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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006, ' y* k# X6 |5 T' P+ s# t7 ?
I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  . i" F/ f4 Q, z$ L
Dreamers% Z& [7 h" g8 t
Savages
& j' V! Q* Y! b/ OPoets# K# x$ j& o' p2 s
Builders of canoes,
& Z$ x2 a: N) N5 \Black smiths
2 ~  ~! _. N: p$ IMurderers,; J; T/ Q- @3 V1 E7 ]+ y
Risk takers,! Z' V1 H0 h; B6 e6 k6 ]( k6 r5 c
My mind is full of curiosity and wonder
; e3 x) G& G& u8 Y4 J0 WAs I think of what could be. ; i& f+ o# q6 Y! ^4 x4 e+ q6 g
The world is so big to me 3 {. k( r' R9 p/ z/ \& D
I wonder what it means to be
2 }/ c/ Q* T) c4 s+ }I looked up at the star and smiled - Y  h, L/ |$ Y) Z& i# j
They flashed as they have heard all I have read. # L6 N# ~4 O/ o  s* y1 i# X
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
% g+ x0 L" D0 E$ e0 z5 j" a5 m6 U$ t- E* x! u评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。" d+ }, L9 G+ n- ^9 |2 f8 k& l
顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,
1 f+ |: A! L: O" b' MA poor old Guy;# ?4 q* L/ o0 z( b" x8 G, c9 D
Legs in a bonfire,
, X  z, N$ ?( Z1 dHead in the sky& d+ D3 h' E9 |0 Y
Lonely, with the feel of betray
% V& d7 P& A0 L. AHeart empty and hollow$ j1 s$ d9 v6 {( a% Z
Alone I stand
/ O, f  a8 Z1 L! Y& z4 \I am useless to all . @1 Z' }) @, v( H% j& B. S/ B
But I wish I were a dove
  ~  i* D7 |' \6 S$ n- ?Giving myself to the world, to the fire2 x* g  c8 R% q6 {$ _& G. H
I feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind( L/ q: k+ O1 H  Y7 U; E6 M1 o  l: S) ]
I sent prayers to my god% b! {8 |& L9 Y) f/ O% p0 A& u4 m
Though he does not answer7 d. q0 b* v8 ]4 s0 F2 x
He bless me with the gift of hope 9 E4 |9 P3 g" n# z

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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。2 R; l) I6 b9 t1 J) W$ |
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