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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
老杨团队,追求完美;客户至上,服务到位!
In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006, 1 G" ?2 l- {. d
I believe there must be creatures like ourselves  
. V% {8 T7 c% j: x  \" O2 H1 tDreamers
/ s3 O! h4 E! f' }! tSavages
+ C, A9 g) L/ p1 v# e7 w2 ?! V  @4 ], G& UPoets
; \+ ]) C/ k$ c/ T! w# qBuilders of canoes,
3 B& f8 d( i& V, j1 cBlack smiths* H( u: x6 K8 L' t" X0 P! ?
Murderers,7 u: V( x# h0 r) w5 `& Q8 o
Risk takers,
4 y1 E& m" V  q1 g% i# B3 ?My mind is full of curiosity and wonder
3 z6 g- u1 c3 [& a, ]. I& y# _% nAs I think of what could be. $ |" L; i3 ?$ N) f3 i
The world is so big to me . ^; L6 G& S0 k# _5 K9 F; {
I wonder what it means to be
/ \4 r9 N" Z! Q: T" EI looked up at the star and smiled
' P) J/ I7 Z. |3 o/ m9 d5 O! ]* e$ DThey flashed as they have heard all I have read.
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。' q; c4 _& V( D/ j9 z
评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。
4 m$ q+ @" e$ ]! r% I+ P顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,1 H6 n1 X; ?, Q% s2 ^
A poor old Guy;$ B* N% S! r# r8 V& L$ ^, Z
Legs in a bonfire,* B9 [% H4 {) D6 a
Head in the sky; V  Z  l% K* E2 M
Lonely, with the feel of betray5 `6 j2 C& b7 W2 t: h: B
Heart empty and hollow
: e- C! i. W( E% |5 h' H3 p; o& nAlone I stand
% i( \' l1 Q0 mI am useless to all
5 V3 `$ B6 J% T5 C; q( A1 wBut I wish I were a dove
9 u- E. w5 ^* Y6 uGiving myself to the world, to the fire
9 h1 O# Q# x5 F9 [# RI feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind, p. X0 ~* h! d/ S# Y3 W0 R
I sent prayers to my god$ W6 F1 j1 e* U) q! n; g
Though he does not answer
& n# @; S/ \2 m1 LHe bless me with the gift of hope
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。$ ~+ U  F- N, ?# ^
加油加油,经常写写!
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