TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架

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(一) 对立观点式
1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)

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0 l4 B4 Y5 D/ l* O! {( {& }5 [8 \(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
1 s" L' t6 v2 z  p" ]0 a7 gWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
0 C; h/ M5 J( r% kIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)

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1 j6 Q2 L5 s7 C6 \; hTo choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
For A, A 的一个优势
+ H( s* o1 _$ e$ oWhoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
8 `, |- `5 J9 D! Q; Y- A6 zFurthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
- _! m. z. m. @. m# pon the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
moreover, B的优点2,for example…
8 d% t' m& x+ ~% e5 p9 i! |( TFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.
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1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)

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$ {. j' Z: {! \2 ]2 z% e# B8 MAfter pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
% {4 d, h$ o% m3 g0 [8 a* x2 q( nThere is no denying that…
+ J( B+ A; o) q+ ?  sAnother reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
Finally,…
Based on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…

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２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
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7 S* n. `) r7 g9 V) |1 [(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
1 L0 m; p7 U$ n" m% QThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
4 g: o9 C+ G, t$ F6 S" }A is superior in another way, this is…
$ m2 J0 ^, w3 p+ `* }) AIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
7 T: N+ L7 k! e0 |From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...




(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型

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There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
When reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
& z- i) V9 ~. t1 @: o( d( dThe main reason for my propensity for C is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
C is superior in another way, this is…
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
5 K# M8 p4 H  MFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
: v# X0 W- h4 [" `(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)

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(四)原因解释型
1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.
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陈述这个事实
1 R4 |  N. a" ^! k& sAmong countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
One of the primary causes is that…
+ w7 C& E7 Y, j. i8 ?( o6 ]XXX also results from…
… is responsible for xxx, as well.
& ?0 n8 x6 k8 z( W" Z9 S# dTo put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX
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" ]# R6 N$ U: \' d8 j7 ~2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.

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背景描述
There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.
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One of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
) l; x3 E! j2 p2 W) L4 w/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
+ p" N3 n( n; e0 \( ~/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…
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a more subtle point which we must consider is that…

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$ N* |; k% I- F8 Y7 V7 v/ ~4 Z* A4 CIn addition/ furthermore
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) M/ U% L  |9 L" T/ `& Z, `In conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

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嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?
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再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.
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[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]