TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架
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TWE作文模板汇粹
(一) 对立观点式
1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)


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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
- `$ M" e( U  {" a5 b5 [+ m7 kThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
& S9 A% e" q, z1 pA is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
4 n3 J% V) f( h8 B( a$ yFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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/ c$ }' a7 S, {& o  @2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)
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To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
For A, A 的一个优势
Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
3 ~- B; ^, }9 c6 KFurthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
on the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
moreover, B的优点2,for example…
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.
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(二)单一观点式
1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)
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首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
3 y% O7 `( W( tAfter pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
There is no denying that…
Another reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
Finally,…
3 \) m- p- c' |6 U9 {7 _4 oBased on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…

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２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
(本类型只agree)
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
* A3 {0 O) i: [' R: q# ~! eWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
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It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型
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2 Z; t! R  W, C5 i5 NThere exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
. I4 }6 C4 M4 X4 W4 w' [When reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
1 o  G. @5 y# h, ^+ gThe main reason for my propensity for C is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
C is superior in another way, this is…
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
% Q3 Y' k( z% b' U* P) WFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)

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1 F! x, r4 F" {% {: z(四)原因解释型
1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.
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9 v2 }& _8 W/ g5 o陈述这个事实
Among countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
One of the primary causes is that…
. S& ~+ ~6 v: u% N2 ~XXX also results from…
… is responsible for xxx, as well.
9 _: v9 l, H7 n- t' _To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX



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背景描述
# i2 |0 l% \$ w0 p8 _There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.
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1 p( a3 H; }& H; y$ I6 Q( WOne of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
- l: N4 X. k; H1 O) |/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…
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a more subtle point which we must consider is that…
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; L6 ?7 J0 ^" a5 D7 RIn addition/ furthermore
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In conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

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嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?
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* }+ C$ o3 Z8 B+ v- O- _. F' B再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.

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