我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
: S+ o$ r$ L( m. `) V, L+ q2 A3 k4 w是十多年前的作品了——
Summer's Coming

Faster, hotter and sweater,
- b9 Y& A* E! R6 m/ dSummer's coming, coming, -ing ---
; }5 i8 f/ N3 S, R& P: \From the colorful nature
; ~/ `& z5 H# H! q& BTo my life and dream.
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. ]5 ^" c3 w; ^; SFollowing the summer's step,
# m: p3 @5 r7 z, X$ R- x2 YLet myself go ---
( t; o# m8 w+ E! f/ u3 q) }1 pGo to the wild rain
Washing my heart and soul.

4 G  t0 b+ r, f9 ZGood-bye, my happy spring;
Good-bye, my childish dream.
$ F4 j! M$ A. T) s- _& d9 k6 pI can prepare nothing;
My life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。
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一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
' l6 A; b$ ]* Z4 V8 t- }It displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.

7 v* P: s1 I3 b) l4 B# }6 Z[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
but what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
夏天来了