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I just wrote a poem
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However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
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' z g/ E7 i. W* [; b* N7 R, MFormerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
; Y2 O) ^* a8 x) S, @" w( n* u Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
) B: c; |& E% n/ b) V; O E, R Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
9 m; l4 O1 w* e6 c. V Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me 9 |( y, j v) N9 W6 U; V
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind % p: i' Z+ H. h6 a% z
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness 0 Q( b/ w6 V4 z7 }& ?) Y; L# X8 g
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
. h, d- {1 Q) h somehow I realized you were still in my heart
5 b9 |$ U7 r1 a, g: a somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
1 r0 T/ Z9 ? P7 o% ~; k$ q' t8 j somehow I lost myself inside again
; ]* a R: `# T8 cNow, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog # }. c. c& |% Y. ]5 M- b
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion& G* f) L% O3 M" Y7 u
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................8 H$ N$ [2 |3 N7 {
Basically, I almost finish this poem4 k) I. ]! a( M
I am 一个人de精彩
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发表于 2008-1-27 12:42
