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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006, 2 s3 l% a0 t6 M0 h: T
I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  
+ L( F+ L% [2 ]! RDreamers9 I! M6 d; Y6 [" b6 F
Savages6 i5 f  {" Y" @
Poets% P( a) p( l+ }) P
Builders of canoes,
9 @. o6 ?1 }8 z! ~' G/ ^8 g$ ?! jBlack smiths
: r) @- E7 |% c% w6 A( \Murderers,
) |# m; S' |3 _0 ?+ ?; m% s$ G2 KRisk takers,
8 N+ q0 B. [  cMy mind is full of curiosity and wonder * ^% W9 C$ ?& y  v' z: R, R' i
As I think of what could be.   L/ e8 v  d0 k, m% _
The world is so big to me
$ T4 y3 n  M4 X3 k* C+ [I wonder what it means to be
( ^2 @, b( |5 _  \1 {4 y+ o" ?I looked up at the star and smiled * \3 U0 K6 g" R7 Y8 y8 ?
They flashed as they have heard all I have read. 8 O+ }1 Z# }, f% Q, F  k

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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。* N% e# c* ?- {, s4 X$ c1 Y
评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。
$ E* @. v, F( ?! Z3 x( y2 M顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,
0 e/ c' j1 G: vA poor old Guy;2 L; P  u4 U' @, L4 j6 {
Legs in a bonfire,
; i, y  Y$ G0 ]) w+ W) U# [Head in the sky' x0 O. M, g# I) D) f
Lonely, with the feel of betray& A5 T: |# e+ j% s! m' o% b5 k
Heart empty and hollow; n$ p8 u  }* z. I' H$ z7 N. Z
Alone I stand
6 i" f5 L2 h1 ~; p. lI am useless to all
% f1 v+ ]; |' ]$ B7 L9 vBut I wish I were a dove 9 ]) U% m6 j! {3 S# J* t
Giving myself to the world, to the fire
" o/ B, |5 [- J' P5 T+ OI feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind
, m& e- |, X5 V* x% U% rI sent prayers to my god$ {6 S+ p. `% j8 _1 U* Q  A
Though he does not answer4 N7 W) K6 y& o1 ~  _
He bless me with the gift of hope " x4 O4 f) ~2 p8 A8 v

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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。
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