SALE A CAR(4,500KM)

zhu-zhu

Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it!
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VEICHLE OPTIONS:
Automatic transmission
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Remote starter and heat blocker
Two sets of keys and remote keyless entry
5 k" P- n- U0 A2 GFour additional tires with rims
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ABS Operation
Tire pressure monitor system
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0 h( j* \3 `! A5 D% ?) mCentral control locks,doors,windows
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Power mirrors
Power doors
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Airbag: driver
6 Q: a# v+ A( l8 w; z' ~7 CAirbag: passenger
Airbag: side
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**The materials with the car (e.g. TomTom GPS, a set of seat covers, shovel, a box of tools, car vacuum) can go together with the car**
If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

Please call 780-705-5308 or email wei3@ualberta.ca
Pick up on March 18-22.
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兰君子

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SALE A CAR
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/ c7 r' ?  p  b8 rDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic transmission car is well equipped for winter weather and only has 4,500 KM. It is a very good car, no accident, no finance. Remote starter and heat blocker bring a comfortable starting. Blutooth hands-free operation brings more flexible during driving. Many other options make it amazing. If you are looking for a car with comfortable driving and reasonable price, it is THE CAR! You will like it! .
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If you needn’t the four additional tires with rims and the materials with the car, I could take off $600.

IF YOU SELL THE CAR WITH 14000 DOLLAR, HOW MUCH DO YOU ASK FOR
IF I NEED'T THE MATERIALS WITH THE CAR, I PAY YOUR NOTHING
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layfolk

urspace

Minion

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR

9 q* `6 d7 x2 Y0 E/ _. zDue to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

7 u+ z# U' K/ I2 W: g9 U6 i这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

zhu-zhu

Thanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media for people who can use Mandarin and/or English to share their information. Critique with a good manner is important to promote a positive networking between people and support others, especially for those moving to another country and being confronting challenges. Also, most people want to be respected,right? I assume the critic belong to the group of people, am I right? For a critic, critique with a good manner is an art which not only reflects academic/professional knowledge but also shows own cultivation and social capacity. I like the saying "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you."
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By the way, don't let the confusion impede the REAL advertisement. SELLING the car is the point :)

urspace

Minion 发表于 2015-3-2 09:30
- ^7 d* x" }# d9 I3 [这就叫骚摊子的，可以跟摊主干一场

哈哈，真的很有意思。。。焦点已经很成功地被转移了

吃喝拉撒

那么问题来了，现在进大学是不是不需要语言要求了

abear

兰君子 发表于 2015-3-1 02:11
SALE A CAR
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6 q0 ~& W3 _: F9 Z9 a  y; u7 {Due to moving, I will sell the 2013 Nissan Sentra with $14,000. The silver automatic t ...

% Z# P4 @, g) F  \2 ?, _3 ]Fcuk beautifully, you did give LZ some colors to see see.

兰君子

zhu-zhu 发表于 2015-3-2 10:50
1 u" B  G* T. _- x& a; ?" NThanks for the critique even though your approach is harsh. I think "埃德蒙顿中文网" is a good media ...

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Sorry for the feeling of "HARSH". I had no intention to offend you.
/ ?. Q( U5 B7 |" `You may be aware that an public advertisement can works as a formal offer and it becomes binding once others accept it even though no body takes it seriously in your case. Please be careful for advertising wording.
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  r4 h% Q( d" ?0 ~$ DLast, if you cite other people's words, please do not modify it. I believe it looks like this:

* y& A* y/ N4 p3 U1 ?3 R"NEVER TREAT OTHERS THE WAY YOU DON'T WANT TO BE TREATED".

$ e) P, L! a: y8 A. \There are a few different ways for this, but I had a weird feeling when I read "Never treat others with a way that you don't like others to treat you." . I may be wrong and welcome you to give me "harsh" time.

8 B0 L+ S( c4 C: F4 ySorry to give you "HARSH" again.
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