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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006,   T  p4 `+ P/ n0 a' [/ T
I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  3 c% @5 Z$ [2 L2 n- D
Dreamers
1 n* U. f6 \& f* `% ^( `& eSavages
8 O( K$ I; R* dPoets9 \' B0 r& K) t1 k/ Q
Builders of canoes,# g. x8 o1 m( t- K, s0 E
Black smiths
9 X" O- e) n  z- u* aMurderers,* h2 p+ V  Q1 ~: [  _# ]( c
Risk takers,1 G+ F3 z5 R8 V0 r+ ?. ?! x" z. b
My mind is full of curiosity and wonder # w# p, P) ?! c
As I think of what could be. + w- W3 s) d; @, U5 Z
The world is so big to me
' ]- z, [! L0 L  WI wonder what it means to be( o6 I0 A9 N, A
I looked up at the star and smiled 2 }6 E: j4 o3 }; w
They flashed as they have heard all I have read.
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
! _8 t! X8 C: z$ f) T2 O评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。
) K8 d5 C# y- o; K5 Z1 Q顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,
, ]- }5 r: _% {. c+ ?7 B9 u* NA poor old Guy;
% t+ j2 D! b4 e. }1 T  i# JLegs in a bonfire,7 \' Q" k" p) d; |- r( l
Head in the sky( g3 y% e/ C7 ?* C: c
Lonely, with the feel of betray. W8 D+ Z0 T1 z, v5 `$ B
Heart empty and hollow
% M& z& F  T! ?# E7 ~Alone I stand
9 }8 u. |7 H' |: Z  n9 c  xI am useless to all
) |* {/ ?# W9 @5 ]  b- G8 \0 cBut I wish I were a dove - T! W4 Y+ [+ G8 F( }4 X) A: M
Giving myself to the world, to the fire/ G2 @4 j' y6 J* [
I feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind" o, B8 W! d* M/ A& n1 Y& Y
I sent prayers to my god$ J  F6 i" r$ ?, q7 ?! ^
Though he does not answer
" R0 b, o8 s+ W4 P) n1 l( JHe bless me with the gift of hope
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。
0 D* C5 O, e2 r( X加油加油,经常写写!
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