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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006,
+ d2 k: Y/ \5 W" E/ OI believe there must be creatures like ourselves  
" c) p2 ?- H2 ^1 a1 T' M9 hDreamers/ Z5 g$ s( H- K8 k( O/ W
Savages
4 J% Q2 P- y* L" k! U# uPoets
6 n0 [* s5 b5 _! h- }# e# ?Builders of canoes,' p) U: L6 a) i+ I
Black smiths
: j: G! K$ C' Z( h7 `1 qMurderers,. l  H* z* F. M/ z$ e! l2 U% t
Risk takers,
4 P( ~: @! _* M* M3 PMy mind is full of curiosity and wonder + Z: J; g# Q% h; A2 ]
As I think of what could be. 2 A5 ?& M- X( u. l# h3 c
The world is so big to me + _$ F5 P; r% J% ?
I wonder what it means to be- l" z3 ~  K' P' S
I looked up at the star and smiled - }* a# _: I9 Q% U- g8 |
They flashed as they have heard all I have read. - n' m: L0 Q2 K$ G% z4 d9 V8 n

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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。/ C. f# U0 a" n
评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。0 A, |# S: j4 y* u. Y* E/ m
顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,7 [2 x- V/ G) x1 |+ C$ O6 O
A poor old Guy;
* x1 B' ]! {( L: CLegs in a bonfire,! L; ]! E3 a3 X3 o
Head in the sky
0 e$ b+ T' b; u2 u, bLonely, with the feel of betray) L; ^6 b! G# H6 v( o' [) h
Heart empty and hollow& |8 k( X! K  y- \
Alone I stand
. {4 X% {% L4 B+ F. v. e2 kI am useless to all 4 M! h. U. p( N4 d8 a4 z3 h& ]0 R; h4 h
But I wish I were a dove - E- l* @5 I" b- v4 c% m/ `
Giving myself to the world, to the fire
" |4 `4 k5 p$ @( J( Y1 I# dI feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind
! `$ {0 I- ~+ S; |* C1 {4 jI sent prayers to my god+ V3 s9 H6 t: g4 o
Though he does not answer2 C- O! G% |" N
He bless me with the gift of hope , v( F7 |+ p/ K

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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。) t% x! i8 S5 J( U
加油加油,经常写写!
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