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TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架
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(一) 对立观点式 0 {4 ]9 N) u! r* w/ t$ A+ r( y, h
1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型) 0 Y! X8 \' x/ \0 p+ j4 F& s  i

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) M: @. B+ d5 F0 r8 V( H$ P( y% l(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
, h+ n5 l- T+ g8 V) h& pThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
# b9 g/ n. j" gWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
7 n: e, B. ]4 z4 P% s& d: g+ _7 g7 cA is superior in another way, this is…
$ p% G- d3 k( V. G- a9 H$ ?: kIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because… / [+ a# x8 M  X( r! z* o! z
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)
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# q# F8 [* i  P6 d3 PTo choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
2 ~/ z4 r' ~- ~; L( ZFor A, A 的一个优势
& z" n0 m- v# aWhoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance, 6 x0 z; f# Y! l) F
Furthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
3 e$ ^) C5 {! _0 V& {on the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
3 s* M$ I% [. H4 I# T) h# t$ vmoreover, B的优点2,for example…   H' T+ h" O0 V  M5 q
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.
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(二)单一观点式 - G0 M& L9 v8 _0 s1 X
1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型) 9 Z. ~) r- e: g) A7 P' ]2 M" l

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! S3 d) \0 i! b' \1 K* u! D% Y  fAfter pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
8 x2 H! o- w7 eThere is no denying that… : ^* A) d* G, D
Another reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that… + h0 {4 Y8 W9 G4 M/ E8 X
Finally,… 2 Q. Y+ z. J: d9 L
Based on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that… ' S# S0 g* Y1 u% _+ ^- a

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& v2 v# v4 i: b) F9 I& y2.给出一个论点,主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由.?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型) + S/ a7 x6 n3 A
(本类型只agree)
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
* ~: z$ Z2 ]% c8 B6 kThe main reason for my propensity for A is that…… 1 \4 R- M. N" l. a- r
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
  ]0 e; R( B9 b( j( ^0 _8 uA is superior in another way, this is…   ~# E. g5 g" o% [. P
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
# Y, v, [+ D) x* ?7 ?From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ... " J3 d0 f) U0 T; H  c7 q5 d# [2 H

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(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型 4 b3 ]7 A; g5 y; e0 x
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/ |" B& B9 k' F4 E/ kThere exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D. $ |) J' V; Y/ S8 Q4 R; D# v
When reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
  |. m8 k. w/ fThe main reason for my propensity for C is that…… ; @3 |, d8 u- H4 X/ L/ w5 e
What is also worth noticing fact is that…… 6 h% T4 b- l/ v6 N5 K
C is superior in another way, this is… 0 Z6 [9 @  C9 @- n# p/ J4 i" W
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C $ r3 Y5 H) r6 `* p& |
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
: q7 Z) r' S& a/ ]; H- k; ](In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)
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(四)原因解释型
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陈述这个事实
" s4 t8 P) e0 o. QAmong countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
  Y& d0 q9 ?' r; E' Z3 `" |One of the primary causes is that… 0 Z0 @6 D7 {4 M" h: g- D
XXX also results from…
6 d5 {( K  o/ Z… is responsible for xxx, as well. 2 `( c  C( q2 o- F- y6 q* k
To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX
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2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.
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There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there. ; u. e6 z) g: @/ ]4 U6 Y  x
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One of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
! i7 R$ H- I7 f3 V. g( \% R* A/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that… $ @/ _$ F0 g! ?6 h; F$ k
/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…
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: A/ @9 D8 G* M: p+ Ga more subtle point which we must consider is that… " v; h8 D4 L" x) c  k2 D
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) p% `4 W7 f8 M) l" x/ r. jIn conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……
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发表于 2005-1-6 12:10 | 显示全部楼层
嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?0 o) @( s! I) A. C7 Y- `* M
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再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.: H  }" e, z: V

2 ?; z8 S6 ?! g2 R& S/ z6 H[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]
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