TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架


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(一) 对立观点式
0 [; p# r- ^1 J& n* u1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)

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5 w- V: r" p0 t) u# p' X  x(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
" b9 Y, V$ k2 A6 F8 q% uThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
( x! W  D) Y: B4 z+ z' wWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
9 {2 g3 \2 v' w3 S9 d3 YA is superior in another way, this is…
; h, L6 M9 e+ R, U+ D, W3 t# J" cIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)

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7 }7 e% u* m) `/ NTo choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
For A, A 的一个优势
Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
Furthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
/ s% k  j: k4 F$ u; non the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
moreover, B的优点2,for example…
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.
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  E' N6 u0 |- X/ x% J3 }" P1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)
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首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
! ~1 a' ]. I8 `0 E' dThere is no denying that…
1 G) P) R8 n& B# v* vAnother reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
Finally,…
( a# F+ x+ t& OBased on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…
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２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
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  l- H  E/ \: z/ R+ ^( B$ [(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
7 ^6 b: C' S4 Z9 }! oThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
9 Z% n! |3 k- J  @' x1 pA is superior in another way, this is…
. ?/ U7 g7 a  RIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...



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. t$ d% c6 v9 E(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型

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There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
When reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
) G; M0 k0 n0 v! O9 r1 gThe main reason for my propensity for C is that……
( U& f; n! K- n( V% m+ M9 v* NWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
7 K+ i* g6 }& S# B8 \C is superior in another way, this is…
" `4 I4 M2 Z7 v' ^! |From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
' f# {) K; C9 h/ u# T: Z# @From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)
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(四)原因解释型
- G) k" X1 R" C5 e" Y6 `1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.
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Among countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
7 q/ }" @# D4 U- H+ `9 ~$ AOne of the primary causes is that…
1 _  X7 ?  k0 |" U+ MXXX also results from…
… is responsible for xxx, as well.
6 L8 S4 z1 G* MTo put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX
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2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.
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背景描述
! Z( |& t9 }  {+ CThere are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.
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( n0 b6 s0 W& LOne of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
+ @) {: b6 ~) i9 s- D) U; L# ]/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…
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a more subtle point which we must consider is that…
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. u# x( x0 d7 `7 X+ F! n. g: T/ W. k2 ?In addition/ furthermore

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; y! d0 ?9 D; Z6 [1 yIn conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

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嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?
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再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.

3 l7 U- A( K0 \4 ^/ ^[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]