TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架
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3 d' a+ a7 F+ {7 N% Z% o(一) 对立观点式
! b2 y3 p, o. f: Q* L1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)

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, H+ ]/ E0 M- R( e; S/ |(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
) J! S  {' m5 m# ?. H& R% LWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...

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. L4 s: R2 W6 P/ O* ?* T' v2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)
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6 f) y- V) U3 h' vTo choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
5 j! Y8 G5 M; _* g1 Q2 a2 `8 lFor A, A 的一个优势
Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
7 w& e0 j# k. s' M9 ?Furthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
on the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
moreover, B的优点2,for example…
) R" u+ `' A- S  t/ p9 E0 W; zFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.
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) T' a' M* T  c' B(二)单一观点式
1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)
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% h- Y8 {" {( \首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
3 i8 s- n2 v3 X5 _( ?6 OThere is no denying that…
: n, X0 F# e! @) m, R. h( QAnother reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
- a( q0 D% Z! S' K0 h, bFinally,…
% }2 B/ A  h' H" Z1 l( X& B. n9 GBased on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…
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9 t. y& E( N* s9 M6 U" |: t２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
(本类型只agree)


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! `! W; z- _5 {. @8 o+ F' T. c(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
6 h  W& ]$ }  w1 X. jWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
( I9 n5 ?8 e7 m3 u  V! lFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...

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  N  \9 C( R. c7 P. ~( J(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型



There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
When reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
- y- e& N% c7 H8 r/ HThe main reason for my propensity for C is that……
+ n/ w$ e) L$ \: f/ AWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
C is superior in another way, this is…
1 u6 t, H8 b* S  X( e( FFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
9 i- S" ~; N# qFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
# u1 w* D6 m5 H. f(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)

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. E/ Z8 i: u9 S- J3 D3 O4 R(四)原因解释型
1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.
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陈述这个事实
) ]& K% I5 u1 t( [" YAmong countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
  f; [1 i6 O0 o# }' u6 d, QOne of the primary causes is that…
8 _- l6 _# X" FXXX also results from…
… is responsible for xxx, as well.
To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX
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2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.
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There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.

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One of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
1 f2 T+ S) X) l3 R+ G9 e+ x/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
+ S; W' p; P$ U- K# Y/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…
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a more subtle point which we must consider is that…
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In addition/ furthermore
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In conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

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嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?
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再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.
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[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]