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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)1 _, q' ]% G1 b; u; X% ]& M5 ?/ f

6 d0 Q3 y3 Y1 C# B/ z# @! @7 t3 k: q     One day I always remember/ r! O4 I) c/ x3 U' p1 I$ P
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  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was, x9 N' V, \. H
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exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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% a9 i0 V7 x4 Jput up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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5 ~% \+ @( W8 u! W) f% D; B  Z# B little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,# l0 _3 J5 m; I( c
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every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid
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. M4 }* E( h' c. `: s8 l was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely 5 A# o2 l  e0 |

; f4 J, K* o' W: dtrusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since / N2 C& m0 G" {0 u5 Y% W) R% j' b# m

. y2 K' l" a8 @6 I. r  s6 {7 Bthat date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing1 m  p" {0 J$ A% @/ s, @+ {

5 l9 R- H5 X% J' k5 j' ^ on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard
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for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my
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deaest daughter.
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After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.
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; C6 t; Y3 W8 X7 H[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!# D! C" }- _9 J( C# B# Q
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
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