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TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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发表于 2005-1-5 03:05 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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TOEFL 5分 作文框架1 {7 Z% I7 h1 y* m0 W& z+ t0 G
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(一) 对立观点式
  P! ~# Q5 ?3 e% y8 H  T1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
. l! q8 e: ^+ g) w' I- d/ TThe main reason for my propensity for A is that…… 2 S1 d  D0 V* i# A/ L5 j! f8 j2 z
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
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It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because… / H- p/ f1 m) Y# q3 w
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ... ( o: M: K) f6 \$ r6 ?" R! G
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2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)
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- j$ n( T: Q1 U6 y1 A* B! }+ eTo choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
8 L- j3 Y  g+ W  `& ]. X/ {For A, A 的一个优势 5 s9 ?' ]! d3 D
Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
9 j/ f3 d/ y5 _6 e+ e. L" |5 }  wFurthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is... , Y/ e# c# s6 S- X) g1 N+ L
on the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is… ) P& _( D6 S+ A2 v8 Z
moreover, B的优点2,for example…
, T6 d# J2 E7 W3 Y% M" J/ O7 H, A" lFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2. ( S) u) w; v* ~) k
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5 e$ I# T) u9 W  x! `  I# V& q8 ]1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型) " q0 o0 ?% ^7 ^, v" \
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6 _( U3 B5 q4 R5 i+ Y) P0 b. e7 I首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
  t- Q, r' l' `8 A$ [After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below. ! d5 v- `: \; r: D: q  z
There is no denying that…
5 R1 A1 g" O( y( }Another reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
0 v( l2 A% b4 u5 Y$ M' Q+ KFinally,…
5 I- [: l( ~& v4 B6 g' gBased on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…
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2.给出一个论点,主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由.?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型) 5 e% a" b" P+ G$ ^0 A$ W1 _
(本类型只agree)
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
9 H0 X# n, }4 O0 b3 U8 g+ [/ q& NThe main reason for my propensity for A is that…… / h# l' b2 ]: O! k' L( P
What is also worth noticing fact is that…… " w; u' T; K  ^# j
A is superior in another way, this is…
/ k+ y- O8 n  S4 H3 uIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because… 3 j( E: H4 Q$ j
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ... ( y$ o2 ?7 F" O" ^

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  [5 h  R" \  W+ b9 [(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型
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There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
. m1 Q/ m7 g- y2 jWhen reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons. 3 a' e. t' i; X5 \2 a3 G
The main reason for my propensity for C is that……
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C is superior in another way, this is… % h2 w  V- o* t+ o. y
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C 3 n+ j' ]& s" Q# u
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
+ d$ Q+ p6 q2 u( \$ v1 v: H( r; I4 i(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)
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(四)原因解释型 5 J/ P+ B* h. P9 [, k# s6 R" c
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Among countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows. " R* w2 D- S" v! n
One of the primary causes is that…
8 g+ N" t% M5 t' U$ K  S% q: WXXX also results from…
( L- }1 M8 u7 S. J. ^… is responsible for xxx, as well.
& F/ e  k( G: @! C5 tTo put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX / d1 K0 n* r+ H- x# G

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There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.
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) D& w3 a$ h- C8 h: i3 I- vOne of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
6 o6 |/ I: w! H, ]1 g2 B/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
& f' l2 r* R* i1 w, Q# }( P/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that… 0 j( j! ^6 a9 b$ ~! J
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a more subtle point which we must consider is that…
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- @# @# r, T* C! b$ j3 w& M% J8 mIn conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……
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发表于 2005-1-6 12:10 | 显示全部楼层
嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?
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再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.
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& d1 j2 N' |7 |4 b: D: I[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]
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