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译文欣赏——沁园春·雪

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发表于 2004-10-8 01:25 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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译文欣赏——沁园春·雪8 Y) u$ _) B/ P* z
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SNOW
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( U  M; C/ @; N/ a, v* P0 U2 A                                           --to the tune of Chin Yuan Chun
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( S# a7 b5 N# f' k6 c                                       February 19366 j+ ~: x6 ^' T( k! G5 t
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9 ^6 s4 i, v3 T' J" g1 n3 b  North country scene:
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, \0 X* V6 X+ i- {  A hundred leagues locked in ice,
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" Z2 ]4 c0 [7 e) `, G  A thousand leagues of whirling snow.9 c+ k6 \$ _1 L4 b& j* Y

1 ]2 J6 M7 O, g& G& l. _. C6 _# @  Both sides of the Great Wall- ?% {2 Q8 a' M8 n1 O

5 Q/ K& o5 W8 l( `  One single white immensity.# |2 [% h* d! {9 P2 W+ ]. S  \
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  The Yellow River"s swift current8 t2 i6 x5 c; m- [5 R) b( J1 _

& K& J- r& j4 }( p; `4 N  Is stilled from end to end.4 c/ L) B, M6 U% ^1 M& [. L# j, X& Z
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  The mountains dance like silver snakes/ P2 C3 n4 T8 e# ^, U3 V  m

2 h6 d. [2 L9 T" W# K. z+ Y4 z  And the highlands* charge like wax-hued elephants,3 m: [" f1 k5 q/ N! E$ P; b

# w: \! n) f5 S3 X3 R: |8 T  Vying with heaven in stature.
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# Y$ I9 R" s9 ]3 l8 m/ @) w  On a fine day, the land,
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  Clad in white, adorned in red,
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6 u6 j2 p1 L- y) d- @% k  Grows more enchanting.+ c) w, s* S" m( d

: j. N6 r% z) ?' z  This land so rich in beauty
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! @7 C; U) n( q# N% ^  Has made countless heroes bow in homage.
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! n8 w8 e& _; w4 z  But alas! Chin Shih-huang and Han Wu-ti
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  Were lacking in literary grace,2 P% [0 E1 A* D- H

8 s" L* x9 L; h4 t4 [- _  And Tang Tai-tsung and Sung Tai-tsu' X) Z& M$ Q/ w0 G& M% k& l

$ B( E( e6 T/ a$ O+ u  Had little poetry in their souls;
1 t! m  T' ^# s5 ~) u  And Genghis Khan,, E3 `) A. W1 s

" @! J0 g% E, e$ ]- W  Y& H  Proud Son of Heaven for a day,- b$ `$ N6 `( ]6 Q. m. U

- h3 ~1 q* p# t9 E! ~  Knew only shooting eagles, bow outstretched( E& N. K5 B5 O( M, g" z

) K" c$ J9 p: S  All are past and gone!! l! C# \3 d* r1 D) x1 b- k
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  For truly great men
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% s" \7 v5 B+ M3 \  Look to this age alone.
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  *AUTHOR"S NOTE:' ]/ \. `! l, A' r* P
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  The highlands are those of Shensi and Shansi.4 C0 ~4 S' n; L: W/ R

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( X1 H) F1 F8 D' a7 s  一九三六年二月
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9 s6 w. n/ r; ~) P   北国风光千里冰封 万里雪飘 望长城内外 惟余莽莽
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1 M7 P1 J( f  a, H& E* Y6 P  大河上下 顿失滔滔 山舞银蛇 原驰蜡象 欲与天公试比高# C) B, l: F! {% ^: Z% y# T

) m7 [( o* c2 @( f  须晴日 看红装素裹 分外妖娆
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$ F; L; V% |7 Y7 g  江山如此多妖 引无数英雄竞折腰 惜秦皇汉武 略输文采
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6 ^) m+ ^1 }3 B) Q  唐宗宋祖 稍逊风骚 一代天骄 成吉思汗 只识弯弓射大雕
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7 p. ?  P& h, n" I  俱往矣 数风流人物 还看今朝
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[ Last edited by connie on 2004-10-8 at 02:30 AM ]
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发表于 2004-10-8 09:47 | 显示全部楼层
The Chinese is better than English!
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 楼主| 发表于 2004-10-8 21:39 | 显示全部楼层
Yes, absolutely!!!
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发表于 2004-10-10 12:48 | 显示全部楼层

YES, I LIKE CHINESE VERSION MORE

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发表于 2004-10-10 23:49 | 显示全部楼层
the English version like a shit.
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