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I just wrote a poem" s8 f/ [" n4 q( B# V9 C# v7 Y6 ~
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.) Y9 g! X4 Y& R
However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
( C% e4 f. | eThanks a lot!!!. F$ b2 S0 J' R- g9 L+ I8 \& J
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you C0 E6 i. g D
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us 8 |1 M! C+ `6 p0 C4 u9 ]
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world ) e! s& M$ n$ p% w x
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
* b& R0 K. G$ b. P2 w z& r V. p) B# Y7 D Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind ! w E6 W% V5 n
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
# {9 ?/ a* a# C% MHowever, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday : I0 B6 @ H, \! `" ?& e8 ]* L& T- j
somehow I realized you were still in my heart 4 ^% O/ G1 M; M! u+ Q' z6 r+ u3 _" t* L
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
2 _9 t' f( k6 C somehow I lost myself inside again 4 z! w1 u$ v7 z3 T t, _ j
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
0 R1 h& o' j( q+ B: H8 r8 V P somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
4 }5 {8 c4 O- W" a3 |' T1 \' Q9 o. u6 TFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................8 f- k1 w, X: N/ U: U4 }
Basically, I almost finish this poem4 f9 L9 {( ~8 U
I am 一个人de精彩, j9 W/ O! C, ~& {; l9 P
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
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发表于 2008-1-17 21:16
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发表于 2008-1-27 12:42
