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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006,
  p$ z& ~! ?. PI believe there must be creatures like ourselves  ' d$ `  x5 g* w* C; y
Dreamers! M: L. ^3 M1 |* F# F7 ?
Savages
( }- W4 V9 M8 Q) ?% p" |: zPoets( ]2 ?9 b4 v, a( r
Builders of canoes,
6 e3 Q! Q' ~$ b! y1 S% m7 oBlack smiths& B* F9 X; |- q9 w7 K6 S, n
Murderers,; _5 z! N4 M2 H0 d- x) ?
Risk takers,
, ?7 a1 }/ _: r$ {My mind is full of curiosity and wonder   F7 Z+ F0 W# b  |. S+ ^3 d
As I think of what could be. % T0 _% P( w9 n4 V
The world is so big to me
( R! c/ y/ X' A; a/ f, XI wonder what it means to be
, N5 T# q( \7 z! y5 KI looked up at the star and smiled
4 G" N" U2 O! ^6 p9 ?They flashed as they have heard all I have read. ' Y$ ~! Z& _! u% b, g& ~$ U/ w

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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
8 `) O- q" @  j5 E1 Q- \8 c评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。3 o2 V# S! k8 S& N, _
顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,
+ u; |4 E. C7 F6 g6 xA poor old Guy;: s- x( A) I7 }9 Z' I+ T
Legs in a bonfire,
* e, m2 y$ i( q: b! h2 q- nHead in the sky% n  X9 K+ B7 V
Lonely, with the feel of betray
0 H) o6 G2 H, L. n& _% S  e. r- J$ bHeart empty and hollow
8 i% d8 f) U$ cAlone I stand
0 E/ m" A% o- ?+ Z( d; PI am useless to all " R9 V+ ^0 D8 H5 {' x
But I wish I were a dove
' Y; X  Z! F& Y: o) e) o" vGiving myself to the world, to the fire
! |6 j+ r1 o, C) _: C6 R$ fI feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind8 Q& F2 G4 x8 L2 \1 P* U
I sent prayers to my god
/ G3 @3 W( V2 ?Though he does not answer
5 j* n. m/ j$ zHe bless me with the gift of hope ; ~7 q5 M& n( M# ^& v, \4 W
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。
4 l( Z0 c8 }4 T8 G. V4 |加油加油,经常写写!
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