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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006, ' z, W' @7 r& ~; u. Y2 h8 j4 j, j" M
I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  
( }! [/ {) v, D! x4 h  Q0 KDreamers
/ i4 k9 x& \9 Y7 w6 @1 FSavages
0 e" K8 x' l( sPoets
" {$ I+ ^2 o) S2 t' P9 P1 r- uBuilders of canoes,& _* h( ]" l; ]* M" t6 U
Black smiths4 ^) x7 P3 o/ x+ @  O, U
Murderers,  E& R: S( E# Q& N8 }
Risk takers,
8 E, Z. c2 W, {$ N# y- n. PMy mind is full of curiosity and wonder   u! H( @: L4 x: W1 U' o8 n5 v
As I think of what could be. 7 P. R, M" A4 K! X
The world is so big to me
) J5 j. T4 ^) y, p- hI wonder what it means to be( I& j( D) Z7 t& g& y2 ~) }  I
I looked up at the star and smiled
; m& C# f; n6 o4 h/ Y+ FThey flashed as they have heard all I have read.
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
  a% f( l" n/ @评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。
9 t$ y( ~5 F* d2 H* |顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,$ y+ X4 }% ~$ I2 V9 l0 A- _  Q
A poor old Guy;6 J  V2 C6 W& D+ O- r( i
Legs in a bonfire,# V+ P: ~7 `+ q% g" s
Head in the sky* t' D6 j3 @7 p
Lonely, with the feel of betray
4 y9 m+ `, O! j5 k- ]  H% hHeart empty and hollow  F5 Q; Y6 Q$ R! L
Alone I stand- i% n$ k) b/ |# X+ ^
I am useless to all
* ]) y( `* v2 ^: s0 _But I wish I were a dove ' Z8 f4 n$ M: c3 ~) W5 q/ u0 j
Giving myself to the world, to the fire
2 C1 Q2 z6 H/ j7 NI feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind8 V) O1 H% E- y
I sent prayers to my god
$ B! e8 h- N# J8 j& UThough he does not answer
0 D% q+ w0 i8 W8 R" uHe bless me with the gift of hope . ?, s1 |, e+ T. |6 u2 B9 Q* w

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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。# N5 w! _6 t+ I- g
加油加油,经常写写!
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