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TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架
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TWE作文模板汇粹
7 }* V, j2 ~4 c# o8 L(一) 对立观点式 % N) W" B  f" X. J, @3 T2 Q3 G
1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)
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' ~; m+ D: i2 x& V+ [7 A1 i(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons. + T9 m, [" C: T" p) e
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
: x1 g' B4 [$ kWhat is also worth noticing fact is that…… 4 }7 `" y- u& ^: b$ @, K5 S# ]
A is superior in another way, this is… ( z- O4 v1 a, b, C) k
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because… 9 {) W% F) R8 X
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ... 8 P# q" K1 s& K7 t+ v4 y% ~$ J- }2 n
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2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)
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To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
5 C. Z) B3 g, w0 }' F1 TFor A, A 的一个优势
/ M+ h/ V+ {! }  Z' p* _Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
! C7 z+ X, K" u/ h$ MFurthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
2 G' A5 F3 g3 mon the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is… : f9 A  I; E1 c7 _, C: S$ y
moreover, B的优点2,for example…
% ^' F9 z2 i9 _1 k! F& iFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.
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(二)单一观点式 3 Q% |5 u. V- l. Z$ |3 m
1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)
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6 a, f7 j# ]7 D5 R/ a% F- I首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
1 O! P' u& F& BAfter pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below. # x# X! P* M+ k
There is no denying that…
1 Q+ \3 z& s3 `. u8 Z' ~( u" LAnother reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that… % A" v" q' d# i" n1 ~  w! w
Finally,… ! \# U2 m, D; c* K: u2 V
Based on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that… 8 ]# X0 \3 u7 |. O. N4 N
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2.给出一个论点,主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由.?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型) 8 o7 z3 Z$ u& f. W  K1 w
(本类型只agree)
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C. 0 j4 W. w+ d( j$ U7 l; R6 f
The main reason for my propensity for A is that…… ! F1 F( ^: s4 U- \
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
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It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because… & g: @: D- f4 A- e
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ... 0 P6 S+ S# y' \/ F7 w9 t  c

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% S5 ]* z6 G$ X: \(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型
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  _* H. f) I% s) o# vThere exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D. 6 _: S  P2 W/ o- f4 g% `0 @0 B. M1 F
When reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons. 2 G5 ?, [; M: Z
The main reason for my propensity for C is that…… / s: W& P$ L4 b
What is also worth noticing fact is that…… + L; S, v4 ~7 M$ \: e# s
C is superior in another way, this is…
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* J) v, ~6 H1 V) }/ W2 Y: N8 wFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
4 j+ L: Z8 \0 ~0 t/ s, S- a4 W7 B7 k6 N(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)
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(四)原因解释型
3 C' m' k5 Z; Y  [' r) g1 R1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因. , d6 s) b. P0 W. [+ n# \8 s2 L4 O
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陈述这个事实
8 {" E3 j3 G  ^0 Z# u; tAmong countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
3 y2 v6 W$ _% o/ H/ ^5 _One of the primary causes is that… ( t& {0 J9 ]5 f4 {! z
XXX also results from…
# Q* Z2 K4 |& P/ _+ T, E… is responsible for xxx, as well. 4 X/ T3 I( K' J) N( c
To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX
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5 v' m% K, j$ @/ b! d8 N2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.
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There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there. 0 V) p  ]0 p# y( j' I3 l8 N- J3 g

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" ~$ t1 n# E+ Z" yOne of the primary method, to my mind, is that… " F4 g. n, W/ r# l
/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
7 W4 j7 ?" C& {: k/ O* R, {. Y3 c/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that… ' o$ H: j3 s' @$ p) |
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a more subtle point which we must consider is that…
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/ y- W6 o. {1 l% lIn conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……
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发表于 2005-1-6 12:10 | 显示全部楼层
嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?% @  b; q, U* Q" h1 M( A& W' x

# j% q& B/ E9 G! Q& P: j# a再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.8 X+ O: Z1 G6 c

: u9 @. s+ q; U8 ~[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]
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