SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!

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) Y- q% L7 Q9 O& I. ?. n! KAutomatic transmission
Silver
Remote starter and heat blocker
+ X) p3 w' [% g# [Two sets of keys and remote keyless entry
& C1 I& }4 ]# j2 a# U+ HFour additional tires with rims
) Q5 a- @( u9 g  d; o2 f$ }/ uAir Conditioning
ABS Operation
Tire pressure monitor system
Information system
" |7 W* r; [9 ^$ ^8 M6 K3 M" |Central control locks,doors,windows
! D# f' \  e+ ePower locks
1 N2 F4 I! ]' K9 j1 Y2 iPower mirrors
, P; D8 `. L- D$ u  YPower doors
" F* R$ V  i$ Q( {7 ~$ t* K' [Power windows
' B3 w- l+ b7 o8 LChild safety locks
Rear window defroster
1 g# S( n; Q' r, [9 o3 ABluetooth hands-free operation
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' k3 }* M6 F0 i6 e2 ]- D' Z3 FAirbag: driver
: ~2 a) `8 j" ]7 O6 [( U. sAirbag: passenger
2 N) y, u3 {9 hAirbag: side
# {: @6 P0 B7 I! N* U% [. r2 iAlarm
/ ?* i* K8 C/ }1 S+ [0 d( {Fog lights

**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

3 o) C, `5 |2 L8 J. v# o( C+ ~Please call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
( `# z" a0 i- D( G: E: ?Pick up on March 18-22.
' W# S5 h' m9 @! @1 zCash only please :)

兰君子

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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .
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( X- W# h9 J0 G7 E: i' d1 v( oIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.
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IF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING
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layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."
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By the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
8 ?% u. i2 k1 T这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

2 Y, y) c# e& I; P$ Y, @哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR
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0 M- T! Y6 h) }% B7 E# ZDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

1 m* e: A8 \3 OFcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

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zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

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' k4 i1 ~6 T( T& h! i0 |$ oSorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
You may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
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Last, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:
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"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".
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There are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.
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4 O, A8 w- a+ C9 L: JSorry to give you "HARSH" again.