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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)
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     One day I always remember( ?& Q7 l1 A5 P
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  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was& ~8 b) }% i- n2 O
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exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to) a4 h+ w, P: C2 i3 @+ ?: b2 `
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put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my
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little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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- U: V) V& T# X9 W" ~2 p% k every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid
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was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely
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6 a# k! X6 x# E- E( x5 f8 Qtrusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since
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4 Y7 s2 D0 u( M& `+ ~2 `that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing
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3 r2 P& w4 J4 u! G- t$ Y% ]! O) V' P on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard
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/ Q1 w) ]3 o  T! J/ K. Gfor me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my 1 v$ ^: @1 }/ \1 s" Y6 c/ V6 y: P
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deaest daughter.
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- k# j. A9 \( D/ @  h8 F0 A; B9 E# pAfter so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will9 b! d- w7 _/ F/ h5 H
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never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!
$ w: s* `1 j& H5 R% Gwe should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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