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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006,
% H6 m. D6 Z0 o2 \7 Y: N+ o3 gI believe there must be creatures like ourselves  
4 a. e( @" \# k/ q7 b4 E& oDreamers
( H( c, u6 v+ F$ `8 x, CSavages/ h* ?  Q5 ~6 L$ P. b. B& z
Poets% N. J; d- M, ~2 P  r% u, `
Builders of canoes,
5 @+ d( B# K! l4 X6 d% O. qBlack smiths2 t  H" F) D% H( c1 w0 J" p
Murderers,
6 b% d7 l* K$ w, B8 g# dRisk takers,/ K- f: w' {3 W' B! H
My mind is full of curiosity and wonder
1 }' u, O( e, p! HAs I think of what could be. ' ~+ _& D6 o$ ~5 d: m* ]( _8 f
The world is so big to me , `7 h4 B' \; N2 X5 X( E
I wonder what it means to be" c( E. L) L) B- @$ \
I looked up at the star and smiled 9 s, J/ G. K- X5 D- b8 B, ]
They flashed as they have heard all I have read.
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。; V7 q. H: ^7 h, S4 A, F- M
评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。
/ Z$ F+ _/ W2 [5 i6 J0 B顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,
! d, U7 H7 X+ y' zA poor old Guy;
/ a& D! ~2 L0 d; V, nLegs in a bonfire,8 a7 b6 p7 h) g# m4 h0 A# r
Head in the sky
, u( n2 y; @6 MLonely, with the feel of betray# W( z* B8 P$ }: q( U
Heart empty and hollow% G- B. ]6 e1 U1 b+ o
Alone I stand
- @: y3 I% x0 b4 }, x6 g/ p. lI am useless to all
2 ~8 c" Q9 q1 v( k+ |: CBut I wish I were a dove ! z" R% H$ M8 A4 c3 t6 b6 [" x
Giving myself to the world, to the fire" w7 r* h2 n# M1 I
I feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind
' l  I% C3 X3 A: j: `) z; O6 mI sent prayers to my god
' j( O( @: ]' E( IThough he does not answer
8 d" x/ k8 r/ B0 D5 L; l$ k1 FHe bless me with the gift of hope
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。% @( B5 n- [* J
加油加油,经常写写!
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