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茉莉花开

抛砖之作！（我英语测试时的作文之一）
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8 D: p1 ?2 N/ t& d! S　　　　　One day I always remember

　　July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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& D% P0 q' l, j7 Zput up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my

1 G9 ~: Q) V4 @8 O8 t6 {: y2 E$ ^ little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid

was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely
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trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since
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that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing
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( p8 [1 p) y- n; B on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard

% `9 P1 U' e0 F2 k, j5 h. Lfor me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my

2 Q& B# D" P4 z1 E+ @/ Edeaest daughter.

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After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will

  I% i2 e) Q8 r, ~3 C: y% q9 k0 } never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.

4 S' V8 a: }1 I; r2 S& N- i) ^[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]

mercurybird

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% w- _3 e' y0 r" W" Z- H( U& o9 \8 mwe should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!

OliveOil

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connie

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