我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
! f1 T0 g% v( {6 p" C3 }是十多年前的作品了——
Summer's Coming
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" K# L- E* \" W8 E7 ?' `Faster, hotter and sweater,
Summer's coming, coming, -ing ---
  s) b* n& h6 xFrom the colorful nature
$ S7 q# ?% o: F% yTo my life and dream.

9 _6 |; ^3 {7 q4 [3 xFollowing the summer's step,
Let myself go ---
9 o: ]4 F  z; z8 K$ c, |0 `, t7 lGo to the wild rain
8 _; ?% ]; V, a! V( o9 {Washing my heart and soul.
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8 |- n3 B) ~1 e8 u; \Good-bye, my happy spring;
& |! W: E/ i, nGood-bye, my childish dream.
% J0 _5 j# i9 V$ _4 Y# s  @I can prepare nothing;
My life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。

0 c  m) [0 I5 N, S% n一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
It displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.

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简约

thank you, i can see it now.
6 k+ u7 H( N+ s; G  s/ obut what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
夏天来了