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茉莉花开

抛砖之作！（我英语测试时的作文之一）
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　　　　　One day I always remember

! }; f/ d1 _, x! X" w2 g1 Y! Y　　July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my

little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid

was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely

2 q/ N* \5 H8 c# ltrusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since

that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing
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on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard

for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my
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deaest daughter.


After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will

3 K: O& h  B: L never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.

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mercurybird

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+ h6 {/ L& [+ q1 i1 d" q' |we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!

OliveOil

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connie

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