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本帖最后由 suvescape 于 2012-3-17 11:22 编辑 S8 A: G' r7 N1 s/ y3 Q
jsw 发表于 2012-3-16 23:37 
+ o9 h0 y0 M$ d1 | ~音频上传了。没稿子,就那网站上顺口读的,是第二遍。帮忙听听。$ N% X6 B* N, l6 ?
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音频听不到。$ d2 R2 B; c+ h) q
Hehe. SUV has a point there.8 j3 _9 ^9 G4 X
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I will try to upload my reading very soon...( L1 N' v. X- A7 |2 t
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我建议修改为:. H. U* K, @2 q; E: o
Hehe,SUV gets/got the point.2 A; d; \( P% W3 `' P
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I will upload my reading soon. (不需要try,very)5 x# O& i4 }$ `& x0 R2 p9 W
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