作文竞赛第一贴！！

茉莉花开

抛砖之作！（我英语测试时的作文之一）
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　　　　　One day I always remember

" t4 x' a& p5 L/ H　　July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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7 B; V3 z8 e$ |$ m( h8 Xexactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to

put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my

little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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( M+ r' J- F4 @% _' H. g3 J4 W every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid

was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely
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trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since

# h$ A6 [, v! R7 m% a6 y5 `that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing

5 n( c$ j  F4 l* }7 K on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard

for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my

deaest daughter.


: i7 Z8 C) I" A. w8 D5 ?% A4 aAfter so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will

7 F3 o& q' ~" Q8 }9 B5 y; J: J never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.
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9 S) E& I1 ^, u[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]

mercurybird

good better best!!!!!!
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!

OliveOil

It is great!

connie

GREAT！