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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)
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3 t$ I* y4 G' l: W( c4 e" E     One day I always remember# X3 F/ k% Z( n/ n
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  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was$ X  t0 r, L8 e
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exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my! M0 I) m1 t- ?3 b4 R) G% c
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little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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& k8 T& E$ K/ ] every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid) t' g5 F' x4 s* F9 G/ e" K6 F
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was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely
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2 r8 j: ]% E$ f6 ftrusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since $ z# O% m# X, w- e( R: I

  ~( y; D/ @" `$ k& lthat date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing& ?4 S  x4 E1 f8 I. i. H4 s: c
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on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard 3 v& c0 z" o$ d" H6 R  `7 D; ?
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for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my
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deaest daughter.: o' _. R9 M* K: c

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/ H/ f+ L8 \# I' NAfter so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.# l, [+ l2 V+ ?8 ?: x& f( s
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[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!
, L( P/ W1 L$ \% B( t8 b' {: Nwe should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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