我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
  \0 Y+ Z) l3 U. x是十多年前的作品了——
Summer's Coming

Faster, hotter and sweater,
Summer's coming, coming, -ing ---
6 D7 o4 f& L( [6 ~From the colorful nature
2 r3 w- ?* p- ]& o/ X; c; ?# oTo my life and dream.

0 ]5 \7 k# @8 k* fFollowing the summer's step,
Let myself go ---
Go to the wild rain
Washing my heart and soul.

Good-bye, my happy spring;
0 ~) H8 b/ N8 R9 ^. `! d' u) QGood-bye, my childish dream.
I can prepare nothing;
My life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。

一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
It displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.
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[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
but what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
  G% ?' O& t) S% N" f5 g( u( E/ j夏天来了