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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006, : `& C% y4 C' g9 p9 d
I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  4 Z9 }9 Y% Y( o: ^0 K% j8 c
Dreamers
, D" ~0 }1 p9 ?  B& E9 cSavages
3 S1 J1 K5 x9 T- V3 K3 S$ xPoets5 K8 H  {4 H! _! V5 R/ u
Builders of canoes,
- e5 z# J) c6 l% u* B- l$ tBlack smiths
7 `: _4 W! d8 A4 s6 HMurderers,' H4 ]& t, x! \. d! i$ U7 B
Risk takers,9 |: G3 B+ S- R/ u
My mind is full of curiosity and wonder
2 c, U; c6 e, A  w& u1 mAs I think of what could be. ) B2 |+ ^- y' U1 Q
The world is so big to me ' I( p3 E: d5 a' C3 k6 d/ y4 \. ?
I wonder what it means to be
- B  _0 u" y% |1 w4 P& U, \I looked up at the star and smiled
1 u" M. \5 d4 F  dThey flashed as they have heard all I have read. 9 C1 V+ n  w1 d# M

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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
3 N4 H# k! A+ l- m评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。' P/ E6 r% W" D4 {" ?- u
顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,
( x! o/ p/ r+ W- S4 L/ s; CA poor old Guy;7 h# s5 U4 \( D% n
Legs in a bonfire,8 h" r- Q, q/ ]& K* O1 s: g
Head in the sky- ?+ \9 y9 C: F
Lonely, with the feel of betray" \2 d; u+ n1 Y8 E3 w1 b6 b( Y  o: W
Heart empty and hollow
; ]$ F3 O8 o! V0 n  FAlone I stand8 N8 j+ f- ^  ^% _: @* l- a: K1 k
I am useless to all
; E* h- z: k* t" @: s: `But I wish I were a dove 9 {+ j5 Z# \  `9 \, c
Giving myself to the world, to the fire
, w/ L1 f. ?4 c$ b8 v/ P0 FI feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind) G/ M/ h% i9 M" U( |3 s# [
I sent prayers to my god
0 M" t; Y0 v! w3 T- F! B: A# UThough he does not answer
: r- R- ], F  sHe bless me with the gift of hope
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。3 ^% @0 T$ C& ~/ ?0 G) d
加油加油,经常写写!
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