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I just wrote a poem& K3 \, b+ W2 x+ p( G) U$ `* f- D$ s6 ^9 `% C
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.
& s$ I$ ?1 \$ }! H8 h% f$ {However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem& k5 c) m/ O9 b3 {
Thanks a lot!!!. _1 w3 A# ]- Z% B+ h
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7 J2 i7 N: Y7 H8 j4 O+ `2 rFormerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you ; Y5 B# X+ N/ x! X5 I
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
8 ]- }8 p/ c- g0 p2 f6 P. \ Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
W& I" c3 h/ _ V Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me ) I7 O9 E% K2 ^
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
8 a/ Y8 T5 W2 x1 w% k ~8 O# C Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness # t7 w# b6 R$ {$ I
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
9 P% W' Q* @) v1 ?8 I0 r" { somehow I realized you were still in my heart
6 i% r( Q; p* W: e' L" i) c9 s, | somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness p% Y% A! L8 y9 i
somehow I lost myself inside again
( S/ m: i/ q3 Y) WNow, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
) n: i) `, L! r. ~1 u& x4 K0 R( k somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion8 I* S2 C5 h) d' \6 J$ e. P4 A
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
/ z2 a8 r8 d/ x" i( fBasically, I almost finish this poem
) V' c( B* I5 s* {, E9 g$ p I am 一个人de精彩
- |& B% A: u. v4 i" ? I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.- k7 x5 a5 {! G$ c) \1 D
But........
& I! k1 n. g5 I( O% g6 ]Ironically? Isn't it? |
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