J3 l$ |2 @; N* y陈述这个事实
2 N6 ]5 K( C1 Z9 AAmong countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
$ s$ k( T# y& e+ K  qOne of the primary causes is that… / ~) ]& m2 D: I+ [
XXX also results from…
$ H1 h& V  v/ Z… is responsible for xxx, as well. 6 m" l' p/ s/ [. |: r
To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX
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2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.
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There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.
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One of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
4 r' C; I8 Z+ T: v/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that… 6 C6 m9 A+ f6 J& O
/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…
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6 K8 J8 {0 f5 X- T# T$ a1 Ua more subtle point which we must consider is that…
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In conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……
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发表于 2005-1-6 12:10 | 显示全部楼层
嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?+ O; D$ B' H& d, L5 N. m

3 T0 g. p8 S* f5 {# J再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.# v: k  ~* n3 F5 z2 c
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