TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架
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(一) 对立观点式
1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
/ s, U7 O# E; I; hWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
/ S9 C$ ]% r) N* I+ a& _A is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
8 O" @0 w- t8 vFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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/ f" \8 }2 s7 S0 l4 H2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)
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& S: x2 l/ W1 h8 S) k7 [0 @To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
" W6 |/ q. o+ m6 NFor A, A 的一个优势
Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
Furthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
) b9 F" f( z( V, e3 m( [on the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
/ x3 a9 x) A+ \2 Y2 i, Emoreover, B的优点2,for example…
( P; j4 i0 R& }) b& F. w% {" j7 SFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.
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2 M: t, `/ }/ g4 R% [1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)


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After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
There is no denying that…
$ k' t  S" L$ J9 R7 |4 QAnother reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
/ o& S/ \0 [' U) e# r# DFinally,…
' x4 O: ^+ t" a( XBased on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…

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２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
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/ h9 A- S) \4 D% sWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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& l! Y- C# A4 f9 X# a- s$ e(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型
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' c6 p- ?7 X# f' jThere exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
  C) N7 _) I7 ]: R8 T) Z2 T: H* _When reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
The main reason for my propensity for C is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
1 p5 V' w# \. u" C, p+ @8 d! i, @7 D8 \C is superior in another way, this is…
. C* X0 Z* {& V; s, XFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
* ~4 R' p# u" X/ S( T; fFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
" M: O5 y3 _' m1 g- M( ?(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)
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/ H2 N& K. y" t& B% M7 R* X1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.
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Among countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
. M1 f. K% ]* b7 r- t3 cOne of the primary causes is that…
XXX also results from…
… is responsible for xxx, as well.
; g1 C! i. T: D( Z) kTo put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX

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7 ]; m" r; E7 W9 _2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.

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There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.

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One of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
* Q0 Q4 s$ n8 Q6 `7 J" @/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
, ?* d; W! n- ]: J  f/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…

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a more subtle point which we must consider is that…
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In addition/ furthermore

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) p2 ?! ]) I2 H( K; O5 e. `In conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

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嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?

再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.

[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]