锻造地道英语句子

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　　1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.
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　　改进：Artists' work upgrades our civilization.

5 G7 ]6 L; Y* z2 y1 b! K4 o6 ?　　2. For example, you work in a big factory.

; V" {0 N0 k' ]( O4 U　　改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.
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# D( p; ?0 f0 y5 O8 q! T" Y　　3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.

4 v9 _- P. f# g, r3 \( Q9 \　　改进：You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.

7 p7 B$ }* j3 ]+ M( }　　4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.
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3 s5 N5 [: Q9 Q, B' A% j　　改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.

　　5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.
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　　改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.
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4 n) q0 Y+ |3 n4 m8 t# z; [# C　　6. Their brain is still very young.

　　改进: They are still immature.
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　　7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.

+ |/ |5 V7 Y" G" t3 M　　改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.
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　　8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.

: E% J# p9 m8 V" ^　　改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.
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　　9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.
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& h0 ^5 [0 T  a$ k' U　　改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.
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+ h, e& K' E! C! p1 W$ d' V* r　　10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.
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$ h$ Q& U9 X8 L0 f7 @9 l. B6 E　　改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.
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1 g* [; m- h7 C' s　　11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.

, I; O8 m$ z& O8 X5 T　　改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development.

　　12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.
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+ N( {3 X( `8 S: Z* C) q! X, u　　改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money.
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3 n- w; s, Z$ i. R　　13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.

　　改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.
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　　14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money.
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　　改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more.

) g- g. K9 Q% [　　15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.
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　　改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products.
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　　16. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills.
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　　改进: In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills.

8 Y' n; T; M& v1 |　　17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians.
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　　改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand.
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% e- u- J4 V! J" T, b　　18. This knowledge will become a part of your body.

　　改进: This knowledge will become part of you.

  x1 n2 m( P" f" m  q) g　　19. They cannot think clearly.

　　改进: They cannot think straight.
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0 C! Y% Q  L; N0 r& [9 s/ K　　20. Money can improve their living standard.

　　改进: Money can improve their life.

+ R. f# v2 D2 E/ ~" H　　21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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/ L0 b9 r' M8 Z  y& c　　22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life.

" {! ~6 Y, m( X* |; D; h- O　　改进: If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life.

5 y$ `' J. l9 M* e/ `# w! y8 w" ]　　23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later.
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% R% N, E$ f  S& h0 W　　改进: One purpose of education is to learn to learn.

　　24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano.
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　　改进: Many parents send their children to piano classes.
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　　25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others.
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# v5 G6 C* v/ H3 R8 a　　改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others.
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　　26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.
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　　改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.
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　　27. Smoking can help you relax your mind.
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　　改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.
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　　28. What's about nonsmokers?
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6 ]  }/ o, t0 I9 P& v  m( A　　改进: What about nonsmokers?

　　29. Why not to be a non-smoker?
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　　改进: Why not be a non-smoker?
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　　30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.

　　改进: Everyone has friends in his life.

6 d! c' o/ X0 d2 h' k　　31. I am not good at maths, but English

　　改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.
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# D; P' y8 d0 q/ }* u　　32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time?

3 Q* D5 ~3 e9 |8 X3 q# \　　改进: Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time?
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* R; D& w; _) F% d. b/ i　　33.It is children who clear about their interests.
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　　改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.
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　　34. I agree the latter idea.

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, O) X6 h2 R& m; a& u# [　　35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.

　　改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.
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　　36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.

　　改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.

　　37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.

　　改进：People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.
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0 c2 h; s5 \- N2 }" q2 x' o6 t　　38. No one knows all the things.

　　改进: No one knows everything.

; K5 n4 K5 n  y7 r5 k6 _　　39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.
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　　改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.
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　　40. Each form of having friends has its advantages
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) p+ Q2 U' A. K3 O+ ^! y7 C; x+ N　　41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up.
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　　改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply
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6 ^5 {. f5 E) `* ^( |$ y　　42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.

　　改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.
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. C3 \% X* m9 J% M2 V8 }$ k　　43. They will learn the bad habits.

　　改进: They will develop bad habits.

  ?" l# h/ b% c# s8 H) m& w　　44. In this continued process, people make progress.
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　　改进: In this cycle, people make progress.
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& ?9 p' ^, x- W1 V4 g/ d, W+ z　　45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.
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　　改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.

- t# ~1 ^% k% \' [5 o　　46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.
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　　改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.

　　47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.
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　　改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.

　　48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.
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　　改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.
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: ~. f8 E, o* M　　49. Children should be taught disciplines in order to avoid unnecessary lost.

　　改进: Children should be taught discipline in order to avoid unnecessary loss.

5 J6 d5 \6 k# o7 s7 v2 @　　50. I felt alone.

! h1 e7 |# m" P2 Q, E9 i8 U7 y0 g　　改进: I felt lonely.

孤寒一剑

wow, where did you get those sample (the cheglish one)? I have to say the revised samples are really really good.

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sindowa

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平时的积累，呵呵！

玫瑰上的小蚂蚁

maxlake

能否解释一下 status quo 是什么意思。

寒塘鹤影

是现状的意思

spark

:lol::lol::lol:

玄紫妖妖

Wow,看得我头晕目悬的...还是记不住...呵呵

醉酒当歌

有些改进似乎意思有些改变...

自由自在

好哦．xiexie

penguin

thanks

lischka