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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)+ r+ F4 e3 e3 k( g

7 N, j  M9 a( O$ z! [& {3 j1 J     One day I always remember! a# `* T1 o6 P; G( P& ^

, ^2 h; W4 T# T4 L% _  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to% t/ J6 _  ~1 @# n9 L

& T6 O) I0 D, [: v# U$ k1 T# Fput up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my1 b7 v1 ?' l( A; E; _# d: \4 E

, i$ ~4 R; u! ]) ~: `0 o little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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9 \; @. t3 x2 Q0 [, [( E6 M% R) ~ every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid
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was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely
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0 s" s+ n) D" q* k; t% c8 ?  ]0 Ktrusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since
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that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing) Q2 o+ ~6 T: y3 S1 f* _3 N$ j

% E3 W, e6 q! K4 ~7 o on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard : C0 o: R/ e, Q* k) y% w' ]- i

8 l, b  e+ y- p2 {  tfor me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my
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deaest daughter.9 y3 X$ E) P# p' Y/ Q9 z
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After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.. o4 \" O5 e6 g$ h4 {+ p

5 i8 z7 _: U& M3 t[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!
  o6 m7 x; q, {9 n# w1 Qwe should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
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