锻造地道英语句子

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　　1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.
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　　改进：Artists' work upgrades our civilization.

' l. v$ v$ k/ E　　2. For example, you work in a big factory.
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　　改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.

　　3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.

" }1 V/ d5 V( u　　改进：You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.

9 ~3 R( i' U$ H( m( @* l　　4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.

　　改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.

　　5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.

　　改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.
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9 L" k) ~$ P& Q0 d　　6. Their brain is still very young.
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9 R0 U* S5 g! D/ G　　改进: They are still immature.

- @* e6 s! B* l. P& P0 e2 N  n　　7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.

% _) ?9 G( h! M6 _7 ?　　改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.

　　8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.
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) w( D/ x8 M8 J' Q6 U　　改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.

　　9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.
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　　改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.

& s' O, @8 T4 A( p" @  m　　10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.
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　　改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.
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$ V3 i9 c: F+ j& Q9 s　　11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.

　　改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development.
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0 t% S6 Q: x" d9 K" q7 N# P: M8 C　　12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.
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　　改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money.
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, B" F+ S2 H4 u2 k% ?8 P" Z! P　　13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.

4 t& f$ a: A# y: q( P  T* J) x　　改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.

　　14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money.

+ d% d3 X) B! u# U- ~: N' }　　改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more.

" J0 D/ R) D4 X　　15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.

3 j1 g5 @" T3 c  j5 W3 O$ \! R( F　　改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products.
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& ]3 D/ r. {! b　　16. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills.

　　改进: In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills.
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6 }7 Y. c# U. o　　17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians.
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* c1 A' n8 x7 r4 u# I　　改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand.

4 E: _# B% h  b　　18. This knowledge will become a part of your body.

　　改进: This knowledge will become part of you.

　　19. They cannot think clearly.

4 i4 I1 f  O) D; I3 S% I　　改进: They cannot think straight.

　　20. Money can improve their living standard.
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. d: S. `" R" Q* k8 _4 {" R4 R- A　　改进: Money can improve their life.
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9 e/ D" J2 F0 m0 K# t6 C　　21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money.

2 Y. F5 R9 ?5 Q- d　　改进: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money.

　　22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life.
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/ P3 N. q* E" K" d$ ~3 A5 r3 t) d% B　　改进: If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life.
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# M' @. n1 ?% Q9 H$ b* M1 U" ^2 |4 f　　23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later.
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　　改进: One purpose of education is to learn to learn.

　　24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano.
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- t0 q) S4 K: r, a' M　　改进: Many parents send their children to piano classes.

6 o7 U/ z; h) j& c5 K3 J% J$ o! l　　25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others.

2 V% T/ E( r7 C　　改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others.
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/ v3 o! n* m$ R; b: v　　26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.
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# L% c* {1 y% |/ N. h: d　　改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.

　　27. Smoking can help you relax your mind.

" b6 r8 v0 d0 A  ~0 E  H" `　　改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.

　　28. What's about nonsmokers?
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& x$ z: L- u6 g! v, Z# f3 b1 g　　改进: What about nonsmokers?

% G( M; n* L: Y, f1 K1 Y, {　　29. Why not to be a non-smoker?
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　　改进: Why not be a non-smoker?
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　　30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.
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　　31. I am not good at maths, but English
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4 t9 \7 D2 p/ l4 Z9 P1 L% e　　改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.
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　　32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time?

　　改进: Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time?

　　33.It is children who clear about their interests.

, R4 _9 D& e$ L; B; a　　改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.
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　　34. I agree the latter idea.
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: J/ M1 ^( F5 ^# D1 T* q　　改进: I agree with the latter idea.

4 {% Q7 `+ ]9 G- J$ _4 r　　35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.

　　改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.
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, W- Q. E: p& }+ U　　36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.
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( d) n0 _' J. l  f) [　　改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.

5 L) O, A7 e6 ]& B4 W. U5 ]　　37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.

　　改进：People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.

0 S! p$ e0 i; {2 I. |　　38. No one knows all the things.
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　　39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.
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　　改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.

6 ]$ `9 W3 J6 s6 G& e. v　　40. Each form of having friends has its advantages

　　改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.
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　　41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up.

　　改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply
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  D4 A! q% @. e: X9 J6 A　　42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.

　　改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.

　　43. They will learn the bad habits.

7 G9 a7 W  N1 k- i2 J9 W　　改进: They will develop bad habits.

+ S) r; K3 T. {$ G# d" C　　44. In this continued process, people make progress.

　　改进: In this cycle, people make progress.

  K" r9 v8 j7 a4 Y0 d; L　　45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.

　　改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.
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; w& g3 l3 |$ d5 k  w. O5 r, h　　46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.
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　　改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.
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; N' Q* O: R; E2 P  M( c2 [' s* q　　47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.
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　　改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.
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/ c* w( ^+ V" H　　48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.

% t  Q5 N, R1 ]4 \　　改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.
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+ c0 Y) ^: \* u2 u+ T  m* f　　49. Children should be taught disciplines in order to avoid unnecessary lost.

1 j- R' C( L& Q. b) O% B) q　　改进: Children should be taught discipline in order to avoid unnecessary loss.
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+ B! X! a- n* J8 G( s+ f　　50. I felt alone.
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. s6 B: `. A) I/ I4 z3 N8 f　　改进: I felt lonely.

孤寒一剑

wow, where did you get those sample (the cheglish one)? I have to say the revised samples are really really good.

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sindowa

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平时的积累，呵呵！

玫瑰上的小蚂蚁

maxlake

能否解释一下 status quo 是什么意思。

寒塘鹤影

是现状的意思

spark

:lol::lol::lol:

玄紫妖妖

Wow,看得我头晕目悬的...还是记不住...呵呵

醉酒当歌

有些改进似乎意思有些改变...

自由自在

好哦．xiexie

penguin

thanks

lischka