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I just wrote a poem1 U0 F5 o! i0 @$ h1 Q7 ^
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.
6 j6 {# Z4 U# g3 s( O( a0 B- Q0 f- sHowever,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
8 }9 W3 }( F* t- _2 a* O) }& LThanks a lot!!!0 q0 s K4 d0 L
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- s, {; Y: k$ E7 c Q5 p( YFormerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
6 B% \" a1 [( w. q2 [/ g Somehow I'd found something wrong with us ; `0 N4 ]8 o v
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
/ b" K- N% z8 s' [0 s' D' } Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me . J% A& I2 t* i% l) i$ \
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
) I* H2 t$ |# Y! L Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness # ^$ k4 P- N0 n# r: [' {
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday 4 l% F! }" U% T$ }4 x7 A
somehow I realized you were still in my heart
$ x( _/ L! P* j8 b( y4 a' ^ somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
) e% K; n% M4 D# h3 ?. Y2 r5 Y somehow I lost myself inside again
" v: w, n. T* Z- q4 M& V! gNow, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog $ Z7 S# |+ K4 h! @. J
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion8 U) v2 ?0 f; r* Z n& z k1 R
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
0 G W% X. q) s' o; GBasically, I almost finish this poem
8 t% h7 ?) d/ k I am 一个人de精彩6 z* t) U$ s: n( {* C
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
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" w5 _( O0 w, _* H( S) q" RIronically? Isn't it? |
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发表于 2008-1-27 12:42
