作文竞赛第一贴！！

茉莉花开

抛砖之作！（我英语测试时的作文之一）
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　　　　　One day I always remember

9 B* o$ s6 [# Q- r　　July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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- H! V( Y$ s1 a9 p" I/ kexactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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9 v* b+ P. Q8 J1 K' w4 B8 A) D1 Z* O+ Cput up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my

little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid
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- L9 \$ m3 ]2 y& s1 r$ O! ]7 N) B was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely
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trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since

8 o: [- ]0 l+ `4 pthat date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing

on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard

for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my
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* S; {; D; a+ \6 s% }0 ]+ _3 @deaest daughter.


. Z! n9 a2 I0 u% t+ MAfter so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will

never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.
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9 b( M$ n3 Q) U: j/ c[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]

mercurybird

good better best!!!!!!
) J- w- I( h2 z- }" hwe should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!

OliveOil

It is great!

connie

GREAT！