我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
是十多年前的作品了——
1 |0 ~  \6 T/ h/ S' T# DSummer's Coming
  G3 N& |; a4 @7 n7 z
- T/ h- f" m  X( pFaster, hotter and sweater,
Summer's coming, coming, -ing ---
8 v  S) W& }- H" A4 V( _From the colorful nature
0 |* Z# c6 `+ Z% D2 B2 NTo my life and dream.
; s, h& V  F# y0 s; |9 D6 U2 k
Following the summer's step,
  U  `9 y, ~6 Z+ q  A" ELet myself go ---
Go to the wild rain
Washing my heart and soul.

( G5 V( a6 a- ]; d; B% pGood-bye, my happy spring;
& B+ p, M4 u$ EGood-bye, my childish dream.
I can prepare nothing;
My life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。

一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
# S3 u, W! }$ D# Q+ \. HIt displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.

[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
! r. m% m. ~( l8 ~* k! obut what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
夏天来了