I am translating for the songs of 枫叶情--重建灾区小学募捐义演

celina

I need help after my second draft.

billzhao

what is it? There are so many friends here who are willing to give you a hand.

寒月

post your draft here, a lot will help

celina

万水千山总是情
词:邓伟雄曲:顾嘉辉
莫说青山多障碍
风也急风也劲
白云过山峰也可传情
* z5 D. y& ]1 `9 r; z) W莫说水中多变幻
2 r  J- S- H( c8 _) {* n% g& m' I水也清水也静
柔情似水爱共永
未怕罡风吹散了热爱
7 v( C; ?8 f) w' w/ T万水千山总是情
+ H6 b) ^0 `! k) ]7 I$ k* i1 ?0 |8 k聚散也有天注定
/ ?- l$ R. H' k不怨天不怨命
! C% \/ r& q. J9 _# x但求有山水共作证
There is love everywhere
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Look at the green mountain; however, you can not know it also can be a obstruction.
The wind blow rapidly and strong in order to pass the obstruction and meet the beautiful cloud.
Look at the peaceful lake; however, you can not know whether there is danger inside.
7 v  U6 t2 d2 }8 u3 JHowever, our love will help us to overcome every difficult to dive and find the treasure.
; s! ^) f$ y& {" g0 ^" e+ ~, hMaybe some failure will disappoint us.
However, there is love everywhere
Our love will help us to overcome every difficulty.
: Z# a" r' l7 ]/ M+ x6 r% AIt is unpredictable that whether we can get together or not.
; _! f  b; ~) n7 ^6 pWe do not worry about too much future.
; U) m* V9 e& J7 R: d5 p$ qLet’s just enjoy this moment.

celina

阳光总在风雨后
" m7 h: }) A0 b  c$ ?2 L, T人生路上甜苦和喜忧
愿与你分担所有
难免曾经跌倒和等候
要勇敢的抬头
谁愿常躲在避风的港口
宁有波涛汹涌的自由
* n' }6 o5 V2 x* e7 \愿是你心中灯塔的守候
在迷雾中让你看透
阳光总在风雨后
% |  x( {/ |3 t& S. P: O- X乌云上有睛空
珍惜所有的感动
每一份希望在你手中
0 @( H! C6 b1 N1 ]3 q7 [3 c: v阳光总在风雨后
0 O6 p, R" x  F$ R7 U请相信有彩虹
风风雨雨都接受
" d1 M1 O: q6 S/ P! G; _1 V我一直会在你的左右
9 D' E: y: k% C% C" g2 uThere is always sunshine after raining
There are happiness and sadness in life.
- b2 G; a) }$ R$ M+ dI will share with you everything.
3 b$ J2 [4 D2 u3 mIt is hard to avoid failure and the process of waiting for success.
We get together and bravely face them.
Everyone does not want to have a common life,
( a% Y2 Y6 G. jWe prefer to have a challenge like a small boat travels in the sea.
4 f. Z+ K' C3 Z# h4 o( l9 p8 UI am willing to be pharos for you to show the right direction in the fog.
There is always sunshine after raining.
5 j# Q* _; k6 |& ?! S9 L% FThere is sun above the black cloud.
Please cherish every moment you are moved.
Take chance on every hope.
There is always sunshine after raining.
8 m; n! t- q6 Y# G7 X) y9 CWe can just believe that there is rainbow after raining.
We will bravely accept every situation and deal with them.
I will always accomplish you in your life.

celina

让世界充满爱
3 f4 \7 j7 W. X  `( M* }6 R
轻轻地捧着你的脸
8 H$ p7 ~9 Y# B" i& B+ D7 ?% [为你把眼泪擦干
这颗心永远属于你
0 W. ~( `! W6 G1 U: S; d告诉我你不再孤单
深深地凝望着你的眼
不需要更多的语言
6 S; L' R# o# W1 O' b紧紧地握着你的手
2 _) D  ~  a+ E' W8 Z8 g( s5 I4 u3 F这温暖依旧未改变
- p" I5 x! M. q6 @我们同欢乐我们同忍受
我们怀着同样的期待
" F9 o6 Y1 g% i$ a  x9 [2 j8 A/ l! b我们同风雨我们共追求
我们珍存同一样的爱
无论你我可曾相识
, T- {2 d, b( ^( m/ D6 G无论在眼前在天边
9 T' ^& G6 v9 Q2 {; `1 w, C真心地为你祝愿
祝愿你事事平安
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Let the world full of love
Gently holding your face, I wiped away your tears for you.
My heart always belongs to you; please tell me you do not feel alone anymore.
Staring at your eyes, you have already known my meaning without saying a word.
! W9 w- I6 Q7 b, KTightly holding your hands, the warm of your hands still did not change.
We share our joy with our stand with the same expectations. (?)
7 a  U8 P, }9 n/ e' z* x/ x7 f8 iWe have been face difficulties together and pursing with the same purpose.
6 O3 D  k* [/ a3 d) X- wWe treasure the same love for both you and me.
* a% y8 B' f, `/ aWhether we know each other or not, whether we have been in the same immediate horizon,
. x5 q) M  P- B+ p' sI sincerely wish you are peace .

celina

明天会更好
5 B0 O$ ~6 u  ?轻轻敲醒沉睡的心灵
1 v+ \5 j  W  K. T9 u8 R8 A慢慢张开你的眼睛
看看忙碌的世界
是否依然孤独的转个不停
  L. k9 g6 V9 s# D( I( d1 l5 [春风不解风情
吹动少年的心
  z2 p! U& X6 e1 J; u让昨日脸上的泪痕
5 P) f) R: p% Y. G/ k3 \$ M随记忆风干了
) r  R$ u5 L7 i6 w& t1 y" {) e- Z/ d抬头寻找天空的翅膀
! a. E0 U" |- N5 I& @候鸟出现它的影迹
带来远处的饥荒
" E0 B! a& W& G3 u) Q5 J无情的战火依然存在的消息
0 \( U! V% E: z% d玉山白雪飘零
燃烧少年的心
使真情溶化成音符
* O! I9 @' k' y+ Y+ l倾诉遥远的祝福
唱出你的热情
伸出你的双手
让我拥抱着你的梦
让我拥有你真心的面孔
让我们的笑容
9 |. Q/ F6 b" a4 ~* g- S9 z% F' Y9 C( u充满着青春的骄傲
为明天献出虔诚的祈祷
8 e0 g; \/ `) B谁能不顾自己的家园
+ z) b4 O) `! B( }/ Q; q抛开记忆中的童年
. S6 e' @- d0 Q* U% @谁能忍心看那昨日的忧愁
带走我们的笑容
+ l% H" H+ U# v" Q4 ?5 [青春不解红尘
胭脂沾染了灰
/ R2 T) N9 E1 ]+ t2 j; w0 V让久违不见的泪水
7 A3 K: l/ l0 Z/ Y滋润了你的面容
" ~  b2 T5 Y2 L4 Y2 a唱出你的热情
" L! s; h6 u9 u2 Y, I2 u8 F0 Q, j伸出你的双手
* {/ A6 T8 E+ g  o7 v) _/ o) _让我拥抱着你的梦
让我拥有你真心的面孔
让我们的笑容
充满着青春的骄傲
为明天献出虔诚的祈祷
( @8 C" P& ]; u3 B" i2 Q4 D轻轻敲醒沉睡的心灵
慢慢张开你的眼睛
看看忙碌的世界
# I9 }0 R5 {4 a$ N& H5 A8 R是否依然孤独的转个不停
5 m8 Y4 B9 r9 F1 y6 o日出唤醒清晨
大地光彩重生
; c0 M8 k. x6 [( \+ C- C让和风拂出的音响
谱成生命的乐章
$ V; O: h+ ^" ~3 K$ z8 I% R唱出你的热情
伸出你双手
让我拥抱着你的梦
让我拥有你真心的面孔
让我们的笑容
充满着青春的骄傲
让我们期待明天会更好
Future will be better
4 b0 x6 J+ T+ F3 [, c$ nI woke up in the morning and open my eyes,
And see the busy world whether the same as before.
, `% S% T. h" N' G/ H5 P, XI cried because the earthquake destroyed our hometown.
: Y* Z& x4 I3 W8 ~2 t' k9 F" M( aI looked at the sky and saw the bird flying from my hometown.
It told me the news of the hungry and disaster of Sichuan.
$ M1 X5 |- [/ j" k3 s  sI live in Canada far away; however, I bless my hometown using my songs.
Let’s sing with burning passions.
8 S  U0 l( |$ U5 J: {' q  kLet’s shakes our hands with each other. (Let’s get together to overcome the difficulties)
Let’s smile with the proud of young and pray for the future with a heavenly mind.
3 f; p4 N0 O% W) U2 [* MEveryone loves their hometown with memory of their childhood.
/ }! N: {% W9 ]- f4 H* o( ?Nobody wants to see the disaster take away our happiness.
We got together bravely to overcome every difficulties.
Let’s sing with burning passions,
5 C) z4 Z/ d: ^6 z1 K9 Y; yLet’s shakes our hands with each other.
( T" e# q+ }( h* CLet’s smile with the proud of young and pray for the future with a heavenly mind.
- B$ V# _' a9 r# h( s6 _. BLet’s have the same dream
Let’s sincerely bless people who suffered in this earthquake.
% |# W- u0 M4 i4 v9 l" V( q& x+ _I woke up in the morning and open my eyes,
0 E) w& o; q9 u5 o8 @& K* PAnd see the busy world whether the same as before.
I am crying because the news of Sichuan earthquake destroyed my hometown,
However, I know that the sunrise will come finally.
3 I0 E( R) m8 w6 _9 C0 \( @" g+ a! p And the mother earth will also renascence after the disaster.
Everything will pass and have its new life. (Everything will recovery after the disater)
Let’s sing with burning passions.       
6 F7 W; I2 {  z! g. f1 n" W- QLet’s shakes our hands with each other.
" O' K; n- P) G( I2 i/ g! v! @5 {: h" nLet’s smile with the proud of young and pray for the future with a heavenly mind.
Let’s hope future will better.

celina

Please give advice as soon as possible because they need be done before June16.