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I just wrote a poem
+ D& m$ A( w( P4 ~( y) N% PBesides, I'd like to put it in my blog.9 c2 g, M$ w: J
However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem( s2 r; q4 r3 v) g/ x
Thanks a lot!!!. H9 e# G/ r; ]5 }6 O
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7 [6 t" V- G0 X3 n9 b: HFormerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you ! Q( K( D# U/ P% H9 u1 s# \2 y8 ~
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
7 D# J3 c8 y$ Q) O T Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world & t9 ^. k5 `2 D; O4 F, M; P
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me
1 G6 a1 s7 T9 [: T0 G/ k# e Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind 6 c3 f& t: y! ]2 A" ?
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
! q. i! ]7 P# C8 v* |' sHowever, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
/ w: ]# s7 x6 O- ~. M7 ^# y. c somehow I realized you were still in my heart
+ d' |* F' }7 V8 T$ p1 D somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
5 H/ r# U+ ?1 m' H somehow I lost myself inside again
. w( L, K0 ]4 I! X2 |, E) K. B7 xNow, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
8 }1 }- {7 ?, h* w' s; } somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion6 O/ x, r! X% \9 Z ~
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................, f- E8 n# T1 f1 r& r; ^$ J
Basically, I almost finish this poem
/ N) Q3 t' a5 P; M1 l I am 一个人de精彩
6 M4 i! z) B- ?+ Y3 V I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
0 u' D- i# ?1 N8 J0 iBut........
, Q' Y' L& H P( cIronically? Isn't it? |
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