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TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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发表于 2005-1-5 03:05 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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TOEFL 5分 作文框架
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(一) 对立观点式
! h2 q" K* c+ y2 ^1 }2 E$ l! W4 j# ]1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
1 @  o- t9 B# P/ E+ d0 o; F. EThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
1 l8 B' v7 ?! c% |6 EWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
: `/ q1 D7 h& v" EA is superior in another way, this is… . `' }' a3 T& H: R* }. A
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
/ M! K& G# G% }) y. l+ [+ q2 y5 gFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ... ' }# o, [0 d; `1 r+ e% L/ p, K
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) N3 o) U: v' s  m7 B2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast) 1 _. ]# M! l! L2 S# {7 V2 ]

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To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B. 3 T0 c; ^. a0 g9 q3 g, b3 Y
For A, A 的一个优势 ) T+ [( o9 a; P: ~: ?3 [7 I
Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance, : B. Z" D$ I! e' E" O+ X
Furthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is... / K& R% [: z. e, s7 y
on the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
  s* q2 e8 ^2 O4 K1 ^% i* y  lmoreover, B的优点2,for example…
; ^- a9 a9 [! H* z* y0 RFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2. 6 g( T/ G' h; `  U" m: u3 J( [* Y

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(二)单一观点式
6 F) n  I: r; [: D- x' ~6 q1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型) " L9 i! t2 R5 F5 Q
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; u! ~. g5 ~6 d9 y首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase. ; N2 |1 [; v5 c9 Z
After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
) W; O, [! a6 E8 JThere is no denying that… / K! q. T4 G/ U+ J
Another reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…   v. F; b3 t8 j, i) x  B7 _" C7 z1 E3 ^
Finally,… 3 s2 C- k$ B& Y
Based on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that… ( b0 q7 d; z# r3 o

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  s% l6 n" o; C5 c2.给出一个论点,主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由.?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
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7 P+ ^1 f4 }9 S2 }) y( e1 S(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
  k/ u- X' w2 ~' b/ jThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
6 }4 u% F) m0 F, Y% ~# aWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
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It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because… + ^, {# v  y3 z  {
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ... - X+ t9 S" [) [6 _) J9 i1 Z

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# P: D( n* E7 r# U& L0 @5 e(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型
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- G7 y) w( |9 A9 C1 x# mThere exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D. 5 G+ ]- x" H3 B' H  Q; \" a
When reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons. & u% e/ V( z' p0 ?, ?% z
The main reason for my propensity for C is that…… , D0 n+ S/ Z( r
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
1 X( T5 \: b* D  S. q. eC is superior in another way, this is…
  Y# {% \1 r7 \' `9 sFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
% |) w7 V: c, BFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
( x( D* O# }  W$ f; _9 {) ~(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)
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; J' [+ n' K, ^; y" f0 G(四)原因解释型
" V8 ^4 W1 }- H# q3 _/ @8 d1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.
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Among countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows. ; t+ _3 d# |- I
One of the primary causes is that… ! z+ k- d& G! I) m4 k. [
XXX also results from… 9 E/ }7 y& K- H2 e1 |8 p; E
… is responsible for xxx, as well. ! R, R( Q) \3 j
To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX
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2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something. 5 C1 x+ ?& H' w) j* I# ^6 G6 n

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背景描述
; z4 ^( A! V0 O; i0 d% {There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there. - x9 N5 u1 g! \+ s7 Y" g2 D0 f2 O

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One of the primary method, to my mind, is that… 2 w) {4 X. z# u7 P, q+ r: k
/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that… / i# [' k% W2 Q+ B8 l2 ~0 o$ k
/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…
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a more subtle point which we must consider is that…
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In addition/ furthermore
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3 c+ n% X6 l3 a" _3 S/ }In conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……
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发表于 2005-1-6 12:10 | 显示全部楼层
嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?
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, f* j; M  j! K/ q% e6 B$ N再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.% L5 N3 @8 N$ \' N8 C2 J. \
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[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]
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