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TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架' B, I: f- E$ P; h& N9 h: Q) ~  d

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(一) 对立观点式
" q# x& p% l* S' J. s1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
1 }. A+ Z# W# wThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
, h7 L+ c3 e% Z0 VWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
  N& ?3 y. g; W% K- ]4 Q' y7 t6 d- vA is superior in another way, this is… ( o) O7 t. _# a4 ]! c  o4 f
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because… " w3 l6 V, X  b% E" ]
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ... / z9 D' ]" \( m: b3 g
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: z% T. J8 L/ U# U3 r" `2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)
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, b2 U6 r. R0 t6 HTo choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
+ q  Q' F8 w5 j  MFor A, A 的一个优势
( `. R1 ~; B. L- {: p9 eWhoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
; Z" @2 x# s+ FFurthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is... 1 I  P+ ?$ ]) Y* y, ?- n9 E
on the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is… + |3 S2 ]: ~- ?: s5 e7 S( T3 y
moreover, B的优点2,for example…
9 l% w5 F. s# Q  B( HFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2. / [  I7 y/ h9 G
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' G$ L  U- v3 E9 [2 O& k(二)单一观点式 + ^& [% h. d5 g: ]
1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)
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首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
/ `& U5 S; s+ q7 m: iAfter pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
- C' ], N! P& p0 J# I/ E: UThere is no denying that… 9 ]# `! ~  q! w5 |+ A3 l, H' E
Another reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
! D/ L3 L0 o; Y$ Y; O( o5 nFinally,…
3 m2 ]0 T) z$ E2 u7 c, `Based on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…
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, Q2 I+ V3 Y; S& `0 q  B0 v2.给出一个论点,主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由.?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
- |# U6 |% G9 a( \$ J2 ?(本类型只agree)
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C. 6 B, A0 z1 h: K
The main reason for my propensity for A is that…… ! G( ~/ f" [4 G1 T, H( h% A0 E0 @) g
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
! S; |) _2 P& IA is superior in another way, this is… 2 g. S" B) @! c3 F4 v5 [3 Y
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
+ g" ]4 V+ e% h& q; Z' z5 u" H% i7 MFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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$ ^: v; l+ U$ g8 S(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型 $ v- S: E/ T* b2 H

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* U: F/ B! S2 c4 lThere exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D. 4 |1 y' q1 I4 p6 x& [
When reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons. 2 F1 e8 k2 e2 I: X* X. \
The main reason for my propensity for C is that……
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C is superior in another way, this is… ( i3 G2 x. e4 y( ]
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
4 ?8 w& {% k/ p. h" D; e4 E' ?. F8 KFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us. : c( V8 P& q, p9 p# {( L
(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)
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6 F. a. c9 Q% W" E(四)原因解释型
3 |9 j. K  w3 j7 t: E5 y1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因. # p( ?6 l% I" a0 C  \: A
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. @4 z7 Q) d7 T4 Z1 }  a( x3 {2 c陈述这个事实
/ c6 ~/ O4 w+ t$ t2 Y, aAmong countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows. . R' m4 I  a0 B" R" z  h: F% M
One of the primary causes is that… + U* ~# L' I; s) E6 z; x" ?0 e5 r
XXX also results from… 7 [7 e1 J% P( q* o
… is responsible for xxx, as well.
* S; |! {7 s% j, g  x( |To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX ' ~) k  N; t1 }6 @7 j
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2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.
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There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.
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One of the primary method, to my mind, is that… + F9 u" l" C6 L# {, Y
/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that… 7 y! B3 G! }% z2 ]1 d
/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that… 0 ?* e* m9 B: P/ s8 T" P4 D
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- }- @0 s. e1 ua more subtle point which we must consider is that…
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9 A$ [; A+ [6 _' f) a0 tIn conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……
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发表于 2005-1-6 12:10 | 显示全部楼层
嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?
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再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.6 U5 B$ f  l+ W/ y1 h$ D* W) r

! K7 M% j3 d, a' y[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]
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