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每当说一句汉语的时候,我总在心里想英语是怎么说的.尤其看到汉语诗歌的时候,我突然想,翻译成英语还能保留原来的意思吗?所以试着译一译.
+ q. o$ R* X) k前边发了译文以后才发现有些大小写和语法错误.一点一点地改,很乱.所以再重新发一便:
# z: B5 [ A/ m, |; D- v! A2 aEarly morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry.
4 Z' C1 b4 [$ J W1 hPartial leaves fall down everywhere,squirrels are busily running.4 y' \$ b6 _+ b9 A! Y. }
Current I, the same as one tear ago, the same given name, and the same family name.8 W5 H/ F; R. c; b" l6 H! D! s& n
The same hairstyle,the same bag,reserved laughing and talking.3 q; B$ L8 O [5 u
Seemly added something in my eyes,or lacked something.
' M0 T, K8 ] x6 k7 USummer went so fast that I almost forgot those sweating night:, I- p- p+ x% j. q+ r4 P
Cats often played at the whole hot night outside windows to get cool ; `$ ?- B. |8 H6 ?/ z
like us many years ago,mindless self indulgence.9 T: B, d1 f; Q' f# u+ c8 V/ k
I often cherish the memory happened in summer and those people that make me raint even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming.5 l7 a) C. k, U2 ]
The emotion and the carma only is a dream.
. C$ N: `) W/ a4 D/ F3 I2 u* VThat shoudn`t happen to meet each other last tenderlt night.
( }, t3 ~$ W. v# k& Y2 lI want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.
: a0 C- I" l+ a' f* [+ p* YI am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild.9 t6 g/ y7 v5 T! ~
In this lonely world whom I can step inside love to?
' M: G2 P' z( e" U! _& _0 KIntoxicated then feel cold,
1 t0 C* i F$ x1 O8 M( b* Tthe labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.7 |3 _' Q2 a# |
I am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have.( S8 }; ~0 T- [) x; m/ y
The amorous man to whom you gave your soul?
, S: j+ E5 @2 _! ~" Q6 c& H! YWhy I am always hoodwinked!8 _6 g3 o" ^3 S" X2 R
I have told myself many times cautiously 5 M o8 `- C! R$ f" o/ S
don`t fall into the spoony whirligig." `: F% Z/ G. H
The amorous women always get drunk by desolation.
# I( E, L3 H8 n3 j' R! tWhy can`t I take it easy?
+ l, R" w6 D: \0 _6 B: {How endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!
0 P% W3 `+ s# }8 C8 d" X0 kWhen the quiet night comes. v+ I" n' }! E+ X7 w
your figure usually appears in front of my eyes.
" A5 U7 l: q; p8 X( V1 rThe greeting when you met me made my heart in touched unaccountably.
+ b. Z% Z# d7 ?8 UYours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul,
) k- ~4 o6 K" H' Blight the dark corner in my mind.7 n2 C9 ~8 O2 H0 c( s! S8 P0 p
I feel a bit of cozy.1 `9 x+ N5 w* u2 U/ y' t
The deep attached to you in a twinkling/ ]! ~4 P, C5 s1 }2 ?% v
maybe is the most light spot in my whole life.
" m' \' n. R- H1 a dI didn`t cherish your appearance at first,
. E3 i H% D' h% [! Ibut accompanying with the time passed
* g+ t2 G# B' Q; N- t2 n5 Y* ZI am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion,# A, u0 o4 a0 e! ]
always feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly.8 U' |+ L, |6 Q/ b9 p9 v: |5 G* v
Without asking if you like me or if I like you# n% U. b9 F+ d- c l) n/ n
only feel gracious for your existing,& d1 }, S# E' u8 e! F! n
onlt want to do something for you., N8 v8 A, |9 ~8 ?0 S7 \) A" r1 c- i
Every time when you meet me
6 ~. c' y' d/ n5 j# f# J2 Othe sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil,
4 t4 a' F# h! i/ _1 |! A, kbut I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere4 t# U, i. f0 H# E5 g
That live in my heart.
- E: G+ x- w2 ?Do you know your name can suddenly come into mu mind at anytime?3 e7 [4 Q/ |% a9 g% C
Even only your flying clothes` corner when you turn around, and your voice/ S- @; a, H, I9 I2 A
make me gently distraught with happy feeling.
' ?5 }( \0 f3 o' p/ IThe scene that met you prinkle in my heart like snow on the land
3 p- l1 b# T; T a9 W: F$ Xsuddenly flurry that all are the love to you.
+ i* c* [% I0 z e0 DDo you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss,
; i' n ]& E; w9 R4 }especially on the day, the gentle sea breeze and the sweet summer.
3 m; G- l. u. N" }Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy
/ x4 Z& M& C, h( {2 ~only waiting for you quietly' {7 G1 s/ @' W8 @5 R' v
just let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.+ G) V$ a$ R' Y8 C8 L
I really want to ramble in the small rain with you , K/ [% r* i# N' i1 H6 K9 y! @
and enjoy the rain washing together, e0 O- C' F: M) X8 o0 I6 J9 X
or rush to a film
( L7 C# H8 X2 |. R6 b# G m9 zor listen to a music quietly.0 P6 X* s6 d% p: j
Whom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?
2 i' }- _. M, a; K% x* AIf we embrace ,dance,and gaze to each other,
$ j0 P& a+ U" ~' G1 s. qsmile or gently kiss then say: I really love you"./ f/ F( k7 G8 K* f7 T* I2 M
That is enough.
3 h$ l" c* R8 l7 k# vMaybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago,
3 Z5 S+ F/ M! X& V, _( Ifinely it deeply rooted into the earth in the season and sprout,: E) V; {, J' h7 {
the same as my missing.
$ K- ~2 t; A9 a6 \7 OIt comes a little bit of verdure.
% u$ t& a, a+ VIf, If some day I can touch your hand, 0 O& V4 c1 X# [( f, } @9 r. K& `; }
then I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.9 F% W- Q0 V# Q5 I( D
Let you touch me gently and read me carefully.2 }% u2 o; Y0 B- p( ]5 s' C. o/ d
I will enjoy your mild emotion through your hands with my heart and soul.& R0 G" k/ |8 p/ r! A5 V
At the moment you reach out your hands to me ,
# k+ j8 Z3 g' @- I5 ]/ h8 qthen I will have all care and ardor.
G8 m" Y. B' Z9 P3 ~; Q7 y- Z" JShall we walk arm in arm?
) r4 }4 B! T5 H4 F5 W) Z呵,太晚了,连检查都不想检查一下,有没有打字错误了. |
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