锻造地道英语句子

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　　1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.
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$ d' k# W2 z* r8 l　　改进：Artists' work upgrades our civilization.
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$ @, X' e9 k6 N8 y; v$ T　　2. For example, you work in a big factory.
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' k8 C% b4 _$ c0 k　　改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.
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0 g9 t! X- B0 f$ Z$ w: Y- C- C+ z　　3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.

0 b, S7 ]6 d+ B# {　　改进：You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.
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　　4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.
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  b' y8 l! n5 i　　改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.
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　　5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.
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% F3 R0 I1 l: Q! r, T0 `　　改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.

0 ^& a, u( n4 w; M/ Z　　6. Their brain is still very young.

3 M: p# S* C  G" s! S　　改进: They are still immature.
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　　7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.

　　改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.

　　8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.

$ ]- r8 _' }1 l　　改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.

5 R& k7 B; h1 q( }- z　　9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.

/ y: z' c, l8 W" `+ h% M　　改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.
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/ w4 e& E* W3 v6 \　　10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.
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& F& X4 F  ^, Z2 b　　改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.
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　　11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.
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　　改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development.

( i9 K- _2 K5 D' V5 ^　　12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.
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　　改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money.

　　13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.

$ M, J( c: p& ]* X　　改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.

8 h- o6 V6 x+ {0 d7 h3 x2 d6 A4 B　　14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money.
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　　改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more.
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　　15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.

& K6 H. o+ f+ a　　改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products.

　　16. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills.

　　改进: In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills.

3 O; H! t/ q+ x8 a, Q! F* n# ^　　17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians.

　　改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand.

　　18. This knowledge will become a part of your body.
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- k' O$ W* j/ P0 s　　改进: This knowledge will become part of you.
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　　19. They cannot think clearly.
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& F+ X, g' W( x! S$ ?　　改进: They cannot think straight.
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　　20. Money can improve their living standard.
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　　改进: Money can improve their life.
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/ V8 C5 }( Y( h0 T　　21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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; h! x* I: e4 l) [. A! y+ u　　改进: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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　　22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life.
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　　改进: If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life.
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　　23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later.

　　改进: One purpose of education is to learn to learn.

　　24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano.
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　　改进: Many parents send their children to piano classes.
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1 ^8 f" q7 H0 m% h　　25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others.

! ?- q) o8 E- D　　改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others.

, W. R# _3 ~; A　　26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.
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　　改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.
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* P. H4 N& l& Q* B" a7 B* I　　27. Smoking can help you relax your mind.
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　　改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.

　　28. What's about nonsmokers?

　　改进: What about nonsmokers?

, Y! Q: ]" V8 f" J+ F% B　　29. Why not to be a non-smoker?
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3 z+ m; B8 _: Y9 ?' {　　改进: Why not be a non-smoker?

( `" u, t* e/ f8 N; T4 X　　30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.
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' B8 ~; e7 R2 n5 D　　31. I am not good at maths, but English
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  S, @1 w' a# Z2 y　　改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.

　　32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time?

　　改进: Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time?

　　33.It is children who clear about their interests.
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　　改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.
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7 N" R) g) ?; I( `" l　　34. I agree the latter idea.
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　　改进: I agree with the latter idea.

; a* y5 I  _+ C　　35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.

　　改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.

) F9 R) d2 c; ?6 d  M　　36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.

　　改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.
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　　37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.

　　改进：People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.

$ l9 I4 Z& B# V0 P+ K　　38. No one knows all the things.

　　改进: No one knows everything.

　　39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.
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　　改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.
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　　40. Each form of having friends has its advantages

　　改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.
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　　41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up.

# Y7 b$ k; S. Z! p* U　　改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply
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　　42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.

　　改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.

, f1 Q; p( k& J9 q( R　　43. They will learn the bad habits.

　　改进: They will develop bad habits.

# y" D; q3 [1 Q- [. ]: X; H　　44. In this continued process, people make progress.
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　　改进: In this cycle, people make progress.
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　　45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.
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　　改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.
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( X5 L2 ?$ e" K* G　　46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.

4 U! s. D3 q! Z3 \! N　　改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.

　　47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.
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  }: n+ L+ b, {' j　　改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.
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5 n- U- {! C" x5 K　　48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.

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! S6 s3 [+ l1 n9 s; i; k  j9 s　　49. Children should be taught disciplines in order to avoid unnecessary lost.

　　改进: Children should be taught discipline in order to avoid unnecessary loss.
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. a7 r3 r% L5 |( ~　　50. I felt alone.
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) |  y. u' U  l# D5 g* a  |7 M　　改进: I felt lonely.

孤寒一剑

wow, where did you get those sample (the cheglish one)? I have to say the revised samples are really really good.

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sindowa

随便

平时的积累，呵呵！

玫瑰上的小蚂蚁

maxlake

能否解释一下 status quo 是什么意思。

寒塘鹤影

是现状的意思

spark

:lol::lol::lol:

玄紫妖妖

Wow,看得我头晕目悬的...还是记不住...呵呵

醉酒当歌

有些改进似乎意思有些改变...

自由自在

好哦．xiexie

penguin

thanks

lischka