天啊，这个版的英文描述能改改吗

SheJing

Killing me softly with your words, I'd feel flushed with Sentiment;
Touching us deeply with your feelings, We'd like share whatever we own.
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鸡皮都起了。“Killing me softly with your words,”？？？？what the fuck

竹帘儿

Killing me softly with your words, I'd feel flushed with Sentiment;
4 f& p* w7 K& }0 ]3 q! M. O& wTouching us deeply with your feelings, We'd like share whatever we own.

8 S" k8 j& I( N. X- z% D) ?5 O鸡皮都起了。“Killing me softly with your words,”？？？ ...
SheJing 发表于 2011-3-26 05:48

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珠圆玉润

你指的是我儿子写的那几句话吗。是有很多错误，但我觉的我改了就不真实了。

arbo

We would like to share, not we would like share.
0 ~  _& b# t, [$ |4 S0 oI think it is better to have sth more appropriate.