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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)% Y3 r# x) S# J* r/ C

% _* V/ `5 T7 ^2 v     One day I always remember1 S! u; e, Y7 u

5 n  E# Z4 e# `3 r# ~  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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! G# e1 h0 q- f- |exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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- ^$ N' e+ s, nput up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my- a& s) d4 U+ T

9 k3 s' w# ^7 S0 ? little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid
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was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely
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6 h" d) V5 {: x, i) vtrusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since $ l9 F" K) J1 Z. _: S- [
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that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing
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/ G8 i4 a: p( q) _" Y9 r on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard   g+ W! z9 T4 N: ~0 q" x

7 x& N  |: d& x0 ~& H- Ufor me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my
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5 x/ m8 M+ `# e8 G, m( U9 T# c: adeaest daughter.
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After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will' o. c& K# J$ E+ W
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never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.- ~) x# d' y) `6 U4 x
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[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!; U" n$ d7 e* r8 s1 q- A
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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