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I just wrote a poem+ k2 `; `) B+ t, Z) X
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.
( _% z7 I; e" x0 l7 y5 M6 \$ AHowever,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem" g% m, ?- Q$ W
Thanks a lot!!!
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you + ]9 N! ~, l5 Y2 ?$ I6 p) N! K
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
3 R7 r$ z1 U5 w! z0 _ Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world 3 @6 P. l" `9 [2 O0 h9 I% B. M# ^$ {
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
9 T0 B% ], u$ F* v8 a1 E5 j( y: k Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
) `; [. o- f3 F4 `. D Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
) f" W7 w' y# ]However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
, Q) ? Z( Y6 ^; F3 O somehow I realized you were still in my heart
3 Y1 ^+ d6 _7 L2 x; I5 u* | somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
; U. K: j6 F1 d5 ^4 k. u somehow I lost myself inside again 9 p' C/ O8 B! T; e0 Y3 N( L6 Z
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog 7 Y! R% d% K& @/ f; O. q
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion" z2 h. H# d- h# n" b7 g
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
& E! S$ }: X9 p$ QBasically, I almost finish this poem4 f5 i# s* d) ~' w, O, U
I am 一个人de精彩
0 U( H8 ~& u! a6 T. t I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
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! k w r4 {+ O. z! ~Ironically? Isn't it? |
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