锻造地道英语句子

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　　1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.
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　　改进：Artists' work upgrades our civilization.
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5 W; T! ^: K; J3 k8 P; M' h9 E9 n　　2. For example, you work in a big factory.

　　改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.

! m7 V& M/ ~$ Y( ^　　3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.

　　改进：You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.
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$ w: ^  `& d( m* C　　4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.

　　改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.

　　5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.

8 e; B' z" h; i3 u　　改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.

　　6. Their brain is still very young.
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　　改进: They are still immature.
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　　7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.

1 o8 W/ @. U5 A/ f2 Q$ F6 d　　改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.

　　8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.
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2 ~& H5 P1 \2 N0 C2 R, V. B+ g2 R　　改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.
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　　9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.
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　　改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.
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　　10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.
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) ~; y3 J, T5 ?( r7 Z* F　　改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.
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4 E: S6 @9 o3 I% x% u9 @/ Y　　11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.

　　改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development.

　　12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.
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　　改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money.
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　　13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.

　　改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.

, b( H. e7 B  p# B& u6 C, U$ N　　14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money.

* W9 z, y: C0 v& q3 N# ]　　改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more.
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　　15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.

/ v3 L; @0 M% X; B. L　　改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products.
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. _. `/ w# O$ I　　16. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills.
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# N2 e  K. q& v. S! c5 o, j$ i　　改进: In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills.

　　17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians.
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# Y0 f- m2 o$ j# I1 J8 M　　改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand.

" o  R3 Z% w" {5 N　　18. This knowledge will become a part of your body.

　　改进: This knowledge will become part of you.

4 J, R; w' H( t& p" u　　19. They cannot think clearly.

　　改进: They cannot think straight.
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( S" o- O3 F4 O+ P, f1 k9 _" Q　　20. Money can improve their living standard.
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2 B' ~4 {& l  c- s7 `& k8 {' n　　改进: Money can improve their life.

7 \! O. [5 _: O2 o( o; x! A　　21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money.

　　改进: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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1 [" k2 f3 D' n　　22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life.
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　　改进: If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life.
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/ W; E) }+ O# I0 K. G　　23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later.

　　改进: One purpose of education is to learn to learn.

' u& U9 w9 o$ F　　24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano.
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　　改进: Many parents send their children to piano classes.
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( P# _( u' A5 z　　25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others.

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　　26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.

　　改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.
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9 P5 e3 k0 u0 G6 [9 P& O; k　　27. Smoking can help you relax your mind.

　　改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.
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8 ]! P; \) [) r% }# w' E  |: i　　28. What's about nonsmokers?

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2 {! |0 w$ z$ s2 B7 t0 U0 e　　29. Why not to be a non-smoker?
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　　改进: Why not be a non-smoker?
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　　30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.

$ h" G% l0 _: N- h% z　　改进: Everyone has friends in his life.
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2 K, W  U& J/ j" b- |　　31. I am not good at maths, but English

　　改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.
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. h: S; ]7 {3 H! M. d) ~, o　　32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time?

9 |3 I  C1 e1 w& X' C+ v5 I, F3 V　　改进: Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time?
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: c; i/ s: |1 R6 e: j  s' v# n& l% H　　33.It is children who clear about their interests.
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+ P$ F" W/ _8 w$ Y　　改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.

4 ^& a# h1 @, |  {6 U* y0 b) ?2 t: q　　34. I agree the latter idea.

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　　35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.
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) d1 I, t; c, P9 ~, }$ p& M5 N　　改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.
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　　36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.

　　改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.

) \: n: |3 T: l　　37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.

　　改进：People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.
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　　38. No one knows all the things.

　　改进: No one knows everything.

8 S7 W, P$ n; B- X% G　　39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.

　　改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.

　　40. Each form of having friends has its advantages
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　　改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.
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　　41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up.
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8 B; n: r# `6 f/ r5 H: G" P　　改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply
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　　42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.

　　改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.
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$ Z. j" b9 H8 h  e! w　　43. They will learn the bad habits.
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　　改进: They will develop bad habits.
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　　44. In this continued process, people make progress.

　　改进: In this cycle, people make progress.
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' M2 p; m. g/ y/ T7 e　　45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.
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　　改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.
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% K4 t4 u) X4 A( F5 s5 ^　　46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.
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) {" @/ w$ Q1 @5 Y1 x　　改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.

3 I( O$ q/ {) e* T3 X　　47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.
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　　改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.

　　48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.

　　改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.
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2 r3 k$ y  Y0 T6 P) i" J　　49. Children should be taught disciplines in order to avoid unnecessary lost.
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　　50. I felt alone.
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　　改进: I felt lonely.

孤寒一剑

wow, where did you get those sample (the cheglish one)? I have to say the revised samples are really really good.
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sindowa

随便

平时的积累，呵呵！

玫瑰上的小蚂蚁

maxlake

能否解释一下 status quo 是什么意思。

寒塘鹤影

是现状的意思

spark

:lol::lol::lol:

玄紫妖妖

Wow,看得我头晕目悬的...还是记不住...呵呵

醉酒当歌

有些改进似乎意思有些改变...

自由自在

好哦．xiexie

penguin

thanks

lischka