SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!

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8 H9 d; {# t: j: c" MAutomatic transmission
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  J( t) U& G: sRemote starter and heat blocker
Two sets of keys and remote keyless entry
Four additional tires with rims
Air Conditioning
ABS Operation
. r- W- z* v) j' i2 fTire pressure monitor system
% `3 \) }7 S; \# JInformation system
Central control locks,doors,windows
! ~) [% G% b% v7 _  TPower locks
4 J/ y1 u4 K" D5 y5 e' E  r3 SPower mirrors
Power doors
( D" Y6 O9 \; Q, d. s8 _7 ~! b+ v) jPower windows
Child safety locks
Rear window defroster
Bluetooth hands-free operation
Radio
" [* V0 q) N% t* {, iAirbag: driver
Airbag: passenger
Airbag: side
Alarm
Fog lights

# [8 q4 k1 v* _+ `% b* ^4 u**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
6 Z6 P5 W6 H4 _( a3 F: t& oIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

7 d0 D! i+ X3 F/ K$ JPlease call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
: J+ o. p! i  ]Pick up on March 18-22.
5 o! c" C  J& L0 b" J$ ^Cash only please :)
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兰君子

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SALE A CAR
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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .
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4 N9 ~1 ]: B4 A% @- VIf you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

3 x& S) l# Z7 [) l+ ~& u" X: m9 w8 iIF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING

layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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+ g: z$ `* p. T! n$ l! q! m) VDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

* r# m* X2 Z% {0 ^' o6 Z: H& O: c这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."

5 t  R2 K, v  `% z  r2 Y' CBy the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
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Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

7 s- G& c9 S) G1 J, aFcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
! G9 Y, {8 f3 h- AThanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

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& J4 M  U2 t( ^; s" xSorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
You may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.

4 _- `: V" I1 K8 i  A3 s9 _4 HLast, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:

"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".

) G2 _# _7 G7 J9 V% c0 `0 X: [There are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.
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0 p9 _9 ~2 S( m$ [1 lSorry to give you "HARSH" again.
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