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I just wrote a poem
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However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem# {; x; m8 t4 p
Thanks a lot!!!
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2 y3 H, s# M3 Z" PFormerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
1 e6 y+ d* B' K5 x+ x8 J) P Somehow I'd found something wrong with us % n* P* t0 E8 D5 C( T5 R& y7 w
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world & ]0 @+ h/ Z9 p) d! a
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me ( b7 z$ e6 I3 a. u
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
/ b0 \( Y; F, X6 ^ Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
4 H4 ^! S( q- m0 s! \$ oHowever, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday - x. u6 J) W$ Z, `
somehow I realized you were still in my heart 8 a2 l1 P/ [7 X. y
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
6 C5 [; o- U5 _4 [: ^ somehow I lost myself inside again
% J5 `" [! J6 C$ [+ ]Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog $ ]. r" S7 d% Y A1 J! `" u
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion6 w v" A# p$ A9 |
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................, o1 g( i& R# h: ~' Q( `
Basically, I almost finish this poem2 s Z4 T9 |, G$ _/ E
I am 一个人de精彩
5 t$ G( z. E8 T I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.& g' c0 p9 h) U+ T5 m
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发表于 2008-1-27 12:42
