TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架

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(一) 对立观点式
1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
% i$ Y/ y' S0 Z' Q4 Z: L* JWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
2 _1 t  |8 L% N& q9 K% rIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
7 Z4 |1 i$ |" s1 d9 a' t. TFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...

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2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)
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& U7 W4 i2 _  j" ^0 |8 @To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
* o# |( {2 |5 L& P7 {$ J4 [; g; gFor A, A 的一个优势
Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
0 C' a( W8 X! A: fFurthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
5 r% S3 L; `* p& G+ R: Yon the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
moreover, B的优点2,for example…
+ J8 T6 G) K+ f! u' d5 oFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.
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(二)单一观点式
( |" K* G/ d. |  u& A0 W: X: l1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)
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2 A& f; d  w  ^- D, S9 {  B4 X首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
6 U, \  Q% ?" E& f: p! }There is no denying that…
  \9 D7 i5 ~! t4 k- |+ f5 UAnother reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
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Based on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…


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２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
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8 n; o; W1 ~8 O1 E% K/ P3 t0 e(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
9 P- h* r: X; rThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
0 E& b( y! `' e6 ^' }( bA is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
; _: \' _: [6 z/ S, Y5 iFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型

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There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
When reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
+ }  X/ j# K8 k' f& Z) IThe main reason for my propensity for C is that……
$ f) K0 ]. ]' X$ c) w3 l  AWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
C is superior in another way, this is…
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
" ^, O5 R/ u9 A* FFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)


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(四)原因解释型
, `7 x$ d) T, j  i0 S1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.

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Among countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
One of the primary causes is that…
XXX also results from…
… is responsible for xxx, as well.
, L+ g! M0 n! |1 g/ DTo put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX
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! X  A: w  P4 W2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.


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背景描述
9 R; M( |) G8 n1 nThere are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.
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3 Z( ]4 h: d' VOne of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
% v; |. T/ F% ^. ^5 W' L/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…
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a more subtle point which we must consider is that…
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In conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

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嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?
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- e8 k, h  Y" [! N: m/ G- I' N7 j再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.
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