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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006,
7 y( P2 e! R8 E% n. Y5 G' K2 `I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  / h4 z- i7 l9 D* x
Dreamers6 t) y( u- @8 U% Z
Savages1 g) z' i5 I* h% y6 o2 F( j
Poets
) D7 s4 W, L4 P3 NBuilders of canoes,# V( D% l2 x  l( E0 e, c1 l9 r
Black smiths
7 }! M/ g6 G5 z" B7 w% HMurderers,( T! a" o: m8 ~* |( U
Risk takers,8 y# j/ a+ o4 C" f9 r
My mind is full of curiosity and wonder
6 m# U3 W. D0 n% s- DAs I think of what could be.
0 a1 M" Q2 R7 [The world is so big to me
0 I2 P" N/ j4 e) S& lI wonder what it means to be# y+ d  x% ?" f/ S. L/ W3 C( Z
I looked up at the star and smiled
) Q2 [* X' O! x, j! yThey flashed as they have heard all I have read. - r" T+ X+ |0 _% X& R* h0 ]5 n

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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。, e, Y5 a/ }3 x5 n; G1 h0 G* g
评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。  C% u( j/ }4 a" }4 G9 X
顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,' s, ?4 W/ X# `. l/ w" j
A poor old Guy;3 l  l3 E4 g* c: I1 g8 e
Legs in a bonfire,
& z3 z9 V. r2 SHead in the sky
9 [6 v+ E5 L# K5 ]7 v/ VLonely, with the feel of betray
1 p  B8 d" T, ]Heart empty and hollow3 u2 Q7 k' q5 ^* w- C! R% T% M8 k8 T* U
Alone I stand8 R; N; q* h2 I/ ^% `$ j
I am useless to all $ P$ Z+ R5 c- a3 ^
But I wish I were a dove
, G6 ~) f% O% pGiving myself to the world, to the fire
- [9 T; h" s' k6 w+ U) s9 \& z4 uI feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind: G# a$ Q! ?  G" ]+ Q' [
I sent prayers to my god
" ]. n$ W1 d  F, y% s' yThough he does not answer
; L$ i$ o1 s' z5 A" a1 Q) XHe bless me with the gift of hope
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。0 F2 X( D) D* z1 S
加油加油,经常写写!
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