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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)
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9 b0 l$ P  K% }     One day I always remember1 s7 a2 |0 T& {3 z+ Q
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  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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% q3 q5 Q/ u/ o8 fexactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my7 D4 q7 z: s! n
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little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,& V: D6 C! |6 g3 y5 U

1 w8 a2 L( c. F7 m; D) j every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid1 [4 |% @7 r  P% C( x
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was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely
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trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since 1 @: T/ M  k0 g9 n

2 p) Z; f- z' G. i2 D+ J* t8 j9 f) Lthat date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing
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on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard ; }; H/ I- B, j4 I: J# V

; B% s$ x) G: e. H1 Cfor me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my : q! m: A1 i* j

# n+ K( |5 S3 [8 bdeaest daughter.
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* j8 R% C& H, F' p( YAfter so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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% p8 x4 [0 k! m, S9 Y$ {; R/ q never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.
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# ^4 u; x# E( ^& H, e[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!
# x% [. L' N& x9 mwe should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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