miss you -----my friends

珠圆玉润

Recently , I am really busy. many tests are waiting for me ,also assignment. I really miss our English class on weekend, however, when i woke up , it was over Am 9. lol,
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hope our leaders could forgive me, I was absent  at least 3 classes.I do apologize for it. i am reading some literary works , and collecting new words. hope there is still a seat for me lol, and I enjoyed the time we have been together. say hello to everyone, hope see you guys this weekend.
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阿猪同志的问题很严重，对错误认识远远不够，下次大家打算惩罚你表演一个节目。
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, t6 Q* s4 P3 ~Recently , I am （我不知提醒过人们多少次，用I'm； 写为I am，是极其自高自大的表达方式，正常没有人这么用）really （用very busy,或 really very busy）busy. many tests are waiting for me(用第一人称主动语态，一般写作，少用被动态) ,also （as well as）assignment. I really miss our English class on （？）weekend, however, when i woke up , it was over Am 9（9 am）. lol, （用简单从句就好，不要用重来重去的重句）
" `+ H: ~5 M" }- A# m( @i am （I'm）short of time everyday（放到最后） for sleeping. lol. （short of sleeping不就完了，你用一个time干什么？）
+ r1 V' q/ R3 hhope our leaders（现在学习小组是采用XX模式，7常委联合工作，没有什么leader。） could forgive （耸人听闻的用词；如果是非常正规的英文，应该注意的是写作模式。 写作模式的核心是用soft的语言(就是一堆废话)来表达对对方的尊重和礼貌。 而不是通过forgive这样的危言耸听的词语来加强语气。这点要切记。）me, I was absent  at least 3 classes.I do apologize for it. i am reading some literary works （？？？）, and collecting new words（只有中国人知道你在干什么的一种表达方式）. hope there is still a seat for me lol, and enjoyed （主语？时态？）the time we have been together. say hello to everyone, hope （to） see you guys (介词没有？) this weekend.
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" M1 j7 f1 q& @阿猪同志问题这么多，建议你找老科同志，让他收你一个关门女弟子比较好。老科可是经常向英文杂志投稿的人哦，除了小说不敢写，什么都敢写。不得了的水平。

珠圆玉润

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吓死我了，太严重了。本来就是觉的太对不起了吗。所以，就道歉了。haha, but this really helps me a lot. I think you should be my teacher first. lol, I now know i am so good at making mistakes on my writing in English. Thanks , I hope to see more correcting of it. I have never heard this teacher 's name, i am eager to meet him or her  because I realize  I need to learn more about the rules of writing in English. thanks again, I used to speak like this way which you point out that it is so soft , as you know i used to write  letters to Canadians who are very humor and diplomatic . Just yesterday , my teacher said that , wen , forgive me ,i made a misstake for your mark. haha, and i said , no , i could not forgive you , i hate you. lol, teacher was very funny , he said , how about i buy you  coffee. I said , it sounds better than your apology. haha, maybe i should take it seriously.
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martin-king518

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老广

lol是什么意思？大笑？

billzhao

laugh out loudly
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萍踪

There won't be class this year, wen.

兰颜知己

哈，珠珠是个好学生，不象咱们连个招呼都没打。
也思念呀。圣诞期间还学习吗？得上群内看看了。