我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
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1 `- a& n( k( @& h1 ]Summer's Coming
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Faster, hotter and sweater,
Summer's coming, coming, -ing ---
3 D! e0 z( b$ V9 q. DFrom the colorful nature
To my life and dream.
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1 Z8 q1 h+ Y: H( BFollowing the summer's step,
& _$ i( i+ j; k4 M7 s  XLet myself go ---
. L3 ^) H; k& \% Q$ |9 q2 JGo to the wild rain
' @% J1 C5 N' Z! b6 VWashing my heart and soul.
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9 a4 X+ y( t8 u2 `. R0 DGood-bye, my happy spring;
4 k: j9 v) T5 Q$ z4 l1 W6 OGood-bye, my childish dream.
6 m8 {- F$ k6 u. J! K: P% WI can prepare nothing;
/ E8 N/ ]5 F. O' @! \; ~, y1 aMy life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。
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6 }& H' {$ [+ H, h5 I一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
, u( @- E. S& Z' PIt displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.
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简约

thank you, i can see it now.
# H. X! ?' E) ubut what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
夏天来了