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I just wrote a poem
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' u p# G# z$ U# jHowever,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem7 ^& [" i" m2 k) x0 `1 W7 _: Y
Thanks a lot!!!- o4 H; j, G* Q, A5 {: c' _- C1 l
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
5 z! L2 ]& L: I5 o Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
, ~# w, E; n8 \: t Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
1 {0 i' x0 ^3 x" e Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me : i& ?3 y2 e0 k' ~, o. h# F
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
2 i" h9 k% ?( L; p Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness * h" ~5 o' y. h0 |+ ]
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday , B: A( L8 _# l: g( }
somehow I realized you were still in my heart
- x, \6 ^# p# M! x somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
! _, m. ?- J# z; N& {" e somehow I lost myself inside again # _8 P5 Y, p, K/ N6 x' F: D R# S
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog $ |- W3 P9 h S" B! d7 t
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
Q- v9 q( `" `; G( pFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
5 d0 `; ?$ L/ J( m5 qBasically, I almost finish this poem' E6 [/ \6 |5 l& _
I am 一个人de精彩0 s! l+ [2 F4 V
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
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发表于 2008-1-27 12:42
