我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
是十多年前的作品了——
( [( B# H1 S7 A- kSummer's Coming

Faster, hotter and sweater,
Summer's coming, coming, -ing ---
; A5 {+ k# g, z+ DFrom the colorful nature
8 i; j, {" r9 A! w4 O3 `8 \7 MTo my life and dream.
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Following the summer's step,
; l7 d# R5 n1 K4 U" I: ?Let myself go ---
; i" ?$ F4 }4 r: ~+ VGo to the wild rain
Washing my heart and soul.

5 ?- b9 ~: r) K1 ^3 o9 HGood-bye, my happy spring;
/ j& v4 A2 R1 g% }; ?Good-bye, my childish dream.
: v! O7 r* J$ T+ D8 gI can prepare nothing;
" b0 B! a' S' L8 h: u+ NMy life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。
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一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
# M9 G) r2 A  f* IIt displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.

6 F; r4 {3 Y8 |* z[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
but what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
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