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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)
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     One day I always remember' X0 f. `! z( L  M) V6 N* s

& _! [% V, l1 Q: r  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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1 s$ _5 o$ S# nexactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my* p. v/ _* B0 z
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little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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# S: a) f3 \; y0 X* h every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid
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was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely 9 l) T) H( d" C5 [, p
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trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since
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that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing* p5 l) J7 e; M& D

7 O$ @$ _. L% R- X0 R on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard % x! i7 J, d7 ^2 C5 A+ Y3 v/ M5 G; t  h

  d. z: w! e$ l2 l; V, z9 O% o+ Y$ }for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my
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deaest daughter.
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After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will# K8 ?; F- w" ]* s1 B/ Z! \+ x7 V

- R; k) B0 e7 m9 z/ d never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.
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3 @/ j: o: V& C& F0 _[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!
8 w! ?! \+ L7 w, T/ n* v) xwe should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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