锻造地道英语句子

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　　1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.

　　改进：Artists' work upgrades our civilization.

+ ]; i) }' b7 ~　　2. For example, you work in a big factory.
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' o0 k; w" V. Y* n8 n　　改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.
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" I0 N$ U' ]2 s/ A- [$ b# \% d5 P% O　　3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.

6 a# A5 ?6 J( ?" O, |5 E　　改进：You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.

  K3 k' b4 |8 Y* {# R　　4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.
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　　改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.
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　　5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.
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　　改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.
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　　6. Their brain is still very young.

　　改进: They are still immature.

　　7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.
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* P( |) s% ?4 E; g" Z　　改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.

& l+ j3 x. B; U1 S, }* j8 r　　8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.
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　　改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.

& N; Q1 E5 k; ~% ~　　9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.

　　改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.
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　　10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.
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9 D% S/ {, C, E' ]- s" C　　改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.

　　11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.
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' m3 V9 ~( k& g& X* ~　　改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development.

$ s" U% y! d% Q5 N　　12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.

' m. e' W& R' Y! p3 W0 F　　改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money.
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" K$ }/ w9 x; O7 f2 T　　13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.

1 l3 A" K' p. q4 l, f* P2 C+ e　　改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.

6 Q8 F" [6 v6 |3 y/ v1 H7 A+ y　　14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money.
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( X" i: P1 `6 m　　改进: Some cigarettes may cost even more.
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/ @* ~3 }7 K0 {1 g, U: J　　15. Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products.

# q0 U7 {) f) M( ^3 q　　改进: Firstly, dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products.
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　　16. In order to suit the needs of entering into work, students must grasp some technical skills.
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　　改进: In order to meet the needs of future work, students must learn some practical skills.

( M" f% F7 P4 Y0 r) ]4 M3 R　　17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians.
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& F7 {- {9 M# e$ o( ]　　改进: Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand.
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# g9 R9 \% S9 N6 `& Z' p, n　　18. This knowledge will become a part of your body.

　　改进: This knowledge will become part of you.

  v. H4 W1 G. B2 L$ ^　　19. They cannot think clearly.
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　　改进: They cannot think straight.

　　20. Money can improve their living standard.
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　　改进: Money can improve their life.

　　21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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9 }) t% O& L- I; [9 J　　改进: Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money.
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8 T( j  h" l# W3 e( i& m! m　　22. If a student only cares about money, will lead to be unhappy all his life.
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　　改进: If a student only cares about money, he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life.
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　　23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later.
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. K: c; N. H- E7 P　　改进: One purpose of education is to learn to learn.
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　　24. Many parents arrange their children go to learn piano.
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' R. i3 e- Q/ ~( }& \1 r/ P* e　　改进: Many parents send their children to piano classes.
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/ w2 X& Y2 b3 M0 @( `8 _, M: O2 Q$ k　　25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion, I will study with others.
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　　改进: When I need second opinion, I will study with others.
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( Q- a) x0 l. W% l9 R# b2 Q( g　　26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.
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  F; \% d3 E$ \' z3 ]6 O+ [　　改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.

　　27. Smoking can help you relax your mind.

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5 x: r" g1 E9 @. |0 R1 \　　28. What's about nonsmokers?
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　　改进: What about nonsmokers?
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5 D" r: @. f+ i; g　　29. Why not to be a non-smoker?
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0 l4 J$ M# t+ U" \+ X　　改进: Why not be a non-smoker?
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　　30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.
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　　改进: Everyone has friends in his life.
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8 T) ?9 b; Q( H+ |/ V- l　　31. I am not good at maths, but English

! K* R& ~# G" x6 G　　改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.

　　32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time?
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　　33.It is children who clear about their interests.

6 a7 _- |, M5 P" j2 N8 y　　改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.
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) ~- x% Z2 x# h' g: T　　34. I agree the latter idea.
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　　改进: I agree with the latter idea.
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! }. A9 @# N6 Y7 f　　35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.

　　改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.
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　　36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.
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　　改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.
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6 S' R; j# o0 U　　37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.

　　改进：People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.

　　38. No one knows all the things.
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$ _( Q" @( C2 C6 V7 V; Z" P% k　　39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.
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' `3 @% ~8 C- V; s' F0 ?　　40. Each form of having friends has its advantages
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　　改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.

　　41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up.

' [1 w$ J1 @8 k% [! |- _/ ~　　改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply
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( }( G% p! G- ~# h4 z* I: R+ ^　　42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.

/ M% q6 Y# o2 \7 l' n; V　　改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.
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　　43. They will learn the bad habits.

　　改进: They will develop bad habits.
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　　44. In this continued process, people make progress.

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　　45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.

3 e1 f( u" P. k4 [! Y. o3 _　　改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.

　　46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.
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$ h1 {5 Q" S& s9 X　　改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.

  \; f& i! Y1 D9 H　　47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.
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　　48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.

; {! E2 p5 D( A) J　　改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.
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2 g, q+ ]6 w+ `　　49. Children should be taught disciplines in order to avoid unnecessary lost.
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' r5 S( J" h; b1 y) @　　改进: Children should be taught discipline in order to avoid unnecessary loss.

+ H+ A! {  R$ w! s　　50. I felt alone.

　　改进: I felt lonely.

孤寒一剑

wow, where did you get those sample (the cheglish one)? I have to say the revised samples are really really good.

Thanks

sindowa

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平时的积累，呵呵！

玫瑰上的小蚂蚁

maxlake

能否解释一下 status quo 是什么意思。

寒塘鹤影

是现状的意思

spark

:lol::lol::lol:

玄紫妖妖

Wow,看得我头晕目悬的...还是记不住...呵呵

醉酒当歌

有些改进似乎意思有些改变...

自由自在

好哦．xiexie

penguin

thanks

lischka