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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)
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     One day I always remember
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  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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7 J; p: I5 P5 {+ F9 J$ ]exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to" e2 l' v5 Z! H2 t* [) n( f" N; E

& ^" C6 R! ]) s, K: `put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my& h. ?+ r5 @/ u- Q8 A* ~/ H2 y
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little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,7 H6 O1 s$ m3 ~1 [

, x! \' |0 n+ z! {2 r/ \) H( i4 Q every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid2 A( C" z& a% K. z( z

- |$ ~$ \1 m4 w3 t( l was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely
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trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since
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that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing+ D# c- t' v0 ?, w; g& P) Y
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on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard . R8 s2 m5 n  }7 u) p- w7 }
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for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my
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2 R- z, Q' I+ f. ^; k4 H' f/ a3 ideaest daughter.
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1 Z+ R' h2 e$ X* e9 ^+ N/ y6 ]- C% `4 bAfter so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.
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[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!2 b, S3 n+ o+ j% w
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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