我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
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7 g8 u4 O/ c3 j6 HSummer's Coming
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Faster, hotter and sweater,
Summer's coming, coming, -ing ---
From the colorful nature
To my life and dream.
, g6 I$ A* [% K6 w; \. k! b, ~' q
. ?9 f2 A5 `* `/ f6 K# A( ]Following the summer's step,
Let myself go ---
Go to the wild rain
Washing my heart and soul.

6 a: z3 U+ X* V" b- r& a. f& f% R( bGood-bye, my happy spring;
Good-bye, my childish dream.
I can prepare nothing;
+ O: n9 {, n9 L6 T9 B  ?8 VMy life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。
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& M6 w+ Q1 `; \3 @/ F( Y一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
It displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.

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简约

thank you, i can see it now.
. f* J( F3 ^9 X/ _. o7 K  }but what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
: q  p, x* f: [) V夏天来了