爱的代价 (ENGLISH POEM NO2)

我在故我思

Falling in love
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I fell in love with you
9 r+ Z" V: [1 ^At the first week we met

You have charm, you have looks
, U, H) \' l! ~! X! M2 k9 x8 M3 uwith full of pimples in face
5 D. z7 H" {, z5 y/ DAs spotting sky at a summer night
They are shining stars
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4 s0 }& x4 v& q2 S0 _- eYour lip is so big
; S0 U+ K% f# P2 b" ~+ T; mAnd that’s good for a kiss
0 f  a9 F1 F2 @0 O+ RYour body is chubby
And that is good for sex

' ]1 C/ N( x! G% wI was deeply in love
Everything from you is positive
0 c! }  c6 Q1 C# G8 P' f* G0 ]$ ]You blame me everything and everyday
And I think all girls sound like
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' v7 v7 c/ y7 a0 u1 RYou could not stand my eating
1 ]; H' d5 I# x) l, VSaying no good for making funny sound
6 B6 i0 y2 h0 J) t0 ?/ }' I+ XI think you are perfectly right
' _3 U7 ]) Y# s5 y) rEating with sound is a pig
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+ ?6 z6 N) _% \  I; l* o- I' {5 k2 Y) MI fell in love with you
Become a fool to think
All trouble things you did
' v  h2 A* S/ x2 {# Y7 a  y3 wAnd that is the price for love

You slash my heart
and I am seriously hurt
8 A. p. b1 b7 O2 A9 \I will never love another
If my heart can be fixed

+ l, d7 z0 }/ T[ 本帖最后由 我在故我思 于 2008-12-21 10:57 编辑 ]

scuba1995

还没看,先沙发上坐下

scuba1995

再拿条毯子, 楼主的诗估计会让俺掉上半地鸡皮疙瘩
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湿人啊....

新移民

还真是屯子大了多有才的银都有哈,简直乐死我了,哈.....

我在故我思

爱的代价 (ENGLISH POEM NO2)
& F. I8 c  Q& Y2 b4 U, o# QFalling in love
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) k+ l, }6 J/ ~5 \  OI fell in love with you
5 B9 Y: I0 g5 G( J5 cAt the first week we met
, L& k% y& z- p) {5 _1 n( J$ N
You have charm, you have looks
with full of pimples in face
As spotting sky at a summer night
) [) ~( p* Z. R2 P# p9 \9 aThey are shining stars
' G% O! y" ]) u
% Z) a) C" C9 i$ t+ RYour lip is so big
* Z3 ], T( l6 s# OAnd that’s good for a kiss
Your body is chubby
And that is good for sex

5 k4 |; ]8 x/ w5 R' t! dI was deeply in love
8 i( o7 P) ]# ~) Y; X1 {( Y2 |Everything from you is positive
You blame me everything and everyday
And I think all girls sound like
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4 t0 @8 ]6 ?$ V# M( L0 ~You could not stand my eating
+ Y- I! m& ^: p6 L( J' _Saying no good for making funny sound
2 O7 G/ w" A6 j3 _7 z, @: VI think you are perfectly right
. O' z3 C' P6 W* e% HEating with sound is a pig
& N3 l+ P" o9 m" t7 ~0 v/ |
I fell in love with you
Become a fool to think
7 h& W: `- x) W' B# t' R' NAll trouble things you did
3 b  o% X3 F/ {$ c7 Z, g& BAnd that is the price for love
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you are deeply in love
Everything from me is negative
! d  k7 A. n% O; B"My man should like this,
and I am helping you to improve'
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8 Y  M! t2 ~) i$ ~9 sYou are loving me
- W. O9 n. m" Z. W6 A9 b8 eor that one in your mind?
6 z! u( J+ @; ~, L4 ]. M5 Y' ~My mind is like a mud
4 q2 F# Q4 ^" }4 @0 T- Ecan be shaped whatevery you want

4 C8 D5 C( v9 A- M5 }4 W, T! runfortunalety not my heart
3 {; [- o: ?) s8 Y! AIt is slashed by you
and I am seriously hurt
, K7 J8 W$ r) U1 _I will never love another
If my heart can be fixed

我在故我思

原帖由 scuba1995 于 2008-12-21 11:13 发表
# Z0 ^& V- d; W& Q& K$ J9 H再拿条毯子, 楼主的诗估计会让俺掉上半地鸡皮疙瘩
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湿人啊....

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# n: R  k+ c4 \) K" X' b2 _( C你小子的沙发可害了我, 正准备完成大作, 被你一个沙发加一条毯子弄得修给不了了

新移民

啊?还没整完哪?
够湿的了, 还真想把谁淹死啊.
- ^7 |7 A8 c5 ?& v哈哈哈...还真长见识

我在故我思

原帖由 新移民 于 2008-12-21 11:55 发表
; |( p  M2 E' l啊?还没整完哪?
够湿的了, 还真想把谁淹死啊.
哈哈哈...还真长见识

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该让你们见识一下心坛第一大才子的风采了

scuba1995

原帖由 我在故我思 于 2008-12-21 12:13 发表

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& Q9 U3 c" l1 T; o: p+ E) m5 E1 w该让你们见识一下心坛第一大才子的风采了

鱼雷

滔滔江水，。。。连绵不绝。。。。

新移民

今天一想起这两片"湿"就想笑,实在忍不住啊.
哈哈哈哈哈哈......笑个够

马户

超级好湿!!!

suvescape

看的我毛骨耸然

scuba1995

看完你写的诗,俺赶脚着吧,写湿这事,好象也挺容易的...........

新移民

容易?吹牛吧你.
$ w4 t( D. J5 _  ~2 R/ `8 V不信你试试, 估摸累吐血,你也整不出这么搞笑的湿来.到现在我还想笑呢.

P.S.你一个沙发加一个毯子的可害了人家第一大才子了, 知道不?

精品中年老男人

我在故我思

原帖由 suvescape 于 2008-12-21 23:36 发表
8 f3 }% D8 F0 l8 b4 p4 ^- j看的我毛骨耸然

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有这么恐怖吗?看来你是缺了点幽默细胞了

我在故我思

原帖由 scuba1995 于 2008-12-21 23:42 发表
看完你写的诗,俺赶脚着吧,写湿这事,好象也挺容易的...........

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( V0 a4 Y1 a3 V0 F. L. P! H' U听过吗? 叫做难者不会会者不难.

我在故我思

谢谢新移民网友的和其他网友的支持. 笑好, 笑比哭好, 笑比恶毒好, 笑比变态好. 看看这个网站, 就知道我们需要更多的笑声