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I just wrote a poem8 g8 H |. |& Z8 C
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.
7 r6 P) a4 z. R% b. l# VHowever,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem; Z3 @* }+ Q( B3 O3 i
Thanks a lot!!!
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2 ]7 m0 [6 l2 }, dFormerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
: [0 P- }5 u6 ^3 I' g+ B Somehow I'd found something wrong with us * }) R, G9 e; x$ k
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world , K: P _# P/ N* \2 g
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
. J; s6 B0 m0 Z5 J Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind # g& u' i& L4 D8 N9 ~* E( P
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness 1 v4 K9 b4 s' x8 `- G8 K, ?' O. Y
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
4 l" h6 X3 ?3 Z! X; g somehow I realized you were still in my heart
: h. O5 H; z4 R0 p8 i! T* \ somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
?# y" O) I j) ?( |0 q- z somehow I lost myself inside again
: ^! [! E/ l& n6 u5 F# j$ T" {Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
! D; V3 e- y5 p0 E7 C+ B3 b somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion( t5 e0 R) m9 g; x$ t
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................; X- F5 s6 r- ] R
Basically, I almost finish this poem3 X& V# S' n4 O3 n( X
I am 一个人de精彩- W" [5 p1 X- k9 N9 ^4 ^7 t
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
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