天啊，这个版的英文描述能改改吗

SheJing

Killing me softly with your words, I'd feel flushed with Sentiment;
4 u: v2 z' C: R* gTouching us deeply with your feelings, We'd like share whatever we own.

  r0 m! G" V3 M% r4 F  v鸡皮都起了。“Killing me softly with your words,”？？？？what the fuck

竹帘儿

Killing me softly with your words, I'd feel flushed with Sentiment;
- V1 a! y. t3 D* M; e' STouching us deeply with your feelings, We'd like share whatever we own.
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鸡皮都起了。“Killing me softly with your words,”？？？ ...
: J% B+ ^+ V3 K/ k) F+ t9 G+ LSheJing 发表于 2011-3-26 05:48

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哈哈哈哈

珠圆玉润

你指的是我儿子写的那几句话吗。是有很多错误，但我觉的我改了就不真实了。

arbo

We would like to share, not we would like share.
I think it is better to have sth more appropriate.