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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006, ! k8 c; R# B- V& ~: z8 x& z0 `5 c4 }
I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  , B2 j9 `; S" e. R5 B
Dreamers* e2 P1 u  I( }. b  R$ A
Savages6 t( S3 d, f4 f" f9 E
Poets
; ^7 E: A+ `4 ]! @6 z+ H' MBuilders of canoes,
3 x+ i. A( d; v  d! `Black smiths- S, o* V5 {5 m( j! y* G
Murderers,  |9 n+ G" @  `, N
Risk takers,8 P, z  Q) [- R4 w1 }' M
My mind is full of curiosity and wonder
$ H- h  [. p, f& z) NAs I think of what could be.
# W; u% p; G  N. n) _# EThe world is so big to me
3 B* j) \, p# {I wonder what it means to be6 P9 b+ A) e6 o" j) O
I looked up at the star and smiled   U$ D1 v6 r1 W3 b
They flashed as they have heard all I have read.
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。: s; P. y" V& }; R, v' @2 r  n/ L
评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。7 _4 V2 w5 R9 Q
顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,% d5 n4 t9 F& t# s$ B; |
A poor old Guy;
" r, ]4 S+ ?3 b0 n7 G4 `& |7 ]Legs in a bonfire,
9 S! g( U: a  x$ w2 |$ b1 CHead in the sky
! @4 z5 g" l' ]8 n2 X! TLonely, with the feel of betray
* s1 V" a- W3 [( ^Heart empty and hollow) H* f9 g; y/ ?/ h+ C& N. ]
Alone I stand
. _0 p+ `# ~; @* H, l4 u3 F" lI am useless to all
7 ]# h: x& M( e2 Y; d  H$ ]But I wish I were a dove " k( w& j7 f9 H) W, |
Giving myself to the world, to the fire% b' L1 f1 X  _' \! X  l1 p4 _
I feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind
& P- B. i* [7 d/ yI sent prayers to my god( U. E& a+ [( H& h, ^: j
Though he does not answer
* O9 L6 ]6 E! X$ w; E8 }He bless me with the gift of hope
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。
4 n/ a0 U: X( V8 F加油加油,经常写写!
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