我尊贵的邻居(11)

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井忘川
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- U3 P( g5 o# z7 [* e我尊贵的邻居
8 q& p* V+ `6 A2 P* ]- }  }9 X9 \$ U是我们小区  几十户
唯一的元老
* |- P2 E+ S$ Z- }+ X! P+ C) J  a; i一住三十多年

邻居八十多了  却身轻如燕
白发红颜  不见皱纹
开车铲雪  挖土栽花
* z* z4 m6 s/ c1 ]似不识  岁月为何物

9 A' S+ m4 \6 l4 y. k/ {4 @; d. q头顶英国文学硕士的光环
; y5 u. E' [9 F5 @; l4 j邻居气宇轩昂
如同女面朱熔基
% _/ d7 {0 k! Q% V邻居的字
" F4 J& V4 v* S3 M: d则遒劲似  老树裹枯藤

邻居酷喜中国文化
说她属土龙
其笛声也悠扬
那是从隔壁传来的
$ M; G2 l6 g. P- }, b4 P& D8 \' F唯一的声响
4 }0 C1 _* H0 w0 k那不知名的曲调
, ]4 n- a/ u- O反复颂扬着  生命的壮美与灿烂

Justing

这首哪天有空好好翻译一下，写张贺卡送过去，顺便取取经。回帖备忘。

张玉

老人是宝啊

Justing

身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换

Justing

英文版，欢迎指正：
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Living here for more than thirty years,
my prestigous neighbour
is the only first owner of the unit properties
9 n1 W; `, D3 z: p, Y& ]% P9 Qin our community ---
tens of townhouse condos.

4 c. |+ p$ u  E2 E, VNeighbour is more than eighty years old,
- T' A' ]5 v6 x  `magically, without wrinkles into your eyes.
% ?) c+ P9 P0 ?8 p, f2 o3 EShe has white hairs and red faces.
Her light-footed movement
+ m0 }: H# T4 Xis just like a flying swallow.
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1 g" o) p* c- G" sShe shovels the snow on her door lane
' j9 @: [2 R! }5 U' S' @! J  y* Bbefore driving her own car;
she digs her back yard
to plant flowers ---
as if she did not know what years mean.

With the glory of the Master's Degree in English literature,
neighbour has a dignified appearance ---
% b" a& P8 A# {( X! a3 jas if she were the female twin of Chinese Premier Rongji Zhu.
Neighbour's handwriting
8 b- `6 l: U1 h4 @5 f: Eis so vigorous as to be the old trees
interwined by dry vines.
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Neighbour loves Chinese culture deeply.
She said she belongs to the Earth Dragon.
% q) v2 T- e* Z) F! L( E* QWell, her fluting is very melodious ---
+ }; u. Z) R, [that is the sole sound going into my ears
from the next side of my wall;
the unknown tune is extolling
the magnificence and brilliance of the life,
' G7 ?6 |2 V, K& A# h# }! ragain and again.

Justing

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& T) B' X+ t& @0 O土龙，1928年，与朱熔基同年，具体到月份，邻居也只比朱熔基小1个多月。

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身轻如燕 与 不见皱纹 位置互换
& G4 `0 z/ y2 k; k2 h- ZJusting 发表于 2011-1-2 20:03

! |. ]8 @$ Y. t/ e2 S" z从音韵角度考虑，还是不换为宜。我写新诗，仿照古诗平仄的要求，比较注意语句缓（相当于平声）急（相当于仄声）的交错搭配，这是我的独到之处。
# L( g( _! Z# `% D2 T# h另外，翻译改动一处：
Her light-footed movement
2 J' a& f& Z4 I/ H$ J  W2 D) r7 ois just like a flying swallow.
& k$ U) s& z# Y9 F. J, ~" H! ?& m修改为：
; [9 @$ X" i4 s* q% b$ uHer light-footed movement
is just like a swallow flying.

hm86888

6# Justing
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3 z: b) b2 j  \5 x8 P( |. g+ z6 j真的是太像朱镕基了！

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6# Justing
真的是太像朱镕基了！
hm86888 发表于 2011-1-4 23:35

" J( b# O9 Y( d: U3 L" p0 e, }9 J我贴的就是朱熔基啊，邻居还不敢照。这个 镕 字我词库里居然没有。