作文竞赛第一贴！！

茉莉花开

抛砖之作！（我英语测试时的作文之一）
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$ u9 i$ `4 p* Y1 E　　　　　One day I always remember

; x1 ~8 q( d2 @　　July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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/ E: }6 i6 F! s8 m4 ~ little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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8 H& j% h$ {& ~% Y( e( D3 E every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid
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" X) A& C- p/ `0 L. C was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely

; Q( z8 j$ x+ ^trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since
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, o/ x, x8 K6 U$ Pthat date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing

on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard
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for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my

deaest daughter.
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After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will

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# [, I9 b) R, E6 p# ^7 B[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]

mercurybird

good better best!!!!!!
% K- b' n4 z% Rwe should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!

OliveOil

It is great!

connie

GREAT！