TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架
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(一) 对立观点式
; O% F# @: h" [4 f1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)

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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
' P3 K" c. a8 r8 z! hThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
5 M4 W) B1 ^3 f) n6 gWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
: C. V% s, S8 k) _6 zFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)

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6 P- c& V$ ~/ K9 E. I4 UTo choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
' S  @" B9 y2 [5 l+ P: sFor A, A 的一个优势
0 q$ G- z" \. {4 c. [! c9 M& dWhoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
Furthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
on the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
9 F1 x7 U# P3 p9 X" U' D3 W) u$ Kmoreover, B的优点2,for example…
# ^2 c; P2 d8 s3 S; ~2 |5 wFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.
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(二)单一观点式
1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)

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首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
! _7 m  d( q5 NThere is no denying that…
4 F  D! v: ~: T! OAnother reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
1 _. R! Z0 E" sFinally,…
2 j1 [1 b- ~0 CBased on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…
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! B4 @* n) W' Q, j: x２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
(本类型只agree)

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% ?6 p$ h& U6 d  @+ ?) m. y(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
+ j6 f; n! C" [) s' l2 iThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
' S* x9 S0 {# K: P$ g2 K; oA is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
6 e& q' T) x6 A7 WFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...




, Z% ?6 A" f- }. t1 }+ K(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型



There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
When reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
9 g: B+ a: p) t# M1 P) s7 TThe main reason for my propensity for C is that……
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
& K  I. ]# I0 T1 m+ A/ vC is superior in another way, this is…
( Q# t* H! ]+ w5 @5 K6 @$ uFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
0 H! Y! A1 D8 [* SFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)
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0 C/ y% W2 v2 R(四)原因解释型
1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.
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$ J) {, [+ S5 k7 o  ]* G; P" B2 U陈述这个事实
, [$ U$ p( W! m( `( @' U1 s3 RAmong countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
One of the primary causes is that…
XXX also results from…
… is responsible for xxx, as well.
  S2 ?/ [* }& tTo put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX
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2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.
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背景描述
There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.


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One of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
- H( v1 b$ j3 k( H% W' U/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…
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a more subtle point which we must consider is that…

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In conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

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嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?

2 V( `  H$ k: M9 g& N2 w再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.
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[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]