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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006,   z4 v1 |4 N* ^4 _. b, P$ |1 g+ z
I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  
! s/ v( C' o; ~: L% iDreamers
, ~. H/ }# r( t; }3 f3 {Savages
9 v2 d/ p% ?/ R' gPoets
9 @5 \% C0 T: jBuilders of canoes,
8 l8 N) u: r9 V$ h) wBlack smiths
& O% M" F8 h+ C8 U! JMurderers,& Q# H* Q* B5 \: v) b" K
Risk takers,
) c9 R( @, Y: g. M. d7 P: b$ @( b* WMy mind is full of curiosity and wonder & q+ u8 s/ M7 A! m- ?
As I think of what could be. - n: G+ M! r& s8 o$ F' U
The world is so big to me
2 l0 ?& w* {# c9 ^* }# tI wonder what it means to be/ y' y: k. j( j: V5 ]8 s8 f
I looked up at the star and smiled % H& {) ]) [+ B) q8 T6 y3 G
They flashed as they have heard all I have read. * [- j) E( n) T. Y; g+ k

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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
+ Q- ]6 i& g* ~, I, s8 u评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。
1 f) a9 B, W8 h- i顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,
4 @; a+ ]1 p. B" [  R3 i. x( FA poor old Guy;
8 z' \6 N* J- M. T& bLegs in a bonfire,
1 U9 E# r+ p6 }) v4 U! z( iHead in the sky
3 h: ?8 W, a8 TLonely, with the feel of betray* z. {6 N9 j7 o  u8 P- f! i9 X. g; j
Heart empty and hollow% R+ ?* g5 T4 |% ?: _9 S/ ~
Alone I stand. W' g. [. B" C0 T! i- O0 N
I am useless to all
! L& `; N+ c0 q# ^1 VBut I wish I were a dove
$ T/ ]  a: p1 lGiving myself to the world, to the fire
* g" j* N/ H% W! J: L! cI feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind
% `; s' K2 I% K# h8 n( @4 s2 W6 K; EI sent prayers to my god
1 d6 ^: Q: ?" YThough he does not answer  P" i! G3 A- c# x$ [- ?# s7 n
He bless me with the gift of hope ( B! i' K8 l; ~( _2 E0 U

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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
大型搬家
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。
/ s; b# y0 ]8 T' d# @加油加油,经常写写!
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