恳请各位老师帮助纠正下发音，谢谢

beforei

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请各位老师纠正一下发音，谢谢。

竹声

I was unable to open your audio documents. What kind of format is it?
- Q, Q( }. [  u- ZIn addition, why does it cost points to download?
You can try www.box.com to upload your recording.

beforei

* j# D! p/ `' \1 l$ z& u+ ^The format of the track is flv. You can open it by VLC(software,you can google it). Btw,I do not know why it costs point for downloading. Could I send both of them to your email?

beforei

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竹声

听了你在box.com 上面的录音，觉得语调方面似乎更要加强一下。建议将原文附上，有利于对照。

beforei

谢谢老师，1.Men are anxious to improve their circumstances, but are unwilling to improve themselves; they therefore remain bound.2.However hard you try, you'll always miss out on something in life. Let's just enjoy the moment.

冥顽脑袋

我也觉得是竹声老师说的语调问题。元音也可适当夸张一下说饱满一点。
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beforei

谢谢楼上的宝贵意见。我自己和老外朋友也说我的元音发音不到位。可能牙不好，不好意思张嘴吧。哈哈。

雲吞

beforei 发表于 2014-6-13 13:43
谢谢楼上的宝贵意见。我自己和老外朋友也说我的元音发音不到位。可能牙不好，不好意思张嘴吧。哈哈。

# C* u/ E5 F1 y+ s' f- l- ]有道理。我以前的房东年纪大牙快掉光了，元音也发不到位。

beforei

That is embarrassing.