作文竞赛第一贴！！

茉莉花开

抛砖之作！（我英语测试时的作文之一）
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　　　　　One day I always remember
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! K2 `9 e" d/ z　　July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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1 x" u5 D0 F5 C# xexactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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7 P6 J8 t8 V( R/ yput up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,

every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid
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9 F5 b: q7 F. K9 d4 B$ s/ b was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely

7 V; ~; Y$ ?6 a& ~7 m  {trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since

7 B  |7 \/ K" H+ v' _* [2 _that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing
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on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard

8 P+ Q+ d' _4 ~5 [) K' [% Tfor me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my

3 H% D9 Q' e# ]7 ?) k3 Gdeaest daughter.


; X) p$ @- s' f+ p5 X8 MAfter so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will

: M/ Q/ V( U; F0 r1 T  E never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.

! g7 c3 B# F" q7 k6 i[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]

mercurybird

good better best!!!!!!
, g2 _' d$ U8 S3 v( i  rwe should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!

OliveOil

It is great!

connie

GREAT！