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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006,
8 o3 E' S* w- i2 q& }( AI believe there must be creatures like ourselves  
! G2 ~* z$ P1 H$ l, I' @Dreamers
: l/ n! Z, p/ f  ^2 V! p, `Savages
' i2 _; S$ t1 rPoets- [' s7 i& B. w8 C8 d5 a
Builders of canoes,
- }  a: a) P2 Z  eBlack smiths2 e& ^/ w$ Q) H% E( ]: L0 T# n
Murderers,
* p5 F6 T4 w# o# J5 n7 H& B: z! X0 @Risk takers,
7 c; X6 b6 D# fMy mind is full of curiosity and wonder
$ M- h( W) K- g% h7 kAs I think of what could be.
4 G9 g, f+ m' v: n1 L* CThe world is so big to me
. i$ Y4 w7 K5 {. X8 ^" aI wonder what it means to be
6 i/ O) {8 \! F0 ?' g3 B) AI looked up at the star and smiled % L6 d5 {& z% g& F( J' p
They flashed as they have heard all I have read. 6 i# B' U. k9 P7 k! S9 ~
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。3 J  W  e4 @# K) ~3 t/ s3 ^
评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。
  j8 m/ k4 w9 m顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,5 T) M) K! C& ~
A poor old Guy;
; S( k0 o0 u$ M4 K1 n5 ]( ^Legs in a bonfire,
% M  B2 K% z- C0 i+ W/ iHead in the sky
2 v- k6 `5 [/ Q+ _, MLonely, with the feel of betray( O& t5 C; ?3 I7 \. h# L+ v
Heart empty and hollow
( ^; S. Y, e. |8 eAlone I stand
' V( q& y" A( dI am useless to all 5 x( R9 v: Z0 R- M0 J4 w. D
But I wish I were a dove
7 I* A- u& {& Y, y0 `$ T! C7 {Giving myself to the world, to the fire* w1 I5 W( ~7 g* a, s$ z7 V. _* k
I feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind
9 X% C; y" X* V; _I sent prayers to my god
0 ]; s9 r5 p1 M6 P3 HThough he does not answer: a- f- P6 z, M
He bless me with the gift of hope 7 t: @7 D2 z8 G5 X2 ?0 [" _

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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。
- j  f5 v6 C, B加油加油,经常写写!
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