儿子写给老妈的'控诉'信

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儿子13,正在学习写作. 恰逢范文是一封信,他挥笔就来,成就了下面的'控诉'状.

好心的读者帮帮忙:
1)多少是他妈该改变的?
  y8 e3 k% p" C; T$ @# Q2)多少是TEENAGER该收敛的?

  V5 D# ^7 `; j4 g& M/ b- }+ iHi, Mum, aka. Isabel
+ ^: |3 ?9 [1 v* U+ D" YI have written you this message because:
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I reckon that I should not need to remember as much  Chinese words because my brain gets frustrated. And you make me work too hard.

I should also get more presents at Christmas and get rewards for getting more than 90% in any exam.

" k* H" P+ L  ~) _% [You should let me watch TV, play PS2, and stay up late more.
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I would also like to re-arrange my room a little bit by replacing everything with flowers on it.
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4 L& E! \5 {+ c& I+ k5 EI wouldn't mind more PS2 games and DVDs but you wouldn't let me get any.

You should also buy me some poker chips so I can play poker at home.
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I would also like a TV in my room, so my room looks cool, and maybe some more posters.

4 Z! l- A) E- JThe last thing is that I should do less chores.

; D1 a2 L( q$ w% Z) }$ `, lYour sincerely:( I didn't like writing this)
Eric
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老杨

I reckon that I should not need to remember as much  Chinese words because my brain gets frustrated. And you make me work too hard.不同意，小孩子的大脑容量是巨大的。
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I should also get more presents at Christmas and get rewards for getting more than 90% in any exam.不作评论。
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You should let me watch TV, play PS2, and stay up late more.同意。

I would also like to re-arrange my room a little bit by replacing everything with flowers on it.同意。

I wouldn't mind more PS2 games and DVDs but you wouldn't let me get any.每天1~2小时。

! @: k) w* b% E; m& wYou should also buy me some poker chips so I can play poker at home. 同意。

, b7 H8 o9 _2 G: L( ?3 y% ^# e# [" dI would also like a TV in my room, so my room looks cool, and maybe some more posters.不同意。
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) |( n2 P4 T% i7 @1 NThe last thing is that I should do less chores.应该多做家务事。
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3 m5 G/ V/ j  p0 r. HYour sincerely:( I didn't like writing this) 括号里面的话不好。