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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006, 6 b" m( C) F* g0 p
I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  2 C, `7 N9 Y/ ]' r: t! _
Dreamers
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Poets0 {, p- ?5 z) S7 z) e! D
Builders of canoes,4 y0 x& E% q# G! y9 ], Y( B
Black smiths8 ]# B- S! W2 h" U  M' m
Murderers,
+ q+ f0 u" m. u# D) ?' Q5 J7 I$ q' nRisk takers,
2 K$ |4 l* Y: y4 E2 p1 FMy mind is full of curiosity and wonder
; K$ A. J' H2 @4 q4 DAs I think of what could be. ( H8 O. _( [4 ]. Q  z( W5 y
The world is so big to me
/ ^  I( H; z0 ]! M9 uI wonder what it means to be
1 x* C8 g" Q) EI looked up at the star and smiled + a! e! j0 m" e2 C/ v$ O7 d
They flashed as they have heard all I have read. ! D% e: P! C2 a7 `) T$ z
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
! `* o+ p- ~+ J评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。
. b  S6 K8 d# t! x9 @, q( ]顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,
9 z% H! G2 X. D) R. dA poor old Guy;
8 U* d5 r1 o& C5 |, {' J" nLegs in a bonfire,
- q3 q" _" p* N1 y( {Head in the sky0 N1 c/ Y! u* q2 y% r7 ?: j
Lonely, with the feel of betray
1 \( a6 N  h! f* g, S4 }4 DHeart empty and hollow
, `  z0 }: \  e7 E  |5 y0 W* Q5 IAlone I stand* M4 ]0 r, J7 a
I am useless to all
1 E2 i( M# R: zBut I wish I were a dove ' t% j( G! C0 C4 P( e9 V0 h" w
Giving myself to the world, to the fire' \/ W4 S( L* K* y) ~2 I( k9 Q$ K
I feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind! D4 b. y: t+ `( G2 k& I' n
I sent prayers to my god* F) g& I# }  y3 r5 J
Though he does not answer
! H, v3 F4 h  V% G0 s; z8 H' E+ \- fHe bless me with the gift of hope
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大型搬家
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。
" O* i, a0 `4 z( A/ D( O# m% z加油加油,经常写写!
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